hello fellow readeers

yes... this is my 1st post! cheers but please don't kill me OO im just a beginner at these things TT hides

well hope you enjoy it... i wrote it after that episode when Shadow was remembering Maria on the Railway or Highway >.

Shadows emotions... I WROTE

Shadow Emotions

As the cold breeze brushed through my fur,

My mind forgot everything I knew, like a blur.

I looked at the emerald shining so bright,

Thinking how easy it was stealing it at night.

When I stared at the police, they were hiding in the dark,

I muttered "There not deadly like the soldiers in A.R.K".

Suddenly I remembered my memories of the past,

ARK, Dr.Gerald, G.U.N., Maria, I remembered so fast.

I shook my head and looked at the humans below,

But still my memories are operating slow.

Maria... she was the first thing on my mind,

Blue eyes, blond hair, blue clothes and sweet kind.

Now I remember G.U.N attacking the space colony long ago,

Dr. Gerald done something bad, or maybe me, I don't know.

When they came in there were 100 soldiers coming our way,

Maria and I ran to the pods, but she made herself stay.

She pushed me into a pod and crawled to the control panel,

I hit the pod, shouting to stop, cause she wasn't feeling well.

She stared and said "Shadow, do it for me, I beg of you don't cry",

I stared at her, looking sad, thinking to myself 'why'.

She stared at earth, then stared at me and said "good-bye",

I hit, I yelled, I cried because she's going to die.

When her fist hit the switch, my eyes dropped a tear,

I looked up and watched Maria, ARK fade away with fear.

The police sirens came into my mind again,

My heart, my happiness, my love was all in pain.

I clenched my fist and looked back down,

My happiness smile turned into an evil frown.

Dr. Gerald told me earth was a beautiful place,

He lied, they killed her and it's never safe.

I'll kill them all, every single one will pay,

For what they did to her on that terrible day.

Nothing will ever make me happy or care,

Because Maria's dead, it's something I can't repair.

please review, i wanna know how good or bad this poem is > "