REVISED (5/06/19): Fix some of the sentences in the chapter. Smoother to read.
New story, new life.
Well, new story 'revision' to be exact.
Since I don't really have any reviews to answer to at the moment, I don't have anything to share. And that means I'll sit here hoping to start a conversation with someone who's looking at their computer screen...
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...Uhh, so how the weather?
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Okay I'm starting the chapter.
Story Title: Brothers and Sisters (Revised)
Genre: Adventure/Humor
Rating: T
Summary: Marco Diaz is your average teenage boy with an older brother that never seems to shut his mouth. Their lives were filled with peace and arguments until two strange princess' decide to drop into their school. How will they face two sisters of a royal family as they get forced to take care of them?
Introduction To Destruction [1-2]
"Star!" A feminine voice shouted from a room. "That's my dress! Take it off!"
Ahh, yet another wonderful day here in Mewni. Farmers growing crops that are seemingly impossible to make; like pumpkins that can talk and corn with wings. People of various positions like peasants and knights coming to the Royal castle to see our lovingly dangerous Star Butterfly get the family wand. And of course, lets not forget the fighting of the two Butterfly sisters inside their room as they try to get properly dressed for the important event. As a sixteen year-old teenage girl tries to get her dress off her fourteen year-old sister, havoc ensures.
Who is this sixteen year-old lady you might ask? Well it is none other than Scarlett Butterfly. An woman with red hair that slashes her way through trouble. Having inherited one of the family's greater weapons, her sword-fighting powers are second to none. Her long silk hair that reaches her shoulder blades, her slim body that is able to evade most attacks and get the attention of men, and those blue oceanic eyes that drown her enemies in fear. Not only is she good with fighting, she is also good with looks.
"No!" Star replied. "I don't want to wear that stupid blue dress that mom gave me! It looks so boring!"
Well, boring is not the proper term to describe it. It's more on bland and formal rather than boring to say at least. The dress was a blue dress with those circle-ly thingies on your arms to make it look like they're balls just sitting on your shoulders (sorry, idk what it's called). She also got a vest along with it, which deflated Star even more; if she wasn't already unimpressed by the dress already. Meanwhile, Scarlett's dress was a blood red gown that reached her feet and had a holster for her sword. And, it didn't have a vest to go along with it! Which made Star jealous of the clothes Scarlett was given in comparison to hers.
"Trying to look formal isn't boring, Star." She argued before trying to reach for her dress before failing. "And will you give me that already!?"
"Can't you wear mine for today at least?" Star pleaded; wanting her sister to say yes.
"No." Star then looked disappointed, she then started replacing her clothes. "One, it's not the right size. Two, I'm not really into blue; which is why I asked mom to get me a red version of that gown. And three...it looks boring."
"See?!" Star accused. "I told you it looked boring!"
"And proper for the occasion." She added with a sly smirk before putting on her dress.
*Knock* *Knock*
"Who's there?" Scarlett asked as she slightly opened the door to see one of the staff stand before them. "Hi, can I help with something?"
"Yes my highness." A man from the other side of the door answered. "But it is not me you're helping, it's you."
"And what does that mean?"
"It means that you're already an hour and a half late to the event, your highness."
Star and Scarlett froze before looking each at each other like they're deers in a headlight.
"WHAT!?"
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"Are you sure those two haven't killed one another yet?" The king named River Butterfly asked his wife. "I mean, with the dress you got for our little blonde one and the one you got for Scarlett, I heavily doubt that Star would be willing to wear her dress."
"It would be very expected if Scarlett does use her sword on Star." The queen named Moon Butterfly answered. "With her short temper and the mobility of her attacks, your theory might be extremely plausible."
In the spacious meeting hall of the castle, were the two parents of the royal daughters and people from around the village. Since both Butterfly sisters were running late for the event, some people resorted to talking to other civilians and some even left to do something worth their time. The number change of the mewmen in the room were quite drastic to say at least. Because the meeting hall went from about two thousand or more mewmen before going into around nine hundred.
Talk about impatience.
As more people were about to leave the castle, the doors leading to the inside of the hall busted open with a loud crash. Everyone looked to the door to see both Star and Scarlett looking like they went to hell and back. Their hair were all over the place and made them look like rockstars from the 80's, the dress they were wearing were covered in what seems to be multiple types of food ranging from fruits to ham and were torn so much in which it was barely hiding their hips. Star wasn't as affected with the predicament as much as Scarlett; who loved the dress as much as she loved Star. And lastly, they had a scent that made them smell like death itself. If death had a nose, it would rather kill itself than smell the two sisters.
"What happened to you two?!" Moon asked them; concerned and outraged.
"It's a long story." Star casually answered before walking up to their parents. "We bumped into a couple of things before we got here."
"A couple?!" Scarlett twitched her eye. "We got hit in the face by doors that didn't want to be opened, We almost got stabbed in the weapons room because you said that it was a shortcut. We went to the dining hall and ran on the tables and ruined everyone's meals and appetites. We ended up inside the barn because you got lost in the castle and decided to go outside instead, I think I have manure sticking on the soles of my shoes while you ended up getting poured with a bucket of milk all over your body, and then we ended up here!"
