Summary:
This happens after the MR2 book. SPOILERS. And Before Season 5 with CSI: Miami. The flock runs away To Miami, Florida. What happens when erasers attack them, some of the erasers end up dead, and the flock seriously injured bad. What happens when CSI Miami
Author's note-
Hello! I'm Irish Ninja~ I haven't updated this in a loooong while… I deiced to rewrite this fanfiction. Sorry if I'm a bit off and ooc… I haven't read the Maximum Ride books in years, and barely watch the show CSI: Miami anymore. Both are still good, it's just been a while.
Your job as the readers is to attack this fanfiction and give me tips! Yes I know, Insane isn't it? But how am I supposed to make it good with out your help? I also want to become a better writer (which is once reason why I am rewriting this fanfiction)
Enjoy!
Date this chapter was rewrote- 12/28th/08
(That'll help confusion if a chapter has been updated or not hopefully…)
Side note from the old fanfiction
Aloha people. I'm Irish Ninja Chick. This is my first fanfiction. And if there is any spelling/grammar in this, I blame my word. Please review. I really want to have both good and bad reviews.
Before I start,
I do not own the flock, or other Maximum Ride Characters. Even if I wish I owned Ari. Same thing goes with CSI: Miami. If I did, I would be a CSI right now. But clearly I am not.
The sun hid behind the many buildings in the city of Miami as dusk approached. A long day was about to end, making many citizens zoom to their homes for a late dinner. The steaming temperatures lowered with the sun, giving a warm feeling throughout the state. Peaceful and simple as it seems, out of place children roamed the streets of the city. Bringing trouble with them where ever they go.
There were many flapping noises as several giant bird-like things landed down in an alley next to a movie theater. The oldest female was the first one down and to scan the area for any trouble. Blond hair hanged into her face, hiding her eyes that glanced around the alley.
"Close is clear!" the girl yelled. The rest of the winged children fly down next to her.
A blond boy was the second to land in the alley. He had a cheerless frown on his face, unhappy with the activity chosen by the rest of the kids. "Why must we see that movie, of all the movies we can see? Clearly Angel had a unfair advantage when it came to voting!" he protest even if the idea was set in stone.
Following the blond boy was a hyperactive preteen. Her darkened skin matched her black hair, making perfect camouflaged in the dim alley. Sneaking up on the blond boy would have been easy if it wasn't for his keen senses. But the damaged of her loud voice in his ear still startled the blonde.
"She did not! Iggy, that is soooo totally not fair to say!! I totally wanted to see the movie too! It's about a monkey going into space, and his amazing adventures! How can you not want to see this movie! It's supposed to be animated in 3-D and everything! I'm sooo-" the hyperactive girl said, but then got cut off by a distracting younger boy behind her.
He was only few years younger then the preteen girl. Having a silly grin on his face while landing. Gagging came from the other three help support the boy's nickname. "Gazzy!" Nudge shouted, then holding her breath. "- Huuuuuaah--We'll have to clear ----out of the alley quick!!!-Huuaaah," she attempts to say while looking for clean air.
Giggles came from an adorable blond girl's mouth while she holds her nose. Lading next to the older girl. The giggles both came from what the others were saying, and thinking. "Max, you wanted to see the movie too, right?" she said in a soft little voice that sounded as sweet as sugar. The older girl who she called "Max" looked down at the little girl as she tugged on her shirt.
"Of course I want to see this Space Monkey Movie! We are the action-packed movie. Watching one would be a waste. Anyways, Iggy and Gazzy over there supply enough explosions for us, so we are set for life!" the older girl sad, having a enormous grin on her face.
"Of course you take her side! Well, I think we should break up. Do you really want Gazzy in the same theater? He'll be dropping stink bombs all over the place!" the older blond boy debated. Clearly he didn't want to see the action-packed movie.. Even if he can't see the explosions, hearing them would be better then hearing stupid monkeys giggle in space.
The younger blond boy cheered with the older boy, happy for being a reason in the debate "Whatcha think Fang? Join us! Don't join the evil cult! Come watch the movie with us, and leave those girls to their giggling selves!" he said, directing it to the dark older boy that was the last to land in the alley.
"Sure… I don't really care… You girls go have your fun," he said while receiving a strong glare coming from the oldest girl. His black wings enclosed on his back and behind his clothes, just like the rest of the kids did.
Once everyone was ready, the oldest girl led the group out of the alley. Using another stolen credit card, she bought tickets for each movie. "Okay, we'll meet back out here once we are done! Now don't loose your tickets! We might not see another movie for a while," he shouted like a mother duck towards her ducklings. Everyone walked into the movie theater, and split up in two different directions.
Meanwhile at a restaurant a few buildings down the road, a group of adults sat outside waiting to be ordered. The group where known as one of the intelligent crime scene investigation forces in the city. But that wasn't the reason why they were at the restaurant. This time is was for a celebration. One of the members on the force had a birthday today, and all of her friends where with her to celebrate it.
Alexx Woods was in her mid-forties, but her fellow co-workers surprising her like this made her feel half that age, as if the wrinkles on her darkened skin were never there. "Oh my! You guys did all of this for me!" she said, nearly in tears.
"Well, of course Alexx. You disserve this," came from one of the older members that were known to be the boss. His sunglasses were off this time while he gave a simple smile to the medical examiner. Always having a kind hard, Horatio was the one who whipped up this part for her, and Alexx knew it.
Cheers from the rest of the bunch followed the man's comment, causing whine glasses to click together. Cake was passed out, and the group shared memories though out the evening. Dusk soon approached the party, making hours fly by. The birthday girl announced she'd have to leave soon to go tuck her kids into bed, even if she wished the night could last longer.
Author's note-
I know the CSI: Miami section in this first chapter is very short. I just got lazy (sorry)
I promise it'll get better! Equal parts. The next chapter is going to have more CSI: Miami characters talking anyways….
Tell me how you like the new version!
-Irish Ninja-