Okay, I got this idea from an e.r. episode and have had it in my head for a while now but didn't know how to end it. Now I do so I've started writing it already. OH! I saw 'The Grudge' over the weekend and OMFG! That movie is da shit! I jumped more times watching that one than I did for all three of the 'Scream' movies combined. I wanna go see it again.
I'm not sure if you can call this story a mystery or not. You're not gonna know what's going on at first, you'll find out little bits and pieces in each chapter. Tell me your predictions and what you think is happening in your reviews. You might be right.
Chapter 1
The peace and quiet of the hospital emergency waiting room was rudely broken by the squealing of tires on the pavement. The desk clerk looked up from her work to see two boys jump out of a red car that had just pulled up to the emergency doors.
AT least she thought they were both boys. One had long red hair and bright green eyes making 'him' look like a 'her'. The other, who had been the driver, had jet black hair and chocolate brown eyes.
They ran to the back passenger doors and pulled out what looked like two heavy red sacks. But as they enter the hospital each carrying one of the bundles with panic stricken faces, the clerk saw that they were actually two wounded people.
The red haired boy held another boy with copper curls. The black haired boy held a young woman with brown hair. Both had what looked like gunshot wounds and had been wrapped up in sheets, which had been dyed red from all the blood.
Immediately the clerk jumped from her seat and picked up the phone to call for a doctor. Then she ran over to meet the boys.
"Stretcher!" She yelled "We need two stretchers now!"
She ran to the redhead who was closer. Eh looked at her with tears in his eyes. "Please. Please we need a doctor. They've been shot. I…I think it hit his lung." He said with a trembling voice.
The clerk put her ear to this mouth to listen to his breathing. It sounded wet.
"Yes, I think it did too."
Three doctors and five nurses came running up to them with two stretchers and emergency equipment. They took the two victims from the boys; arms and raced them to the E.R. while hooking them up to all sorts of things.
The boys obviously wanted to follow but their panic-stricken minds somehow knew better. The raven haired boy stood stock still in the middle of the hallway staring at the place where he had last still been able to see his friends.
The red haired boy gazed in shock at his now empty hands, as though wondering what had happened to the weight that had just been there. He stared at the blood on his hands which was even darker than his hair from the amount of it.
Then he choked, wrapping his bloody arms around himself and sank to the floor as he sobbed.
Dun, dun, dun! Gee, wonder who the four people were
Hiei- oh don't be stupid! It's pretty obvious.
The girl wasn't! There are a few girls out there with brown hair. Let's see there's Kaeko…and Shizuru…and…umm…
Hiei-that's it.
Yeah, I guess so. See if you guys can guess who it is.
