Hey, fanwriters, Monakyfun here to wish all of you a Happy New Year 2K7. I'm here to start a new story to start a new year. Did you remember the Care Bears in the 80's? Yes, the Care Bears and they're on the mission to help a young 8 year old named Michael because he didn't have any friends or spending a time with his Father until a evil being is gonna ruined everything. Can they stopped him before careness gone forever? Find out on...
THE CARE BEARS and the Mystery of Evil Heart Part 1
Story and Written by: moi
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Our story begins on a gloomy morning in the threachous dark clouds with lightning at the Dark Castle where evil and uncareness never given it a happy face. A evil King is still ruled the whole evil Kingdom named EVIL HEART! He's about to wake up now.
"Ah. What a glommy morning I ever seen. No more careness, no more joyfulness. No more Care Bears."
Suddenly, one of his boys named IP came to see the King.
"Hey, you Majesty, and how you been in this gloomious morning today?"
Evil Heart said, "Better than I ever unhoped for."
IP said to him, "Well, I got some unfortunate news to tell you. Look outside."
They saw a cloudcar moving faster away from the evil Kingdom. He shouts, "WHAT!" Yes. It's the Care Bears, well, three of them, TenderHeart Bear, BraveHeart Lion and BrightHeart Raccoon were on a mission to saved someone to be cared. The King said in anger.
"Is those drateful Care Bears again. On a mission to make someone care again. Oh, how I lothe all of them."
IP said as a suggestion for the King, "Hmm. They're up to something. Why don't you see the Mystic Crystal?"
King said, "Excellent idea."
They're entering the Evil Chambers and the Mystic Crystal is commencing out of the floor and starts activating. Evil Heart said.
"Oh, Mystic Crystal, show me what's going on."
The Mystic Crystal shows them the whole picture when TenderHeart Bear said to his friends.
"Well, guys, someone's in trouble and he's not caring anymore. Let's see."
Brave Heart Lion said, "Hmm. There he is! A baseball game is already started. A boy looks like he's not confident to swing."
Bright Heart Raccoon said, "He's named is Michael Williamson. His Father is the Coach of his son's team. Jeffrey Williamson. By the look of his face, he's upset from his son."
"That's what I think. We better land over there. HANG ON!" TenderHeart said.
They landed on the bushes while the coach said to his son. "COME ON, SON, YOU CAN DO IT!"
The crowd is cheering and the players were shouting his name and said you could do it and come on at the same time until the pitcher threw the last pitch and Michael swings but the ball passing his bat and he struck...
"STRIKE 3! YOU'RE OUT!" The Umpire shouts.
All the fans and Michael's team players were disappointed and Michael saw his Dad getting mad for losing the game his son mopes. His Father said to Michael.
"Son, what's the matter with you? I teach you everything to play Baseball but all that wasted. What am I gonna do with you?"
Michael said when he mopes with sobbing, "I'm sorry, Dad. I tried my best to make a home run. Guess I'm less confident to hit."
His Father said, "Confidence won't make much difference. All we need is to win the game not losing. Come on, son, let's go home."
Michael said, "But, Dad..." His Dad said, "No buts, son, let's just go."
Later they're inside the Van and leaving the Greenburg Ballpark and into the town of Greenburg, Pennslyvania. Going back home with disappointment and the Care Bears pops out of the bushes and TenderHeart Bear said to his Care Bear Family.
"Poor Michael. He lost a game and his Father didn't care of him at all. Now, he has no one to care for him anymore."
"Well, we'll pay him for a visit tonight, Tender Heart. Then, we'll get everything striaghten out including his Father." Bright Heart Raccoon.
"You always popping ideas out of your bright head, Bright Heart", Brave Heart Lion said.
"Natrually." Bright Heart said.
The Mystic Crystal's picture disappeared and Evil Heart is laughing evilly and said, "Those fuzzy wuzzies think they can help him. But not what I'm around. IP, get some my fellow evil comparades and go to Michael's home. And remember, no screw ups. Got it?"
"Got it, you Majesty." SMACK! He got smack on the left door when Evil Heart said, "The other door." IP said when his nose bends, "Sorry, sir. Ow." He immediately leaving the Kingdom along with Evil's friends named Glump, Mantel and Citan. Meanwhile at Michael's home, it's nighttime he's ready to go back to bed when his Father is doing his straigies to prepared for another game but he didn't pay attention to his son. Michael waltz to his Dad's room and said to him.
