Hey guys, this is my first story and I hope you like it!
(Max)I was flying faster than I have ever flown before, probably 350 miles per hour but I was still being tailed by an extremely fast bunch of flying erasers. Yeah, I know what you're thinking, "I thought all of the erasers were dead" well, you got me on that one. Anyways, even though I was going lightning fast, they were still gaining on me, uh oh. They were less than 20 feet behind me now! I tried to put on a burst of speed but something had my ankle, I looked back at my feet and saw an eraser holding on tight. Crap. The eraser yanked a taser out of his pocket, pointed it at me and pulled the trigger. ZAP!
I woke up; beads of sweat rolling down my face. I looked around, good; the flock was all still there. Man, what a dream. We were staying at the Hyatt hotel in a suit (courtesy of my all expense paid credit card which we found on the streets of New York) with two bedrooms; one with two twin beds, one with a king size, and in the connecting room, with a pullout couch that fit two. We had to do rock, paper, scissors to see who got what bed and with my luck I was the one who got to call the front desk for my luxury, genuine rollaway twin bed. While Fang got the big king size, Iggy and Gazzy got the two twins, and Angel and Nudge slept on the pullout couch.
I sat up and looked at the clock on the stove; it was three o'clock. Great, oh well, I'll just get some water and… Well I don't know just wait for the sun to rise I guess. So I got up and opened the fridge as the hairs on the back of my neck stood up. I grabbed two water bottles and handed one to Fang who was standing behind me smiling. "Come on," he whispered heading back to his glorious master bedroom. We sat on the bed together and he turned on the huge flat screen TV (told you it was glorious). There was nothing on except some cheesy romance movie, we didn't complain, after all, it was better entertainment that hearing Gazzy sing the constipation song. After about ten minutes it was getting quite boring and I was fading in and out of consciousness before I totally I crashed, I glanced over at Fang and saw that he was staring at the screen, mesmerized. I gave a soft laugh then collapsed into Fangs lap sound asleep.
(Fang) I felt a soft thud on my legs and realized that Max had practically passed out on me. I smiled and angled her head in a softer position and stroked her beautiful blonde, streaked hair. I picked up her hand because it looked lonely all by its self and entwined my fingers with hers. I lay back on the pillows with Max right beside me. Now I could sleep easily, just being in her presence was all I needed. I rapped my arm her waist to keep her close and closed my eyes hoping this feeling would never go away.
(Angel) I opened my eyes and quietly crept into the kitchen grabbing myself a bottle of water out of the fridge. I was on my way back to my bed when I saw lights flashing under the crack to Fang's room. I opened the door slightly and saw that Max was laying there with him sleeping. I edged into the room quietly wondering what the flashing was still. I saw it was the TV and turned it off. As I was leaving the room, I noticed something; Max and Fang were holding hands. Finally! They've been thinking about each other for forever about how much they loved the other but didn't know how to tell the other one. Huh, interesting time but ok. Then I climbed into my bed and slid the covers over me. I closed my eyes and almost instantly fell asleep.
(Max) I woke up (this time at a decent hour) and tried to sit up. There was something keeping me down though; Fang was still sleeping but holding my hand in a tight grip. Whoa dear. What was he doing? First he was sucked into a cheesy romance movie, now he was holding my hand while I was sleeping. What was this poor boy getting at? Did he like me, like me? Ugh! So many questions! But what if Fang really was in love with me… I mean I loved him but, as a brother. Like when he kissed me in that cave, I felt something special; it was like we were meant for each other. Afterwards, I realized that it was like kissing your brother! Ew right? Anyways, I hoped this was just a stage and he got over it soon. I slipped my hand carefully out of his grip and edged out of the room, careful not to wake him. I walked over to Iggy and Gazzy's room and peered in to see if they were awake yet. I saw Iggy sitting upright with his eyes still closed. "Iggy," I whispered, trying to get his attention.
His eyelids opened and his sightless eyes flickered towards me, "Max?"
"Yeah, Iggy will you make some breakfast before the kids wake up?"
"Can't you just order room service or something?" He said looking tired.
"Sure, but nobody beats your cooking," I said smiling as I left the room. I picked up the hotel phone and pushed the button that said "room service", it was a long complicated process after that. The person who was taking the order kept asking if I was sure I wanted all this food and of course I was sure, if I wasn't, would I be ordering it??? No, I wouldn't. It took a lot of willpower not to yell at the room service person.
