Before note: This takes place in the scene where lights dad infiltrates mellows base with the death note and Matsuda. I thought I would rewrite the story from here, but it'll probably be terrible. Enjoy
Soichiro: Mellow, its over, or should I say Mihael Keehl
Mellow: Wh-what! HOW DO YOU KNOW MY NAME
Soichiro: that's for me to know, and for you to find out, NOW DROP THE BOMB.
Mellow: Try me shoots Soichiro
Soichiro Yagami falls to the ground, but quickly writes Mellows name. Unfortunately, the last L in her last name could not be written, as Soichiro drops dead before he can write it
Mellow: picks up camera on Soichiro helmet Do you see that L, your agent is dead, and you'll be next
Matsuda bursts into the room: points gun at mellow freeze!
Mellow: don't shoot or ill blow this whole place down lifts bomb
Matsuda looks down to see Soichiro dead
Matsuda: YOU KILLED THE CHIEF, YOU MONSTER ILL KILL YOU
Soichiro is bleeding on the ground. A trickle of bleed crawls onto the death note, and creates the last L in mellows name. Matsuda and Mellow stand still eye to eye.
Matsuda: crying chief… no… you can't die… no
Mellow: He's DEAD and you will be sharing the same fate.
20 seconds
Matsuda: you'll never get away with this, and you will never figure out who L really is. NEVER, WE WILL WIN!
5 seconds to go
Mellow: Id likes to see you-
Mellows eyes open wide, she brings the helmet camera to her face
Mellow: N will get you… Kira
Mellow drops dead
Later Sidoh gets his death note back. Sidoh flies off to the shinigami realm only to die moments later, as to the fact that he hadn't wrote a single human name for a very long time. His ashes fall to earth and the land it covers turns dead
At lights apartment
Light: I'm one step closer to dominating this world. The world will be perfect
In the American headquarters
Near: I must stop Kira at all costs
Nears bodyguard: on the phone yes, understood… ok hangs up and immediately destroys phone
Near: good, your learning, we cannot be found.
Nears bodyguard: Near, I'm sorry to tell you, mellow is dead
Near: playing with toy robots are you sure…
Nears bodyguard: yes
Near: drops robots mellow… it can't be… we must hurry, Kira is close to his goal
Nears bodyguard: what goal
Near: domination, complete control over the world
End of chapter 1. Click the purple button down there and tell me how bad it was
Note: I own nothing, more chapters to come. The story seems rushed in case you noticed, cause I tried to make it so that people who aren't really into the story and dont understand the advanced plots can understand. Also from this point on, the story changes completely.
DEATHNOTE FOR LIFE
