Naomily Story (This is my first fanfic so please give me advice :) and tell me what I did good and what I can do better!)

It was the first day back at college for the Fitch sisters and Katy had already managed to overshadow her more timid and shy twin sister Emily. This did bug Emily, but she put up with it. She would only manage to embarrass them so she thought, and figured as usual it was best to let Katy take over as she knew how to manage them flawlessly. It was also in Katy's nature to lead, whereas Emily was more easy going and not as confident. It had always been Katy that supported them. At least it had been that way since they were about 12 years old. It all started one day at recess...

While Katy was making friends and joining social circles, Emily was off making a new friend of her own. She used to tag along with her sister, but she had begun to come out of her shell. At least to Naomi who she had been making good friends with. They would swing on the bars together and they would practice their kart wheels. They also loved to dance. They would play alone, far away from all the other kids in the corner of the school yard. They were seen as a bit of a pair of losers, but they didn't mind. Emily was enjoying herself far too much to give a damn about the thoughts of others. Something about this new friend of hers made it all worth it. You see, she couldn't quite describe the feeling, but she felt drawn to her new found friend. She would think about her a lot, and she always wanted to be with her. She admired her and she wanted to be close to her. They had become fast friends.

One day at recess they were dancing and Emily started to get these strange feelings... "Haha! What kind of dancing is that!?" Naomi cried out in exasperation to Emily. Emily had begun to dance in the strangest way. A sort of half waltz, half drunken stagger on her own a few feet away from Naomi who had been spinning in whimsical circles.

"What? I'm dancing!" She replied indignantly. She knew in her head that she was only doing it for Naomi's attention, but she didn't quite admit it to herself.

"Jesus! You call THAT dancing? Let me show you, THIS is what's dancing!" Naomi goes over to Emily and takes her hand. She begins to lead them in a waltz. "You're such a tard." She chuckles, "don't you know how to do a proper waltz?"

"Haha, sorry. I guess I've just never been too coordinated." She admitted sheepishly with a smile. They became deeply immersed in their conversation and had been unconsciously slowing their pace until they began to settle into a slow dance. They were very close and their bodies were almost touching. Emily was beginning to feel strangely again. She was feeling a weird sensation all over. Big amounts of energy seemed to be flowing through her body, her heart rate was increasing and her breathing became shallower.

"Emily? Helloooo, earth to Emily!"

"What? Oh, I'm sorry I was just.. thinking." She had been so caught up in the weird sensations overcoming her body that she had totally blanked out of her conversation with Naomi. She looked up at Naomi. Naomi was staring at her with an amused smirk on her face. Emily just continued to stare at her. She was in a confused daze. She was feeling so many things that she didn't know what to do. Naomi then began to stare back. There they were, slow dancing alone on the outskirts of the playground; staring into each others' eyes. It was then that Emily made a move and pressed her lips against Naomi's. Naomi, not sure what was happening just stood there in the lip lock. As the initial shock of the situation subsided, she began to kiss back. Emily made a little squeak which caused a multitude of sensations in the pit of Naomi's stomach. Emily was just as excited and confused. She didn't know what had come over her, but it felt so natural. It felt better than any of the boys she had ever kissed. All of a sudden they hear a shocked disgusted cry:

"WHAT on EARTH are you two doing!? Emily, did this girl just try to snogg you!?" It was Katy, Emily's identical twin sister. She had begun to attracted a crowd. Emily was stunned. She didn't know what to say, but she felt scared. Her sister was obviously angry with her and the people gathering around were snickering at them. She was hearing whispers; the words "dykes" and "lezzies" among them. She immediately began to feel ashamed, but still she just stood there. She looked at Naomi then back at her sister speechless. Naomi was in the exact state of shock as Emily. Katy wasn't about to stand still and look like a fool in front of the whole school. She took immediate action and marched up to Naomi and began insult her.. "Whatchu' lookin' at? Starin' at my tits yea? You lesbian, go find another dyke to snogg instead of molesting my sister, got it?" She said with a sneer. She then roughly grabbed Emily by the arm and began to pull her away. The rest of Emily's recess was spent in sad silence as she hung around her sister and friends. She endured the gossip. They were saying so many nasty things about Naomi. Katy had made up this whole story about Naomi trying to rape Emily. It was a good story, and everyone was having a good laugh. Emily could only look down at her feet and silently nod and agree when asked questions. She didn't want to admit that she was the one who had kissed Naomi. She was afraid. She felt bad for Naomi. In fact she felt like she couldn't bear to live with herself, but soon after Naomi changed schools and life went on as normal. Katy and Emily began to hang around the same circles once more and Emily went back to her shy submissive role. She didn't want to be the laughing stock of the school, and so she followed Katy's lead into social acceptance.

This is the end of chapter 1. I'm going to make more chapters, and I don't know when I'm going to stop. Please, any input is appreciated :)