So I am a bit wishy-washy on my opinion of DBGT, but i'll be using the some of the same settings, villains, and plots in DBGT, but I am making some changes:
1) my biggest peeve about the series: everyone became pansies. There were times it was like "Hello? YOU CAN FLY!" or "You know how to sense ki dummy!" or "Stop getting tossed around like a idiot and go super saiyan already!" my point: they will not forget these things about themselves, nor will Gohan, Goten, and Trunks be bums who have gotten soft in peaceful times.
2) I am writing to include Jinny, a character I created who is Goten's twin sister and Trunks' girlfriend. If you want to know more about her and Trunks you can read "The Kiss".
3) I am actually having everything take place a bit earlier than it really did: Trunks is 24, Jinny is 23, Pan is 10 and Goku, well he's still the same age he got wished as by Emperor Pilaf
4) There were the small things that would just bug me, like, where did they get alien money from and why do they speak the same language as the aliens and such, I thought of some stuff to explain a few things, but I couldn't think of a good one for the whole language thing. If you all ahve anymore things that happened in DBGT that make no sense that need a fictional explanation, tell me and i'll incorperate it.
I do not own Dragon Ball GT or any except Jinny, who I created. I know this is a short chapter, but this was all I wanted to put and didn't want to add extra pointless fluff. I really hope you enjoy it! :D
Trunks, Jinny, Pan, and Goku set off to go find the black star dragon balls scattered across the universe. After realizing that a part of their ship has been damaged, they have to crash land on Imecka, and it all goes down from there.
Planet Imecka
Chapter 1: Crash Landing
"WARNING. EXTERNAL DAMAGES. WARNING. PREPARE TO CRASH LAND" the ship's computer stated as alarms sounded within the spacecraft.
Red lights flashed frantically as the sirens whaled loudly, echoing within the metal corridors.
"TRUNKS! DO SOMETHING!" Pan screamed.
"Pan hush! You're not helping" Trunks snapped at her as he pressed buttons and pulled levers, preparing for their landing.
"Aunt Jinny! I don't want to die!" Pan cried dramatically.
"Pan. You are not going to die, remember, you wanted to come" Jinny said, turning around from the co-pilot's seat to look at her niece, "Dad, can you talk to your granddaughter? I need to help Trunks" she said to Goku.
"But I'M freaking out too!" said Goku clutching the arm rest of his chair.
"WARNING. CRASH LANDING EMINENT. WARNING. CONTACT IN 30 SECONDS" the computer said, by far the most calm voice in the ship.
A small tan planet came into veiw. The ship began speeding up, ripping straight through the planet's atmosphere. Jinny and Trunks worked at the control board of the ship, preparing for the crash landing.
"WARNING. CONTACT IN 5 SECONDS"
"Brace yourselves everyone!" Trunks yelled.
The ship made contact with the planets rocky terrain, reverberating after the initial landing. Finally the spacecraft stopped, it's four passengers breathing a heavy sigh of relief. They kept quiet and still for a moment, appreciating the stillness.
"Good work Trunks. Crisis averted" Jinny said smiling, "But what exactly happened?"
"I'm not sure. The computer says that one of the ship's external boosters detached from the ship upon takeoff, but I'm sure how. My mom would have checked everything multiple times to make sure everything was perfect..."Trunks said, then slipping into is thoughts.
"That's not important now, we just need to get parts and make repairs" Jinny said, touching his back with her hand affectionately.
"Right" Trunks said looking up at Jinny.
'Yeah but where are we?" Goku stated, hopping out of his seat.
"Computer, Location please" Trunks asked
"LOCATION IDENTIFIED. PLANET IMECKA. ORGANIC LIFEFORMS DETECTED. TEMPERAMENT: UNKNOWN. PRIMARY ECONOMIC ACTIVITY: TRADING AND EXPORTS. CURRENCY: DON KOINS. 1 ZINE = 3.5 DON KOINS. LANGUAGE: DETECTS LINGUISTIC SIMILARITIES. NOW CONVERTING ZINE TO DON KOINS"
"That's cool Trunks! How did the computer know all that?" Goku asked.
"It picks up transmissions sent from the planet and extracts the information it's looking for" Trunks stated, proud of the design.
"Well that's great. Now let's get out of this piece of tin and go look around!" Pan said, making her way to the exit.
"Pan, we need to be weary at first, we're not sure if the people will be hostile to us or not" Jinny said to her niece as she pressed the button opening the door.
"What do we have to worry about with you, Trunks, and Grandpa around?" Pan stated confidently as she began walking down the steps leading to the land.
"Well all these bad guys that keep attacking us have to come from somewhere Pan" Trunks teased as he followed behind her.
"But before we get parts, can we get some food? I'm starving" Goku complained, regarding the stairs and leaping straight onto the surface of Imecka.
"Dad" Jinny sighed as she jumped right behind Goku.
The four saiyan travelers looked around, taking in the view of the alien planet. They flew straight up into the air and caught sight of a distant city and headed forward, unaware of the adventure about to take place.
Da Da Da Da! Stay tuned for another episode of Dragon Ball HW: Harbor's World! lol just kidding :D
