wow i'm so excited I got my first chapter up!..here it is!

Chapter 1:

Mokuba woke up at the sound of his alarm clock going off in the morning; he lazily turned it off and got up to get ready for school. He new that Seto had already gone to work so he just went out where the limo was waiting to take him to school. The day went on the same as usual except for the headache he started to get in first period. It started to get worse as the day continued and by recess everyone could tell something was wrong.

"Are you ok, Mokuba?" john one of his friends asked at recess "you don't look so good"

"Yea, just a little hot" he lied "besides theirs only one class left"

So he went to his last class and was happy to see the limo waiting for him after school. He could not wait to get home and get some rest. As soon as the limo got to the Kaiba mansion he opened the door and threw his backpack on the floor and went into the kitchen to see if Seto had come home yet but Mokuba was disappointed to see that he wasn't. Mokuba wanted to take some medicine so that he would feel better but his brother had told him not to unless he told him he could. 'Seto might be mad at me if I bother him at work' he thought to himself as he went upstairs so that he could lie down.

As he walked he started to get very dizzy and started to rock from side to side without noticing. He was almost to his room when everything around him started to spin and he fell to the floor and passed out.

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Meanwhile at Kaiba corp. Seto Kaiba was typing away at his laptop when he stopped to glance at the clock to see that it was 7:18 'well I'm almost done with my work here so I think I should surprise Mokuba and come home early' Kaiba thought to himself as he started to type again. After Kaiba finished his work, which didn't take him too long being a genius and all, he called the limo to come and went home. Once the limo reached the Kaiba mansion he stepped out of the limo and went in. once inside the house Kaiba thought it was strange that Mokuba didn't pounce on him. 'Mokuba must be upstairs and not have herd me come home' he thought to himself as he started to climb the stairs. He turned into the hallway towards Mokuba's room and gasped at the sight in front of him.

"Mokuba, no!" he yelled as he ran over and kneeled next to his brother who was facedown on the floor. He flipped him over and saw that his face was covered in sweet and his breathing was heavy. 'I don't know how long he has been here but I need to get him to a hospital…and soon'. Kaiba pulled out a cell phone from his coat pocket and dialed a number.

"Get the limo ready out front," he said harshly into the phone.

"I'm sorry sir but both of the limos are being repaired at the time" a voice said on the other end of the line.

"Fine!" Kaiba said throwing the phone down and picking up his brother. He raced out the door and started running towards the hospital 'The hospital is only a few blocks away and I need to get Mokuba to a hospital and fast' he said to himself as he kept on running.

Kaiba was about half way their when he passed an ally with about five or six men that where playing cards on an old table that looked like it was going to fall apart any second. He only looked for a second and then kept on running.

"Hey, was that Seto Kaiba?" one of the men asked after Kaiba had left.

"I think it was" another said "but what is he doing out here at nightin this part of town?"

"Who cares!" the biggest one yelled and at that all of the others fell silent "This could be our big shot, now lets go!" he got up and walked deeper into the ally until he finally disappeared into the shadows and the rest of the gang followed.

Kaiba was still on his way to the hospital when up ahead he saw the same gang that was in the ally blocking his way.

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ok sorry it's short...but it's a start anyway...I would just like to warn the poeple starting to read the story that I'm not even half-way done with it...so it will take a while before updates...sorry I was so excited I couldn't stand to wait another second to put it up..I have been waiting months now...please revew (huges Mokie)