Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter or anything to do with it. I own Annalix but you can borrorw her since we can all relate to her )
Annalix Fantasy thought she would explode with excitement. Just a few days ago she got her letter and now here she was standing in the middle of platform 9 ¾. Flicking back her hair she thought of her mothers face when the Hogwarts owl had flown down the chimney drenching them all in soot, and grinned. She had decided to keep the owl much to her mothers displeasure After all it was too cute not too! She'd named it Avril after her favourite singer back when she was a muggle and the owl seemed to like its new name too.
She walked a little way into the station taking in all the sights and sounds of the magical world. She noticed a few people staring at her and started feeling self conscience. Sitting down on her trunk she whipped out her pocket mirror and made sure her make-up was flawless. A pair of purple eyes stared back at her as she checked her features. She'd had them ever since she could remember and had grown to love them over time.
She swept her golden hair behind her ears and snapped the mirror shut, looking around to see if the train had arrived yet. Nope still not here but she did notice a guy standing a few feet away from her. He had untidy black hair and stunning green eyes. Although he was wearing glasses he still looked cute. Standing up, Annalix decided to get some practise in before she got to Hogwarts. Smoothing her skirt other her thighs she walked up to the boy swinging her hips as she walked, trying to ignore the eyes still staring at her. Dropping a sweet on the floor she giggled and bent over, brushing the boys thigh with her ass as she did. Annalix straightened up and looked at the boy who, instead of looking turned on looked faintly sick. Just then a girl with frizzy hair stormed over, grabbed the boys arm and gave her a dirty look before dragging him onto the newly arrived train.
Sticking her nose in the air she flounced back to her trunk trying desperately to ignore the snickering of the students around her. This was not going the way she had planned.
Grumbling, Annalix dragged her trunk further down the train. She had no problems making friends in her muggle school so why was it so difficlut here! Fianlly! A carriage with room she thought with relief. Sliding the door back Annalix saw a boy with shining blonde hair stitting with two fat idiots and an ugly girl.
"can i sit here?" Annalix asked "Theres no room anywhere else"
She noticed the gormless looking boys eyes were fixated on her cheast rather then her face and blushed.
"Wait a sec, youre the girl from the platform!" Said the blonde starting to smirk "The freak who hit on potter!"
The ugly girl started shrieking with laughter and Annalix saw red.
"Well at least I accually have a chance unlike you flat face" She spat at her.
The laughter stopped abruptly.
"You're calling ME a freak? Look in the mirror hun, whos the one with purple deformed eyes?" The girl hissed back.
The carriage erupter with laughing again and Annalix felt herself go purple with rage.
"Go back to the freak show and leave us all in peace" The blonde called after her a she she ran out of the compartment in tears.
Slumping against the corridor wall she sobbed into her hands.
This day cant get any worse she thought. Just then the sweet trolly ran her over and she saw black.
So how was that for a 1st attempt at writing? Let me know please!