About an hour later there was a knock on the door. I opened it and took the food from the waiter. Oh man, it smelled good! I set the table and put the food on the plates, making it look like a scene from a professional cooking show. Wow you've really out done your self Max, give yourself a nice pat on the back. I thought looking back at my masterpiece. "Breakfast!" I hollered opening the doors to Fang's and Iggy's rooms. Five sleepy looking bird kids stumbled into the kitchen looking astonished (well accept Iggy because well, yeah).
"Whoa Max!" The three younger kids said in unison. They raced to their chairs and started woofing down the food. Iggy gave an Mmmm sound and Fang, well, Fang didn't say anything. I sat down with them and enjoyed the most wonderful breakfast ever.
(Fang) I scraffed down my share of the huge breakfast making sure to leave lots for the kids. I glanced down the table at Max who was brushing Angel's blonde curls out of er face. Oh Max, if only you knew how I felt about you, I wish you felt the same way. I guess we can't all get our wishes, I hope she'll come around soon though. Huh.
(Angel) I looked at Fang and felt bad for him. I sent a though to him saying "I'm sorry Fang".
(Fang) Crap, Angel heard that. Man, it's really hard to keep your thoughts secret around this joint. I didn't really want a six year old tuning in on my thoughts.
(Max) I looked at Fang and caught his eye, I gave a quick smile and he nodded at me. Jesh, what did I have to do to get some emotion out of that boy? 'Um Max, actually Fang is having quite a bit of emotion. He really, really loves you a lot' Angel chimmed in. Wow, didn't see that one coming. Oh Max, you know you two are crazy about each other. Ok not now Jeb, I really don't need your opinion. Ugh! Yeah, two people listening in on my thoughts, would I ever have a privet conversation?! I mean just me talking to myself in my head or at least something like that? Aparently not.
I thought we should get moving so as to not stay in one place long enough for people to find out who we were. So we were on our way to California from our nice stay at the Hyatt in Colorado. The flock was very excited about it because they all had things in mind that they wanted to do. Angel, Gazzy, and Nudge voted on Disney Land, Iggy and Fang voted on the beach; no doubt for the bikinies (sexist pigs), and well me, LA can't be too bad; surfing, malls with cute shoes, and the wide open ocean. We went to Disney Land first and that was much the same as when we went in Florida; Total posed as Iggy's guid dog, and it was extremely crowded; the usual squeemishness from being surrounded by hundreds of people, nothing new. Next, we went to the beach, but first we had to all needed swimming suits so we went to a little surf shop neer the shore. "Ok guys," I said. "Pick out a suit guys."
They all rummaged around the racks looking for theirs size. Fang had a black one in his hands and handed a blue one to Iggy. They headed back to the changing rooms as Angel came up to me, "Hey Max, look at this one!" She said holding up a pink one piece with a tutu.
"That's really pretty sweetie," I said smilling at her. "Why don't you go try that on?"
I myself was looking through a rack and luck me, all they had in my size were bikinies. Oh boy, Fang would never let me live it down if I actually wore one of these. There were pink ones, flower ones, tiedie ones, and wait, a blue one with surf shorts! Yes! I glanced around for Nudge and Gazzy and saw that to no surprise Gazzy had picked out a pair of camo trunks and Nudge a purple one piece with a black zipper down the front. I motioned them towards the dressing roomes and we all perchased our new swim suits and headed to the beach.
I sat under an umbrella in the shade watching the kids play. Fang was discribing the beach to Iggy and then led him down to the water. Fang came back up the beach and sat next to me whistling at me in my swimsuit. I rolled my eyes and gave him one of my signature 'you wana try that again and live to tell the tale' looks. Just then a really cute guy walked by; probably my age maybe a little older.
(Fang) The way Max just looked at that weiner who walked past us hurt. She never looked at me that way. Just then, Mr. Weiner came back over and looked at Max, "Hi I'm Kevin," he said holding out a hand for Max to shake.
She took it and said, "Hey, I'm Max."
"Uh Max, me and some friends were playing volley ball and we needed another player and well it didn't seem like you were doing anything and we wanted to know if you'd like to play." I raised my eyebrows at Mr. Weiner and it seemed to startle him. Good. "Unless you're spending time with your uh, boyfriend." Yeah I wish.
Max blushed and said, "No, he's not my boyfriend. He's my uh, brother. Yeah, he's my brother," she looked at me as if for help but I just shrugged. "Ok I'll come, F'Nick keep an eye on the kids alright?" Max said standing up to go with the guy. Great, this is turning into another Sam story. I sighed and nodded watching her leave, wishing that it was me leading her down the beach.
It's kind of a cliff hanger ending but please review it tell me what you think! I'll take any ideas feel free give! Signed, HockeyLuver