This stories been going around in me head for a while so here it goes tell me what you think in reviews. sorry that this chapter is short

Chapter one. the fall of the saiyan race

Two people walked through a corridor the first was a tall man with black hair standing on end with a red headband around his forehead and a green devise on his left eye and a cross scar under the same eye wearing a dark blue and green battle armor with red arm and leg bands and a brown tail around his waist like a belt. Next to him stood a women who came up to his shoulder she had spiky black hair and was wearing a sleeveless black bodysuit and green combat armor with pink arm bands unlike her counterpart her tail swayed freely. The air around them was grave as they walked outside to a open area the man turned to the woman who had a look of uncertainty. To ease her worry the man pulled her into a hug that she returned and said. "I understand the worry but for kakarot and our people's legacy to survive we have to do this Gine."

Gine hugged him tighter and said as tears fell from her eyes. "I understand Bardock." Then pulling back she said with a look of determination. "Once you get into the atmosphere hit the button to launch the ship. I'll distract the monster for as long as I can."

Bardock quickly pulled Gine back and kissed her deeply before stepping back. With a nod of his head energy surrounded him as he flew into the air heading for space. Stealing herself energy surrounded Gine as she launched herself forward as a giant monkey in similar armor was slammed to the ground in front of her with a giant white bone spike jammed in its head with a large grey man shaped creature with white bone spikes landed next to it and charged her.

As Bardock reached the upper atmosphere he saw a round ship surrounded by a large number of aliens of various shapes and sizes. Pressing the button on his scouter he quickly charged forward and elbowed a red alien in the face with his left arm. Then with his right hand he quickly sent a energy blast threw the red alien and a few feet away were it exploded killing a large number of the aliens. Moving quickly he hit , kicked and sent energy blasts into the aliens killing them quickly and moving on to the next as fast as he could. After a few minutes a large ship the size of a house and the shape of a sphere went past them. Any aliens that tried to attack the ship met a quick end at Bardocks hands or energy blasts. Once the ship was clear of the aliens it disappeared moving at speeds faster then light. Seeing his job done Bardock quickly headed for the aliens mother ship and shouted in anger as he neared the ship. "Frieza." A hatch on the top of the ship opens revealing a small long tailed humanoid being with a large chestnut shaped skull with two horns sticking out of his skull and a purple section in the middle of his head and white skin wearing a pink full body suit with lines threw it with purple armor with yellow shoulder pads, arm and leg guards over it. This being was sitting in a chair smiling as Bardock yelled as he swiped his right arm in front of him. "Frieza you bastard because of you the Saiyan race is almost extinct."

The small alien chuckles and says. "I know watching Doomsday beat your whole species to death these past five years has been my favorite form of entertainment." Then smiling cruelly he continues as he points his finger up and creates a orb of yellow energy. "If your former king only surrendered and served me I would have allowed your race to evacuate your children when you tried to. Instead of me shooting them out of the sky."

Bardock smiled angrily as he created a blue orb of energy and said. "Surrender." Then as he threw the orb at Frieza he shouted. "Saiyans never surrender." But Frieza laughed as his energy orb grows completely destroying Bardocks and sends it towards both bardock, the planet and some of his unfortunate soldiers. As the energy consumes Bardock his physic power kicks in and Bardock sees the future. What he sees brings a smile to his face despite the pain from the energy. His son in similar battle armor to his standing next a man with black hair wearing a blue suit with a S shield on the front ready to fight a grey man with blue armor with glowing red eyes. His son sitting with his arm around a blond haired woman's shoulders as they look down on a planet from a window. His son in battle with men wearing red that were vomiting blood like energy. But the last one made him laugh as he died with his world his son standing on a strange world facing Frieza.

In the round ship as it hurtles threw space a tank with a young man who looked like Bardock but without a scar no older then 15 wearing a breather around his head with bandages rapped around his body as his life support does what it could to keep him alive floated in healing liquid as Bardocks last thoughts were heard. 'Kakarot you are the last voice of our people'

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