'And how do you expect to stay alive?" My eyes narrowed. 'I'm going to keep my wits and emotions straight." There was a pause. "Then, I'm going to kick ass."
Intro
Experiments. Who wants them? The army. And who makes them? The Government. Billions of tax payer dollars goes to creating people. Immortal people. Homunculi. I can tell you're smart enough to know what a homunculus is. But, homunculi on this side play by different rules. These immortal creations live forever until: a) they fall in love b) They become best friends or c) they do a selfless act for a person. The moment that person dies, so do they. But, creating people not only costs, but constantly fails. There is only one living and successful homunculi out there.
Subject file: Experimental human Recreation Number 56.
Experiment: Successful.
Status: Escaped. To be captured and brought in for further research.
Code name: Kame. Japanese for tortoise, the symbol of long life.
Specialty: Any sport or martial art. She is smart and calculating.
Weakness: Needles and rain.
I sighed as rain pored down. For the third time today. I slipped off my jacket and wondered why the heck it had to rain so much. I hated getting wet unless it was warm water. Nothing compared to the glacier cold water scientists would pour on you. The stale scent of food drifted from the cafeteria. I sighed again. Rainy days were depressing. Suddenly I heard the school house door open from downstairs. Crap.
"Kame, were only here to help. Come out." The voice called. I didn't hesitate. I jumped out the window and swung onto the roof. Rain hit me. The instant it hit me, I wished I had brought my coat. Especially because of my short lab cloths. I jumped off as rain pelted and soaked my hair and cloths. I rain as fast I could. I knew they had chimeras in the military. There was a distant shout as they realized I had ran. I turned a corner and hit someone. My head hit the sidewalk.
"What are you-"I grabbed the person's wrist. "We have to go now! They're coming!" I half dragged him into an alley as my pursuers passed.
"What the hell was that?" The person growled. I looked at the person for the first time. It was a guy with golden eyes and hair. When he saw my eyes, he visibly stiffened. It was the usual reaction. Not like normal people have purple eyes, right? I brushed my soaked hair back and noticed it had stopped raining.
"Sorry about that." I said. "If they saw you they would've questioned you." His eyes flashed.
"And with good reason. Who the heck are you?" I sighed. Just a bottle of questions, isn't he? 'There's something rather strange about him' Pride said in my head. 'No dur. He has friking golden eyes.' I replied.
"Meh, I have lots of names. Just call me Dawn." I shrugged. "But what about you?" He seemed actually surprised I would ask that.
"Edward. Edward Elric."
Sorry for the short chapter. I need lots of suggestions. Plz….