1 Bad karma
By: Jedi and, the angel of death
Disclaimer: I own nothing of SSX Tricky (I wish I did though)
Chapter one: why?
Marty was standing at the window of a Canadian hospital. The snow was falling, the birds where singing, it was a nice day and most of the people outside where happy. All accept him. He had been waiting there for two days, ever since the accident.
1.1 Accident? More like an attack. I'll get that bastard Phymon.
"Sir?" a nurse came round the corner, Marty barley acknowledged her,
"What?" he said in a cold German accent.
"You can go in now. She's still unconscious though…" he nodded and walked past her. The room was gloomy, only natural light came in though the window to that dark place. He looked down at the bed.
Kaori, why you? You where so lively, so full of energy, now you barley move. Why didn't I protect you? I tried. Even though I know there were nothing I could do, nothing I could have done, I… I still… I still feel guilty, the pain of gilt. It's unbearable at times.
He felt a tear roll down his cheek as he stared at the lifeless body of the young Japanese girl.
"I sorry Marty" he sun round as quickly as possible.
"Brodi?" the tall man was stood in the door,
"I know this must be hard for you, but you must think positively. Bad karma can only make things worse."
You don't have to feel guilty. I was right behind her, I could have saved her, you couldn't you were to far behind to do anything but watch.
"As a Buddhist I do not cling on to things, so I can not even imagine the pain you are going through."
You think?
The young nurse came back in "sorry gentlemen, I have to ask that you leave she needs her rest." They both concurred, Brodi left strait away but Marty turned around.
"See you later Kaori" he stroked her hair before leaving the nurse to do her job.
So? What do you think? I want to know if you guys like it so I can see if I should continue it. Email is preferable but the review page work fine.
By: Jedi and, the angel of death
Disclaimer: I own nothing of SSX Tricky (I wish I did though)
Chapter one: why?
Marty was standing at the window of a Canadian hospital. The snow was falling, the birds where singing, it was a nice day and most of the people outside where happy. All accept him. He had been waiting there for two days, ever since the accident.
1.1 Accident? More like an attack. I'll get that bastard Phymon.
"Sir?" a nurse came round the corner, Marty barley acknowledged her,
"What?" he said in a cold German accent.
"You can go in now. She's still unconscious though…" he nodded and walked past her. The room was gloomy, only natural light came in though the window to that dark place. He looked down at the bed.
Kaori, why you? You where so lively, so full of energy, now you barley move. Why didn't I protect you? I tried. Even though I know there were nothing I could do, nothing I could have done, I… I still… I still feel guilty, the pain of gilt. It's unbearable at times.
He felt a tear roll down his cheek as he stared at the lifeless body of the young Japanese girl.
"I sorry Marty" he sun round as quickly as possible.
"Brodi?" the tall man was stood in the door,
"I know this must be hard for you, but you must think positively. Bad karma can only make things worse."
You don't have to feel guilty. I was right behind her, I could have saved her, you couldn't you were to far behind to do anything but watch.
"As a Buddhist I do not cling on to things, so I can not even imagine the pain you are going through."
You think?
The young nurse came back in "sorry gentlemen, I have to ask that you leave she needs her rest." They both concurred, Brodi left strait away but Marty turned around.
"See you later Kaori" he stroked her hair before leaving the nurse to do her job.
So? What do you think? I want to know if you guys like it so I can see if I should continue it. Email is preferable but the review page work fine.