Hello everyone! Welcome once again to another story of mine!
But, this story is probably going to shock someone on here…
This is the rewrite of High School Never Ends!
Okay, before any of you start throwing virtual knives at my head, I need to explain:
~So, for the past few weeks or so – whenever I had put up the poll for this situation – I have been thinking of new ideas for the rewrite of HSNE, if it were ever to come to this decision. I have also been asking many reviewers that I have come to know, whether I should rewrite the story and make a new one. A reviewer gave me an idea; why not just keep the old version up, and place the new one up somewhere separate. And so, this happened!~
My friends on FanFiction have said that if I rewrote HSNE, then they would be supporting me every step of the way. :D
So, here's the summary for the rewrite:
~Forks Spartan Academy – one of the most highly respected schools in the area. But, there's one little technicality; this school is for boys only! Not for long, that is… One girl decided to speak out against that problem, and her name is Bella Swan. She won the battle and now, FSA will now allow girls into the school. But, what the girls didn't know when they arrived on campus is that all of the guys have been itching to see a girl walk onto their turf. That's when the chaos begins. Join in on the adventure for Bella Swan as she and other girls all experience the High School experience of FSA, for everyone will undergo dating, cheating, love, and pranks/high jinks galore! Will Bella and two other girls fall for the three worst men on campus – the three players of the school? Or, will they break their cheating habits when girls storm upon campus? Will something be revealed everyday?~
Sounds like a good summary?
Well, let's begin already. :D
(TEMP Title – maybe!)
Music:
~High School Never Ends by Bowling for Soup (Theme Song)~
High School Never Ends – A Remake
Chapter ONE
Bella's POV
"Bella!" I jumped in surprise when I heard my father shout my name. "What, dad?" I asked him breathlessly, feeling the need to restart my stuttered breath and my stuttering heart. "Oh, sorry sweetie. You seemed deep in thought again. Anyways, we're here at your new school." My dad explained, grumbling.
My dad did have point; while he was driving me to my new personal doom – Forks Spartan Academy – I had been thinking of a lot of heavy things, at least to me that is. I moved down from Seattle, Washington, away from my petite mother to live with my stubborn yet strong father in Forks. They've been divorced for awhile, but were still friends time to time.
Anyways, while I was staying at my dad's house during the summer, getting used to living here, my dad was arguing with me where to go. Lots of people around town have been talking about the school, Forks Spartan Academy, saying that it's a really excellent school and what not. I told my dad that I wanted to Forks Spartan Academy – that's where he exploded. He kept saying that he didn't want me near a bunch of boys and when I argued that there are other girls at the school, he surprised me by saying,
"Bella, there aren't any other girls at that school because it's an ALL BOYS school!"
At first, I was laughing at my dad, thinking that he was just messing with me. But then, when I saw that his serious expression wouldn't go away, I knew that he was serious. This school was sexist; why make it an all boys school? Did this school think that the guys were smarter than any girl? I mean, sure if there were girls at the school, then the guys would get "distracted" from us, since most men are pigs.
I asked my mom – since she's a lawyer – if we could fight against the school's sexist rules, and she agreed with me. Other mom's apparently also wanted their daughters at that school and so it started the girls protest against FSA. It was brought to court and we won the battle. So now, the school was allowing girls inside the school.
My dad again called my name, letting my thoughts drift off elsewhere. "Bella, didn't you hear me? We're here." He said again, looking over to my left. I turned to my left as well, getting my first glimpse of the school.
The first building that I saw was very tall and had four to five stories of it. It was also made up of starch red bricks, stacked upon one another. A gigantic circular water fountain sat in front of the school. Willows, spruces and pines lined the edges of the school yard, where I only saw a few boys sitting underneath their shade from the rare sun of Forks.
My dad helped me get my luggage and bags out of the car before he set them off to the side. He stood in front of me, glaring every few seconds at the school behind me. "Dad, I'll be fine. I'll have other girls here with me." I assured him, hugging him. He hugged me back awkwardly; my dad was never the one for showing familial affections.