"Uhh, Dad. Can I come in?"
His Dad said, "I'm extremely busy. What did you want?"
His son said, "Are you still mad at me, Dad? I tried my best. In the words of sportsmanship, always having fun not winning."
His Dad isn't that amsued so he continues his straigies for the upcoming game and ignoring his son at the same time. His son sighs and mad at the same time so he eventually going back to his room and said.
"If my Dad don't like me anymore. (sniffs) I..I..run away forever."
The Care Bears gasps and hides back inside the bushes. Michael makes a cloth rope and climbing down on the ground safely and going away never return crying his eyes out. The Care Bears pops out of the bushes while TenderHeart Bear said.
"Come on, Care Bears! We got to stop him before it's too late!"
They're running faster to stop Michael before he's making a big mistake. Suddenly, IP and the evil others saw him and stopping Michael to help him. IP said to them.
"HEY, FELLAS! LOOK! THERE'S THAT KID! AND HE'S RUNNING AWAY FROM HOME!"
Glump said to them, "LET'S HELP HIM OUT WITHOUT THOSE STUPID FUZZY WUZZIES!"
Mantel said, "ARE WE GONNA BE PAID FOR THIS JOB?"
They said, "SHUT UP!"
Michael still crying his eyes out until IP and the evil others are landed on the ground safely. Michael stopped, gasped and said to them.
"Who are you?"
"Well, I'm IP and that's Citan, Glump and the dumb one is Mantel." Ip said.
"Yep. That's me. DUP! DUP! DUP! HA HA HA HA!" He said.
IP commands him to, "Shut up." and said, "Anyway, kid, I mean, Michael, we know you're troubled. But we can help you."
Suddenly...
"NO WAY, JOSES! WE'RE THE ONES WHO CAN HELP MICHAEL NOT YOU GUYS!" BraveHeart said.
"ON, NO! IT'S THE FUZZY WUZZIES! THE CARE BEARS!" Glump said.
"The Care Bears? Who are the Care Bears?" Michael asks.
"We are the Care Bears. I'm Tender Heart Bear, he's BraveHeart Lion and that's Bright Heart Raccoon. And we're here to help you." Tender Heart said.
IP asks, "BUG OFF, FREAKS! WE'RE HERE FIRST!"
"I think I got a idea. Listen." Bright Heart said and they're whispering about a idea to save Michael and stopping the evil beings before he's in trouble.
"BREAK!" They shout and ready to play staireball game. "It's time to play Staireball! Care Bears, let's get them our ultimate surprize!"
"RIGHT!" Both of them said. "GO!" All of them said and they're moving back and fourth. IP shouts, "GET THEM!" They use their evil magic to stop the Care Bears but they're moving so quickly they can't concentrate. "HOLD STILL, FOOLS!" Suddenly, they stopped and the evil beings were ready to get them.
"GOOD-BYE, FOOLS!"
Until they're ready to stair. Tender Heart Bear shouts, "STAIRE!" Brave Heart Lion shouts, "CARE BEAR COUSINS, CALL!"
The power of love and kindess weakens Evil Heart's minions and one of them said. "Too powerful. So much caring. Boys, let's get out of here!" IP agreed with one of them, "AGREED! RETREAT! RETREAT! WE'LL BE BACK FOR YOU!" They disappeared into thin air and going back to the Dark Castal to alert their King. The Care Bears were cheering.
"YEAH! WE DONE IT! ALL RIGHT!"
Michael said, "YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME! Thank you for saving me but who were those guys?"
"Beats us." BraveHeart Lion said. "We don't know who's evil is. It's something different." Bright Heart Raccoon said. "We better get back to Care-A-Lot and tell the others."
"Can I come? Please?", Michael asks. "I don't know, Michael. Running away won't solve your problems. It's just get worse. Your Father will be worry sick." Tender Heart said.
"My Father cares about Baseball but not me. (sighs) I just wish I could have a friend to help me. (sniffs)" Both of them shakes their heads "yes". Tender Heart said to Michael. "Why not? We need some.." Suddenly, the cloud car came with Swift Heart Rabbit and she said, "Transportation, anyone? Who's that, guys?"
TenderHeart Bear said, "Swift Heart Rabbit, this is Michael and he's running away from home." She said, "Oh, poor kid. Well, all of us need more care to help you out. Come on. Hop aboard. Heh heh." They're leaving Greenburg to Care-A-Lot to figure out the evil problem. Meanwhile back at the Dark Castal, his evil beings came back without the kid. "You here already? Where's the kid?" the King said.