I think we can all agree that they didn't get hit by a couple ofthings...
"I knew you two wouldn't get here without causing trouble to everyone including yourselves." Moon simply sighed. "Let's just make this quick so our family honor isn't as damaged than it already is."
"So, Star." River suddenly cut in the conversation. "Since you are deemed old and responsible enough-"
"YEAH RIGHT!" The crowd watching them sarcastically remarked in unison.
River started sweating before coughing. "As I was saying, since you're deemed old and responsible enough to be a proper princess. Your mother and I decided to hand over her wand to you."
"WHAT?!" Scarlett shouted; outraged. "Why does she get mom's wand while I get your sword?!"
"Ask that to your mother." River then passed the heat to Moon; who was sweating profusely. "I had no idea why she chose to give the wand to Star instead of you."
"Ehehem..." She wiped the sweat of her face before regaining her composure. "Anyways, you must be responsible when using the wand and-"
"Yeah, yeah, yeah, I got it!" Star quickly said as she tried to snatch the wand, only to fail.
"Star! You must take this seriously!" Moon hand a hand on Star's face in order to keep her from snatching the wand once again. "Like a wise man had said, with great power, comes great responsibility.
"Gotcha!" Star then managed to get a hold of the wand and stares at it in awe. The second she held the family wand in her hands was the second it began to transform. The wand went from beautifully elegant to extremely child-like. The wand looked more like a toy rather than a dangerous item that holds power to destroy the whole world if wanted to be perfectly honest with you. With star-shaped eyes, Star continued to breathe and stare at the wand in awe. "Woah..."
"So unfair..." Scarlett sighed inside her head.
"Now, did you remember to read the instructional book I gave you last night?" Moon asked; constantly sweating since she didn't want Star to say no.
"Of course I did!" Moon then breathed in relief, before...
"Let me try one now! I think it goes like...ooh! I remember! Mystic Lava Waterfall!"
"WAIT WHAT?!"
Lava then came out of the wand in waves; literally.
"W-wait! I can fix this!" Star stuttered as she tried to think of a spell on the back of her head. "I got it! Super Geyser Windstorm!"
The wand stopped pouring waves of lava and got replaced by tsunamis instead. No joke, the meeting hall was literally covered in so much water that it somehow managed to reach the ceiling. And that place isn't small either! And, uhh, was there something I'm forgetting...?
"Swim to the door and open it!"
Oh yeah, everyone was drowning as well.
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"I blame you for this." Scarlett grumbled to Star as she picked up some of her belongings.
After the waves of water finally went outside of the town of Mewni, the townspeople created a revolution of how the Butterfly Sisters need to be sent away from the city because of the dangers they're causing. They created the revolution in an hour and River decided to send the two sisters away in the same time frame.
Needless to say, both siblings were not happy with the news.
Both sisters felt betrayed being kicked out from the place they grew in. Even though River kept saying that "It's only a suspension from the castle, you'll be okay in the dimension called Earth!", they still felt like they were being kicked out. With a deep sigh, Star picked up her belongings as well and stored it in the back of the chariot they were supposed to ride. After a couple minute of packing, the sisters up and ready to finally go to this so-called 'Earth'.
"Let's just hope that we can find someone that will be willing to take care of them." River whispered to his wife. "And isn't making them sign up for school by themselves a little bit too much?"
"Don't worry, River." Moon smiled at her husband. "I'm sure someone can tolerate those two with the destruction that they usually cause. Star is with Scarlett, so I assure you that they can sign up for school by themselves."
"But what about the boys there?" River asked, but got a giggle from Moon in response.
"What about them?" Moon rhetorically asked. "Star, a girl that is very unlady-like and destroys everything by walking around the neighborhood. You think she'll get the attention of the males there? Scarlett, a princess whose known for being one of the fighters of the castle and has a tough attitude that she carries around all the time. You think she has time for boys?"
"I'm very concerned about your opinion on our daughter's romantic lives."
"Don't worry, River." She assured once again. "Worse case scenario is our two girls falling in love with men that they like, right?"
"I don't know about that, my love." River sighed. "I have this feeling... And I'm sure it's not my stomach acting up again..."
So, What'd you think.
I kinda had to replace Eudora with Scarlett since I didn't want her to blend to much into the background (Which Eudora did a lot). Eudora was more of a quiet girl in the corner while Scarlett was more straightforward, which was what I wanted. I did change some parts of the introduction of Star since I didn't want to use the show's intro over and over again, because it was getting pretty redundant.
Lastly, I do have a surprise that I will show you in the next chapter, so keep an eye on that.
Reviews are love. Please leave a review about the story (OR NOT) so I can actually get help with a couple of outlining problems I currently have with the revision of the story. The review can be a compliment, complaint, suggestion, constructive/criticism.
That's all for now and I will see you in the next chapter.
Crazyman out.