"Just please call me if you're having problems and you can come back home." He told me, stroking my hair in a fatherly way. Another thing about the school is that it's almost like a college – there are dorms behind the school for students to sleep in. There are at least two large dorms, all occupied by guys, but now since there are going to be girls coming in, the guys of the second dorm are now moved into the first one, where the guys have to share rooms like us.
"I will dad. Can't you trust me?" I asked him jokingly, laughing slightly. He shook his head but chuckled with me.
Two other cars stopped behind my dad's, both expensive cars. The car that was behind my dad's car was a black Mercedes Benz. The passenger door opened, where a girl that was pixie size skipped out. She had inky black, spiky short hair with stormy grey eyes. She wore a baby blue t-shirt that was underneath a jean jacket, and with dark jeans and black wedge sandals to go with it. It made me feel highly embarrassed for my simply black polo shirt and black skinny jeans with my black converse.
A man with blond, slicked back hair stepped out of the driver's side, wearing a blue button down shirt with a tie and black dress pants, along with black dress shoes. I'm assuming that that man may be the girl's father. He helped her get out her luggage, then they both stood by us. "Hello!" the girl piped at me, beaming. She came to my shoulders of my 5'6" frame. "Alice…" Alice's father scolded, narrowing his green eyes down at her.
"Sorry dad…" she trailed off sheepishly, looking down at the ground. "Hello, I'm Carlisle Cullen." The man, Carlisle, said to my father, extending his hand. "My name's Charlie Swan. I believe you are the well respected doctor at Forks Hospital; am I wrong?" my dad greeted him back, shaking Carlisle's hand.
My dad and Carlisle talked with each other, while Alice approached me. "Hi! I'm Alice! What's your name?" Alice asked me excitedly. "Um, Bella." I told her, blushing from her excited mood. "Oh, Bella. Sounds like a beautiful name! I have a feeling that we're going to be the best of friends." Alice stated, still beaming. I smiled back at her; her cheerful mood was contagious.
The second car's passenger door opened, where my self esteem dropped. Out stepped a tall, statuesque girl with long, flowing blond hair while her eyes were concealed from sunglasses. She wore a fitting blood red blouse that had frills at the neckline, while she wore dark denim jeans with red high heels. The driver's door opened, revealing a man that looked similar to Carlisle, but his bright blue eyes were the difference between them.
"Ah, Mr. Hale. I see that your daughter will now be enrolling here. How's your son, Jasper?" Carlisle asked Mr. Hale when he joined them. "He's doing fine, though he still likes to do daredevil stunts like his friends. I'm sure he'll at least helped his sister around the school." Mr. Hale replied; looks like this Jasper guy is in this school and I'm guessing the girl is his sister. She walked over to us, towering a little over me, and a lot over Alice.
"Hi!" Alice piped, looking up at the girl. She removed her sunglasses, revealing bright blue eyes that matched her father's. "Hi." She replied warily, looking down at me and Alice with suspicious eyes. "My name's Alice, and this is Bella." Alice introduced us to the girl, still smiling.
"I'm Rosalie Hale." She stated, a small smile beginning to form. "Oh, now I know you. You're the girl who fought for girls' rights to go to this school." Rosalie said, jutting her thumb down at me. I nodded, blushing still. She laughed and patted my shoulder, smiling. "No need to be embarrassed or frightened by me, Bella. I'm perfectly harmless when it comes to meeting new people. Just don't get on my bad side." She warned, smirking. Again I nodded, relaxing.
"Well, we'll let you girls go now." Carlisle stated; he, my dad and Rosalie's father each gave us a hug before they got into their cars a drove off. When they left, more cars came, where more girls arrived here on the campus.
"So, I heard that your brother is here?" I asked Rosalie when we began making our way into the school yard with other girls behind us. "Yep; I should also warn you though. He and his friends are idiots when it comes to dares, so watch out for them." She told Alice and I, shaking her head.
