Hey out there everyone! This is an extemely happy teenager who (I hope) has some great ideas for a Sonic adventure/romance series and I'm putting out this to see if you guys will like what's in store from me. So without dragging this out any further, I'd like to show you the Prolouge for my series, Sonic Beyond
F.Y.I. Disclamers: Sonic and Co. belong to SEGA, Sonic Team, and etc...
Nova and Dawn are FC that belong to Rush the Cat
Sonic Beyond: What If...
For the first time in his life, Sonic the Hedgehog was overwhelmed with pain and grief. For what he knew, his world was thrown to ashes, his father was dying in the hospital from some unknown ailement, and his injuries wern't helping him along. And perhaps worst of all, his wife was missing and he knew his youngest daughter was dead. He had nothing left in his life, not even his friends, they were all blown to the corners of his dimention with Chaos Control. 'At least their safe and out of harms way for now...', he thought,' what else do I have left here? My home is demolished to rubble, most of my family is missing and I know that one of my daughters are dead... I, for once in my life, don't know what to do... Maybe that tells me that...'. He trailed off not being able to finish the thought, with tears and self-hatred filling up in his eyes. 'What kind of a father am I? The one time I get caught off guard, I get smashed through a wall and get seperated from my family, who I'm suppost to protect, and I let at least one of my daughters die! Why should I still live if what I live for is protecting the ones I love?' he thought to himself angrily. He then punched a nearby pole and because of how swiftly he moved his fist, put a hole right through it, also crushing his fingers, due to which, he winced in pain, and only glanced at his fingers for a split second. He then pulled out his granfather's old revolver (which he kept in respect for his grandfather because it was the only thing he left behing to his grandson) and held it in his hand looking at it. " I know that if i shoot myself with this thing, I'll be relieved of all my burdens...", he murmered,"... but if I do that I won't be able to fix any of this mess, like how my grandfather used to say I could always fix things with my good heart...". He then looked up and took a look around him with the city of his in a swirling vortex of flames and debris that littered the streets, with a look that looked like it held the world's sorrow. All of a sudden, without warning, he turned the gun on himself and shot himself. Sonic crumpled to the ground to his knees then completly hit the ground. With the last of his strength, he managed to barely say, with a chuckle, "Sorry grandpa, but you can't fix anything when there's nothing left to fix..." Just the he could hear someone shouting his name, with a voice VERY familiar. " N-n-no w-w-ay..." he managed to mumble before everything went black...
And then there was light...
Aaaannd that's it for now. This is the preview of my VERY long series I am statrting to write. I figured I'd post this to see if who out there liked this style of writing and if I should keep it for the story. Reviews are EXTREMELY requested.