This is my first ever fan fiction. It's a one-shot. Please review.
THE LIFE DAN HAD
So, My life was AWSOME at some times, but others, such as my parents' death, and having to stay with Great Aunt Beatrice, was not so good. But these are all the good times. First of all, the time when I tricked Amy into holding Nellie Gomez's new mobile phone, which I had accidentally broken earlier on. Sadly, Nellie saw me take it and break it. That was sad. But seeing as Nellie is the best Au pair in the world, I just got away with it. Then I went to a special effects studio. They were making a short kids movie, then I started messing about, and, well, as you can imagine, I snapped some of the buttons, and then, to make matters worse, I knocked over the computer! That cost a lot of money. Then the whole way home, Amy and Great Aunt Beatrice started complaining about the limited money we were gonna get. Well, I do need to have SOME fun, don't I? Then one Grave reserving time- or so I thought. So, I was with Amy visiting Grace- my grandmother, who is dead. Well, before she died, this is what happened. Amy went straight for the house to greet Grandma. However, I went straight for some Gravestone rubbings. I collected up a few rubbing, stuck a D in a corner and moved on into the house. However on my way back, i tripped over a rock and knocked over the tombstone. It snapped in half. I panicked. I looked around. I found and old stone in a good enough shape for a tombstone. I grabbed my carving knife, which I take everywhere, and started carving the letters. I was just about to finish the last two letters, when Amy and Grace came down and called me for lunch. It just hit me. I was there for hours carving the letters onto the stone. Amy was the fastest to get to the graveyard. She started to shout at me (as usual). One big surprise occurred. Grace wasn't annoyed at me. In fact, She started to thank me for replacing the stone. She said that the stone I knocked was bound to break and then shed have to pay lots to get a new one. Amy glared at me. I knew what she was thinking. You are lucky Dan, Very lucky. For the first time i thought Amy was right. Then, the Big hunt for the clues, had begun. My life had changed completely. Though, I do start to wonder, what would have happened if we didn't agree to the hunt? It's something I'll never know.
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AUTHORS COMMENT: Well, that is it. Not a lot for my first entry, but there will be more. Anyway, the last line of the one chapter story, leads onto my next story, which is the story of Amy and Dan's life if they didn't choose to take the worlds most dangerous hunt in the world...