Prologue: A Sun Is Born
This is my frst story, so plz be nice with reviews! BTW, it takes place after the season 3 finale. What do u think, Bella-chan? (She's my friend and beta, omgponiez)
A pink alicorn held up her new daughter wit her magic. The newborn flly had a deep orange coat and a yelow and blue mane lik her mothers. She blinked open her dark pink eyes like roses and loked at her mom, Princess Cadance.
"Shes almost as gorges as you, dear." said Shining Armor, seeing his new filly for the first time. "And shes an alicorn, too! I didnt know that was even posible!" "Neither did I." said a voice from bhind them. "Your Highness!" Shining Armor gasped.
Celestia, Luna, and Twilit were there to see the new princess! "My books all say that magic creates alcorns, not ponies." Twilight said. "Apparantly, they were wrong." Luna sighed. "What did you nam her?" Celestia asked. "Sundance." Cadance replied.
"That is a good name." Celestia nodded. "Very well. All hail Princess Sundance!"
Does it lok good? plz tell me any mistakes I made in reviews!
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