Tris and Four were sitting in dauntless compound.
"Come on Tris, just one date?" asked Four.
I said, "Fine, Four but I get to pick the place."
"Where might that place be'' Four said.
"How bout Donvans'' I said.
"Sounds good" he said.
Four takes his keys and leaves the door open on the way out. "Gosh, I hate when he does that!" I get into bed I think about my date with Tobias and how nothing can go wrong. When I woke up, I took a shower and brushed my teeth. I looked in the mirrior and I said to myself "Oh,my hair looks terrible." I decided that I should just put it in a bun. I grabbed my black leggings and black t-shirt and put them on. I put on my favorite black combat boots. I walked out the door but I ran back and grabbed an apple first. I closed the door behind me.
"Just the girl I was looking for" Tobias said.
"Should we walk or take a cab?"said Tobias.
"I think we should take a walk. It's more peaceful."
Tobias laces his hands with mine. When we got Donvans, the was line long. Donvans had become popular over night. There was a sign directly above the name of the store. Tobias pointed to the sign "Look, the sign said Donvans fortunes really come true."
"Tobias, you really don't believe this mumbo jumbo," I said.
"Maybe" Tobias said. Someone began tapping my shoulder. When I turned around, I saw a frail old lady.
"Yes m'am" I say sweetly.
"Deary, the fortunes really do come true. So I would advise you not to open any of the fortune cookies." said the old woman said.
"Yeah right!" I said.
"Suit yourself!" she says.
We walk in we get seated right away. "What can I get you guys" the waitress says. I answered that we will have two Dr. Peppers.
"I'll have the chow mein with the fortune cookie." I said.
"I'll have what the lady is having" Tobias said.
"Ok" the waitress said.
The old woman slowly walks up to the table. "I warned you girly and now you will have to pay the price" she said.
"What is she talking about Tris?" Tobias said sounding concerned.
I look at Tobias and say "It's nothing!"
I turned to the old lady and said curtly, "NOW SHOO!" The old woman walked away.
"Your food is ready" the waitress said.
" I"ll open my cookie first " I said uneasy.
"Ok" Tobias said.
As I open it I think I made a mistake. But I started opening it so I guess I should finish it. The words read "YOUR LIFE IS IN DANGER! TELL NO ONE FOR YOU MAY PAY THE PRICE." I think back to what the old lady said. Could this be so. Then, the words fade away from the paper. I hear in my head the creepy voice of the old lady "I warned you girly," as my world fades away.
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