Summary: Lily Evans is Head Girl at Hogwarts. She's never notices and has
no friends but teacher. She was awaiting her fate until something or
someone pulls her into a romantic adventure that was never planned.
Speechless
Chapter.1.
A girl with Flaming red hair, green eyes, deep tanned skin and
curves all the right places stood at the gateway of Platform 9 ¾. She
looked at the olden bricks between 9 and 10. She thought of how this
would be the last time she would ever be able to stand here and walk
through this wall, leading her into her childhood of magic. Lily smiled as
rain started to make its way onto her face. She took a deep breath and
walked slowly through the barrier, taking her time trying to keep this
memory locked in her heart, for Hogwarts was the only home she knew
and that would be worth taking this last moment into account.
This year, her last and seventh year at Hogwarts wouldn't be the
best, she still had a list of moments to capture, of things to accomplish,
and she needed to do this before her time was up. Very little people
know who Lily Evans is. Underneath her teachers pet/quite girl she was
an amazing person full of life. As Head Girl Lily had a lot planed on top
of things in her secret life. Lily wished for life to get better, because she
couldn't be able to handle anything else that was tragic.
Walking through the barrier she bumped into someone who she
didn't recognize, but saw the "Head Boy" badge on his Gryffindor cloak.
Lily's whole trunk went onto the ground and everything fell out. She
turned red and hoped no one would notice her trying to pick up all her
belongings. She scurried around picking up book after book. Once she
picked up all she could see that was hers the boy whom she bumped into
put the belonging he had picked up into her trunk. He helped her up, and
brushed off her cloak.
"I'm sorry about that." The boy begun to explain. "I should have never
walked in front of the barrier like that knowing other schoolmates would
be entering through there. Are you alright?" Lily looked up for the first
time, noticing who helped her.
A boy with jet black untidy hair and crystal blue eyes was looking
down on her. He was tall and muscular. Underneath his cloak he had on
kaki black shorts and a white muscle shirt on. When Lily finally took her
glance off him she took her trunk and answered.
"I'm fine. It was purely me making you get knocked over I fully apologize
for this incident." Lily smiled and started to walk away, until the boy
called out to her.
"I'll see you in the great hall, green eyes." Lily kept walking toward the
train. Once aboard Lily walked down to the head compartment
completely forgetting the boy she had just met or bumped into on the
platform. Instead of waiting for the Head Boy Lily sat down and started to
write a list of ideas she had for the year and since there had to be at least
one event each month she knew a lot had to be planed. Pulling out a piece
of parchment a quill and ink she started to scribe down on the desk that
was located in the compartment.
Events for the year of 1977-1978
Balls
-Halloween
-Christmas
-Valentines Day
-St. Patrick's Day
-Easter
-Year end Ball
-Graduation Ball
Hogmates Trips
-every other Saturday-Sunday (Dates later)
Fun Events
--Beauty Contest (Muggle Fashion)
-Singing Contest
-Writing Contest (Essay, Poetry)
After about a half an hour of trying to come up with more idea's Lily put
the list to the sides and started to explain each separately.
Halloween Ball
Decorations
-Orange and Black as the main colors
-Costume Contest
-Jack-O-Lanterns
-Fake bats hanging from the ceiling or real bat's flying between a barrier
-Table shaped as Muggle Ghosts, Bats, Witches hats, and Pumpkins
-Orange and Black streamers
Food & Drinks
-A selection of Candy from Honeydukes
-Muggle Candy
-Any type of drink non-alcoholic
Lily reached in her bag for some paint and painters paper. Once she
found that material she drew then painted what the hall would look like
from the top angle, how you would walk in, and how the head table
would see it. After she had done a report and a painting on each of the
balls se moved to the Fun events.
Beauty Contest
-Girls only
-Two other schools will be coming to join this contest (Beauxbatons and
Durmstrang)
-Judges will be picked out of the Ministry's Ring
-Only 10 girls a school, they will be chosen by "The Flower of Flame"
-Each Contestant must have four qualities physically and questionably
Lily did the same for the other event explaining them and how they
would be preformed before she heard the train's wheels squeak. Packing
all the parchments she had into a separate folder each categorized, she
put them into her book bag and placed her bag into her trunk.
Walking out onto the platform of Hogmates Station Lily saw the tip
of Hogwarts highest castle, smiles and whispered to herself.
"I'm home." She breathed in Hogwarts wet air as the rain still came
pelting down. Lily saw Hagrid and waved to him smiling, he was the only
friend she had who wasn't a teacher, but Lily thought he was close
enough to being one.
Lily walked toward the carriages that would take her home and to a
warm Great hall where amazing food awaits. Once she found an empty
carriage she hopped in and made her way up the rainy walk way and
towards the castle.
~This is about my fourth fanfic and I wanted to try something different with this one because all my other ones seem to suck so here it is. And I have read the fifth book, but I'm not doing anything like it because I hate that book! Well it was well written but I disagree with J.K.Rowling in most of what she wrote, so here's my story. If I get one review I'll update. I hope you like this story, if you do tell me what could make it better, and if you don't tell me what could make it better. I want your help because I'm not the greatest writer. Thank-You so much!~
Kaydee
Speechless
Chapter.1.