"Uh, you see, the Care Bears overpowering us all. They got the kid. They must've taken him to..." IP was finishing his explaination until the King pow IP's head. He already knows where they're heading. "CARE-A-LOT!" IP said, "That's what I said." The King said, "If the Care Bears know Michael's problem, my plan will failed". Mantel said, "How about disguising ourselves like those star creeps and capturing Michael before they knowed?" The King was about to smack him down, "You...are a genious. Go to Care-A-Lot and bring the kid right here. UNDERSTAND!" All of them said to him, "As you wish, you mean mightiness." They immediately leaving the evil Kingdom as Star creatures while laughing evilly. Meanwhile at the Care-A-Lot Kingdom, they have a conference of Michael's problem with his Father and the evil being doing something evil.
"And that's the whole story, Noble Heart. If we bring him home we will failed our mission."
Noble Heart Horse said, "Very well. Since he has no friends to care he can stay as long as it takes. By the way, where is he?"
Grumpy Bear said, "Look over there, guys. He's playing with Baby Hugs and BabyTugs."
"There. We got ourselves a Cloud Care Bear." Michael said. Baby Hugs said, "Hmm. Is need something for that face. Ha. I got it. A heart-shaped nose."
Baby Tugs said when she hugs Baby Hugs, "Oh, Baby Hugs, you're so smart. Oh, almost forgotten something. A heart. There. Now, it's finished." Then, Michael hugging both of them and the Care Bears were smiling.
True Heart Bear said, "Maybe a little bit longer if his Father thinks he's running away."
Meanwhile back at Michael's House, his Father said to him when he's not around, "Okay, kid, time to go back to bed. Huh? MICHAEL! Why did he run away? I'm gonna do something to him when I find him." He drove away to find him but it isn't easy. Meanwhile back at Care-A-Lot, Michael's having fun as much just like at his hometown if they could care for him. Wish Bear is still looking at Earth with her starscope until the new awfully looking star creatures flying around faster and they're waving at Wish Bear and moving pretty fast. Wish Bear said, "Hmm. Those stars are partically moving faster at nighttime. (yawn) Time to hit the hey." She's taking her starscope and going back to bed.
IP said, "Did you hear that? She's getting tired so does the little dummies, too. Which means..." Mantel said something stupid, "Maybe we should go back to bed, too, huh?" IP spinning Mantel like crazy. "YAHHHHHHHHHHH!" IP said to him, "No, we'll get the kid for the King. That's all." Mantel said, "I need some snooze. Also a bedtime story, too." The villains smacking him silly. Later that night, all the Care Bear Cub and Cousins were asleep so does Michael, too. The villians were entering to Michael's room until they saw him sleeps with Baby Hugs and Baby Tugs but IP gots idea after Citan said something. "What are we gonna do? We can't get the kid now. Those brats will alert those bears."
"I got a idea. You guys hold this sack while I lorde him away from there. Okay?" He said and they said, "Right."
Michael yawns and getting up from his bed leaving Baby Hugs and Baby Tugs in bed and he's getting a drink of water in the kitchen until IP besides the refrigerator gonna get Michael until he opened the door IP got smackdown from the refrigerator leaving him laid off the floor. Citan, Mantel and Glump were laughing softly from IP's embrassment. Michael's done drinking and putting his cup on the table he's going back to bed. IP is up and flying faster to get the kid until he's flying faster pasting him. THUD! He lands on a cloudy bush. In the words of Dick Dastardly on Wacky Races, "DRAT! DRAT! DRAT! AND DOUBLE DRAT AND DRAT!"
Citan said, "I can't take much more of this. LET'S GET HIM!" They flew to get him and struggling to grab the kid and zooming fast back outside and Citan said, "WE GOT THE KID! WE GOT THE KID!" IP said, "Good. Let's get out of here." They're shape-shifting into valtures and flew away from Care-A-Lot. Unfortunately, they got the wrong kid because he's still inside. Michael said, "Oh, man, what a rough excercise. Baby Hugs? Baby Tugs? OH, NO! THOSE BIRDS GOT 'EM! I got to tell the others."
Can the Care Bears saved Baby Hugs and Baby Tugs from the evil cluthes of Evil Heart? Can his Father changed his ways to care for Michael again? Those questions will be answered on the next chapter. Review my story so more chapters yet to come. See ya!
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