The guys who were out here in the school yard began to take notice of us girls, and were starting to gawk at us. Some stood and ran off – probably to tell the other guys in this school that the girls have arrived. We reached the back of the school, where the dorms came into view. We've been told that each level – four levels in all – represent the years of the school. Freshman at the bottom, Sophomores at the second level, Juniors at the third level (us) and finally, Seniors at the top.
All of the girls began going to their assigned rooms, and thankfully, Rosalie, Alice and I were roommates. "Oh, this is going to be exciting; all us in the same dorm room!" Alice squealed when we walked into our dorm. It was pretty large, with four queen beds on both sides of the room. A mini fridge was off to the side, next to a closet. Next to each bed had dressers for our clothes, since the closet wasn't big enough for us to place ALL of our clothes in there.
"I call this bed!" Rosalie shouted, running before plopping down on the largest queen bed. "Hey, no fair!" Alice whined, stomping over to Rosalie's bed. I don't see why she's complaining; our beds were actually pretty big, enough to fit two people snuggly. "Alice, all of our beds are big enough." I pointed out for her, laughing. "But this one is the biggest." She now whined at me, pouting while pointing a finger at Rosalie.
A few minutes later, another girl came into our room. She was as tall as me, with dark hair that pulled back in a ponytail. She had dark eyes hidden behind square black glasses that sort of went with her white polo shirt that had a black sweater vest over it, along with her dark navy blue jeans and her black ballet flats.
"Um, hi…" the girl said when she entered the room. "Hi." I greeted her back, walking over to her. "I was assigned to this room." The girl explained, blushing. "Well, hi. My name is Bella. This is Alice and Rosalie." I said, pointing to Alice and Rosalie when I said their names. "I'm Angela." The girl said, smiling at me.
She took the last bed that was beside mine. After we had our stuff all unpacked and put away, the four of us left the dorm room and went outside. It was the beginning of our new school year and so all of us had a day to get used to the school.
When we went back to the front of the school, there were a lot of boys outside now. Girls were traveling in groups like us, staying as far from some of the boys. "Do the boys have a disease?" Angela asked me when we were walking around. "I don't know. I think it's kind of funny that the girls are avoiding the guys." I told her, smirking.
"Rosalie!" a deep voice shouted out from in front of us. We stopped when three guys came up to us. The first boy that I saw was almost an exact copy of Rosalie – blond hair that was messy and covered his bright blue eyes. He had the same pale skin like Rosalie's, Alice's and mine, and he was the same height as Rosalie. He wore a blue t-shirt with dark jeans and shoes. The second guy had the body of a weight lifter, with dark curly hair and brown eyes that would make a girl melt. He wore a grey sweater with black jeans and dark shoes. Both Rosalie and Alice couldn't keep their eyes off the two guys – Rosalie on the body lifter and Alice on Rosalie's brother, I assumed.
But me, I couldn't keep my eyes off of the last guy. He looked about 5'9", with pale skin. He had coppery/bronze hair that was messy, but perfectly messy, like "I-just-rolled-out-of-bed" hair. His eyes were to die for – a dark, mesmerizing emerald green that seemed to stare into my soul when he looked back at me. He wore a black t-shirt that clung to his strong, well muscled chest, while his runner lithe legs were being fit snug into dark jeans, and his feet were in black converse. His face was touch worthy like his hair – chiseled, angular and manly. His nose was rather large, but he could pull it off. His arms were pretty muscled like his friends, his hands stuffed into his pockets casually. He also had a light stubble of his jaw line, making him look even more manly than ever.
"Jasper." Rosalie stated to the guy that looked like her, taking her eyes off of the body builder for a second. "Who are your friends, sis?" Jasper asked her, his eyes straying away from Alice's. Rosalie glared at her brother, but otherwise introduced us. "This is Bella, Alice and Angela." She told him, pointing to us when she said our names. "Bella, Alice, Angela, this is Jasper my brother." she began, pointing to Jasper, who smiled. She stopped when she got to the other two.
