This story follows a slightly different plotline than the Warriors series.
Firestar franticly ran towards Thunderpath. If Cloudtail had been telling the truth, one of the apprentices was dying there. And it could also be a spy from another clan.
As he got closer, he saw which apprentice it was, a young red-orange tom named Foxpaw. Foxpaw had a habit of running off and getting in to trouble. Once, he got chased by a badger and led it into Shadowclan territory.
After Foxpaw had somewhat recovered, Firestar dragged him back to camp and right to Cinderpelt's den.
"What happened?" Cinderpelt immediately asked when Foxpaw was brought to her.
"He was attacked by a monster on Thunderpath," replied Firestar. "Will he live?"
"I don't know, but if he does, he will be blind and may never become a warrior. You should give him a warrior name just in case."
"Foxpaw, you will now become Brokeneye. If you live, I will one day give you a better warrior name. But if you die, you will journey to Starclan as Brokeneye."
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A few hours later, Cinderpelt informed Firestar that Brokeneye would live.
"Brokeneye will never be able to see," Said Cinderpelt. "But all of his other wounds will heal."
Firestar went to see Brokeneye, whom had just regained consciousness.
"W-will I ever become a warrior, Firestar?" Brokeneye asked.
"Probably not, Brokeneye." Replied Firestar solemnly. "But you will be able to help the elders, kits and queens around camp. And you will still be a valued member of the clan."
Brokeneye sighed. He was never going to be a warrior. He minds well go to the Twolegs place and become come a kittypet. He just wanted to die.
Chapter 1 was kind of short, but chapter 2 will be longer. Please review.