Hi! This is my first time publishing fanfiction. Well, it's my first time WRITING a fanfiction. I wrote this story about half a year ago, but didn't decide to post it until now! Please no mean comments, constructive criticism is OK though! So.. Enjoy!
DISCLAIMER** I do not own, or am in any way affiliated way with Jak or Naughty Dog. All characters belong to Naughty dog.
**Oh yeah! Might contain spoilers**
The Right Choices
Chapter One
"So," he said. "I would like to do this properly." He got down on one knee in front of the stool I was perched on. "Marry me." I closed my eyes a tentatively put forward my left hand, keeping my eyes shut. After a few seconds that felt like an eternity, I opened my eyes and the feeling sunk lower. On my left finger was a sliver ring, with one big diamond in the middle, surrounded by smaller diamonds. "Good girl" he said softly with a glimmer in his eyes. He kissed my hand, and then took it in his. As he led me out of the bar and into the KG transport, my mind was on Jak. I was doing this for him. I imagined his face when he learned of my-"Here we are." Erol broke my train of thought. Not letting go of my hand, he led me through the palace. Walking, we passed some other Guards, but they averted their eyes out of fear or respect when they saw Erol. "Your room" he said. I was suddenly aware of my surroundings. There was a large white canopy bed, a private bathroom, a vanity table, and a chaise loung. I pulled my hand away from his and sat down on the bed without a word, hoping for some privacy. Erol would have none of that, though. He walked over to the bed, and cupped my face in his hands. His yellow eyes had and icy glaze to them. "You know I only love you, Keira."
So whaddya think? Put the next 2 chapters up? I have the first 3 already written, but tonight I have just decided to put them online!