A girl with Flaming red hair, green eyes, deep tanned skin and
curves all the right places stood at the gateway of Platform 9 ¾. She
looked at the olden bricks between 9 and 10. She thought of how this
would be the last time she would ever be able to stand here and walk
through this wall, leading her into her childhood of magic. Lily smiled as
rain started to make its way onto her face. She took a deep breath and
walked slowly through the barrier, taking her time trying to keep this
memory locked in her heart, for Hogwarts was the only home she knew
and that would be worth taking this last moment into account.
This year, her last and seventh year at Hogwarts wouldn't be the
best, she still had a list of moments to capture, of things to accomplish,
and she needed to do this before her time was up. Very little people
know who Lily Evans is. Underneath her teachers pet/quite girl she was
an amazing person full of life. As Head Girl Lily had a lot planed on top
of things in her secret life. Lily wished for life to get better, because she
couldn't be able to handle anything else that was tragic.
Walking through the barrier she bumped into someone who she
didn't recognize, but saw the "Head Boy" badge on his Gryffindor cloak.
Lily's whole trunk went onto the ground and everything fell out. She
turned red and hoped no one would notice her trying to pick up all her
belongings. She scurried around picking up book after book. Once she
picked up all she could see that was hers the boy whom she bumped into
put the belonging he had picked up into her trunk. He helped her up, and
brushed off her cloak.
"I'm sorry about that." The boy begun to explain. "I should have never
walked in front of the barrier like that knowing other schoolmates would
be entering through there. Are you alright?" Lily looked up for the first
time, noticing who helped her.
A boy with jet black untidy hair and crystal blue eyes was looking
down on her. He was tall and muscular. Underneath his cloak he had on
kaki black shorts and a white muscle shirt on. When Lily finally took her
glance off him she took her trunk and answered.
"I'm fine. It was purely me making you get knocked over I fully apologize
for this incident." Lily smiled and started to walk away, until the boy
called out to her.
"I'll see you in the great hall, green eyes." Lily kept walking toward the
train. Once aboard Lily walked down to the head compartment
completely forgetting the boy she had just met or bumped into on the
platform. Instead of waiting for the Head Boy Lily sat down and started to
write a list of ideas she had for the year and since there had to be at least
one event each month she knew a lot had to be planed. Pulling out a piece
of parchment a quill and ink she started to scribe down on the desk that
was located in the compartment.
Events for the year of 1977-1978
Balls
-Halloween
-Christmas
-Valentines Day
-St. Patrick's Day
-Easter
-Year end Ball
-Graduation Ball
Hogmates Trips
-every other Saturday-Sunday (Dates later)
Fun Events
--Beauty Contest (Muggle Fashion)
-Singing Contest
-Writing Contest (Essay, Poetry)
After about a half an hour of trying to come up with more idea's Lily put
the list to the sides and started to explain each separately.
Halloween Ball
Decorations
-Orange and Black as the main colors
-Costume Contest
-Jack-O-Lanterns
-Fake bats hanging from the ceiling or real bat's flying between a barrier
-Table shaped as Muggle Ghosts, Bats, Witches hats, and Pumpkins
-Orange and Black streamers
Food & Drinks
-A selection of Candy from Honeydukes
-Muggle Candy
-Any type of drink non-alcoholic
Lily reached in her bag for some paint and painters paper. Once she
found that material she drew then painted what the hall would look like
from the top angle, how you would walk in, and how the head table
would see it. After she had done a report and a painting on each of the
balls se moved to the Fun events.
Beauty Contest
-Girls only
-Two other schools will be coming to join this contest (Beauxbatons and
Durmstrang)
-Judges will be picked out of the Ministry's Ring
-Only 10 girls a school, they will be chosen by "The Flower of Flame"
-Each Contestant must have four qualities physically and questionably
Lily did the same for the other event explaining them and how they
would be preformed before she heard the train's wheels squeak. Packing
all the parchments she had into a separate folder each categorized, she
put them into her book bag and placed her bag into her trunk.
Walking out onto the platform of Hogmates Station Lily saw the tip
of Hogwarts highest castle, smiles and whispered to herself.
"I'm home." She breathed in Hogwarts wet air as the rain still came
pelting down. Lily saw Hagrid and waved to him smiling, he was the only
friend she had who wasn't a teacher, but Lily thought he was close
enough to being one.
Lily walked toward the carriages that would take her home and to a
warm Great hall where amazing food awaits. Once she found an empty
carriage she hopped in and made her way up the rainy walk way and
towards the castle.
~This is about my fourth fanfic and I wanted to try something different with this one because all my other ones seem to suck so here it is. And I have read the fifth book, but I'm not doing anything like it because I hate that book! Well it was well written but I disagree with J.K.Rowling in most of what she wrote, so here's my story. If I get one review I'll update. I hope you like this story, if you do tell me what could make it better, and if you don't tell me what could make it better. I want your help because I'm not the greatest writer. Thank-You so much!~
Kaydee