Cinderella's live
This will be my first big fan fiction. Please review.
Chapter 1: The beginning
The kingdom was filled with joy. The queen had just given birth to a prince. The queen, named Alexandra, called her son Frederick. She called her son to her brother who had died recently of the plague. The king, named Henry, was delighted with his new born son.
Four years later Cinderella was born. She was a beautiful baby girl. Her parents loved her and they were proud of her. The name of her mother was: Harriet Tremaine and the name of her father was Thomas.
The family lived happily together until Harriet got ill. Cinderella was five years old and her mother had typhus. Harriet had a high fever. The doctor told Thomas that Harriet had catch the disease when she had visited the fisherman's wife that day. Cinderella was not allowed to see her mother again. After four weeks of suffer Harriet died. Thomas and Cinderella cried when the funeral directors carried Harriet away. A week later Harriet was buried. Thomas hired a governess to teach his daughter languages, history, poem and other things. Thomas was working and he did not pay attention to Cinderella.
The governess, named Rachel, loved Cinderella. She did everything with Cinderella. Rachel learned Cinderella how to dance, sing, and write.
Four years later Thomas felt guilty about how he treated his daughter.
"Cinderella I'm sorry for ignoring you all the time. I love you very much and I won't do it again. How about going on a picnic just you and me?" Thomas said.
Cinderella smiled. "It alright daddy, I know that you are sad about mother death. She was the light in our lives. But we can be happy together. I like the picnic idea."
Thomas looked at his daughter. She liked dancing, reading, and singing. But she also loved it to get dirty when she played in the mud. Perhaps she needed a mother. Thomas took Cinderella with him to the town. The duke of the king had an announcement to make:
"Her majesty the queen Alexandra is pregnant. She is going to have the baby in two months."
Thomas and Cinderella walked into the bakers shop. They bought some breads and cakes and after that they went on the picnic. When they walked to the field there was already someone.
"Look daddy we are not alone." Said Cinderella.
"You are right Cinderella. But just wait a minute. I know who he is. It is the king. We went to university together." Thomas looked surprised when Henry recognised him too.
"Thomas haven't seen each other too long. I see that you have a daughter. Frederick come here. This is my old friend from university and this is his daughter Cinderella. Say hello"
Frederick looked at Cinderella and saw that she had hide herself behind her father. He was used to girls who were hiding themselves for him. But it was much better than looking for an option to escape them. Maybe there were also normal girls.
"Hello, my name is Frederick. What is your name?"
"My name is Cinderella Tremaine and I'm eight years old." She hoped that with mentioning her name he would finding her childish. But….
"I am twelve years old and would you like to build a hut?"
"Yes I would love to", Cinderella said.
Henry looked confused to Thomas. A girl who liked to build a hut? And his son was getting dirty again and Alexandra wouldn't like that. But when he saw the confused look in Thomas eye's he gave a sight of relieve. He was not the only one who was having problems with his child.
"Alright you can go but Cinderella be careful with your clothes." Thomas said.
Cinderella and Frederick became friends that afternoon. Henry and Thomas talked about their lives.
Suddenly the duke came run to the king.
"Your majesty, I have terrible news. It is the queen she….