"I'm guessing you never met these two, Rosalie. This is Emmett and Edward." Jasper teased his sister, pointing to them when he said their names. Edward, the one who looked like Adonis, smiled crookedly over in my direction; something about that smile just screamed, "I'm cocky and I know you want me." Oh great, a player…
Both Emmett and Jasper smiled the same smile at Rosalie and Alice, and with that, the three of us glared. All of us told each other that we hated men who were players. Angela, feeling awkward, sheepishly hid behind me. "Who knew your sister knew this little angel." Edward whispered loudly to Jasper, looking over at me, smiling and winking in my direction. I growled and almost went towards him, ready to wipe that smirk off, when Alice stopped me, glaring at Emmett and Edward.
"Hey, little sis. I didn't recognize it was you until Rosie introduced you." Emmett stated, smiling in her direction. Little sis? What the hell? "Rosie?" Rosalie questioned Emmett menacingly, snarling in Emmett's direction. I gave Alice a confused glance and she gave me one back, silently saying, "I explain later."
"Well, I guess it was nice meeting all of you pigs," I began, smirking when I saw their shocked faces. "But my lady friends and I have more important matters to deal with." I added, glaring at Edward and his friends. Hopefully Rose won't get mad at me for calling her brother a pig. "Like what? Going to get gussyed up for us?" Emmett asked cockily, smirking again and getting over his shock.
Both Rosalie and I growled and again tried to punch these two, but Alice stopped us. "Shut the hell up, Emmy. See all of you later – not." Alice growled, dragging us away. Emmett seemed shocked by Alice's nickname for him, but glared at her and stalked away with Edward and Jasper following after him. Edward sent one last wink in my direction, fueling my anger even more. "Alice, what was with Emmett calling you his little sister?" I asked her, growling and snarling just a bit. "I may have forgot to mention that Edward and Emmett are my brothers and that they go to this school." Alice said, before adding, "Adoptive brothers though."
"May, Alice?" Rosalie snarled, crossing her arms. Alice frowned and I stopped them from fighting with each other; we're supposed to be new friends and I didn't want them already fighting. "Look, let's make a deal with each other." Angela suggested, speaking up. "Since this school never had girls before, the boys are bound to be all players. So, let's just make a deal; we must promise each other to not fall for one of these guys at this school." Angela explained, placing her hand in the center of our little circle.
I stuck my hand in there; no way was I going to fall for a player when I've already went through it – I'll explain later when it comes to it. Alice then stuck her hand in next, and finally Rosalie did the same. "We promise to not fall in love with a player on this campus." We all said at the same time, smiling at one another.
Extremely short beginning, I know!
So, was it good enough for all of you?
Here's something to clear up something I guess:
~The story of this HSNE will be somewhat similar to the old one, except most of characters will be undergoing new changes. As you can see, Edward, Jasper and Emmett are already OOC, and so will Rosalie, Alice and Bella. Most of the characters – all same from the old version of HSNE – will be the same, but some may or may not, change throughout the story.~
I have a ton of ideas already for this new version, but I need all of you to tell me whether this new version already sounds good or not! Without your personal opinions and reviews, I probably won't be able to reveal said ideas.
Also, I need some help. If you readers would be nice enough and if you know any, can you tell me some cocky/perverted pick up lines for Edward, Jasper and Emmett, then some snappy/witty comebacks for Bella, Alice and Rosalie? Since the guys are players and they want the girls, then I need them to have some cheesy, perverted pick up lines for them and then I need some comebacks for them as well, since they won't give into them so easily.
Plus, this story will be lots more musical and more OOC – as you can see. The girls of the school will be cockteasers and I mostly envisioned that during the school year, the girls and the guys will at least sing more than they did in the old version of HSNE.
So, reviews – nice or light critique – are really appreciated for me and my Beta Reader, and be honest about this new version of HSNE!
Bye for now,
~*Lady Lily of Darkness*~
(By the way: MERRY CHRISTMAS! I loved all the gifts I got for my Christmas, and I hope that your holiday - whether you celebrate Christmas/Hanukah/Kwanzaa - went well!)