TMF: Hey guys! Hope you enjoy the story. Flames are not advisable, as I am a pyromaniac and would most likly burn something down with them. Constructive critisism is, however welcome. Just don't review to tell me my story sucked. Tell me WHY it sucked. ok?
By the way, TMF stands for the moonlit fire. You know...my penname.
Disclaimer: I own nothing except for a sword...And it's so dull it can't even cut a piece of paper. Trust me. I've tried.
"SIT!" was the only sound heard for miles throughout the forest on a late night in June.
"What was that for!" replied a disgruntled hanyo after the spell 'finally' wore off.
"We're all tired and want to stop for the day, OK? So just lay off the slave-driving and let us rest!" said, or rather, shouted, Kagome. "And before you even start, if you don't let us stop right this instant, there'll be no ramen for you tonight! Mwahahahahahahahah…(etc.)"
" I think Kagome might have hit her head a little too hard during that last battle, ne Sango?" whispered Miroku.
Sango just shook her head and shrugged.
fluffyfluffy A few minutes later, and Sango and Kagome are at the hot springs fluffyfluffy
Kagome sighs in enjoyment of the warm water, then a mysterious, sadistical smile creeps its way on to her face.
"Hey Sango……………."
"Uuuuummmmmmmm………….yes Kagome?" asked an incredibly freaked out Sango.
"Wanna play a game?"
"What kind of game?"
"Well….I was thinking of ZAP!"
"And what is this ZAP you are talking about? I like to know what a game is about before I play it."
sigh "Well, it goes like this, you write ZAP on the back of someone's hand, in this case you, as well as a time limit. Then, on the inside of their hand, you write someone's name. The person is not allowed to look at the name until the time expires, otherwise, they have to ask whoever's name is on their hand to go out…..errrrrr…….I meant, court them."
"I don't…"
"Please! smirk Unless of course you think you wouldn't be able to handle it."
"You're on!"
Kagome then writes a name on Sango's hand. She cannot look at it for three days.
(AN: Kagome's a bit harsh, ne?)
fluffyfluffy the next day fluffyfluffy
'Man. This is harder than it sounded.' Thought a distracted Sango.
The group didn't run into anything.
fluffyfluffy the day after the next day fluffyfluffy
'Ergh! I don't think I can stand this much longer…………AHH! Who cares. It isn't like she would put down Miroku. Kagome isn't that cruel.'
Sango, after a day and a half,fell prey to the game known as ZAP andlooked at her hand.
"WHAT! KAGOME! How could you put HIM of all people? WHY!"
Who was him? How come Miroku and InuYasha are too stupid to notice Sango has writing on her hands for a day and a half? Find out the answer to the first in the next chapter! The second question is simply unanswerable, thought I bet everybody in the InuGumi besides them wishes it could be answered. Oh well. That's their problem.
By the way, that was only a day and a half. Sorry if I confused anyone. I even confused myself. There was the day she was zapped, but that didn't count since they played the game right before bed. Then there was the next day, and the day after that. The day after the next day was the second day after Sango was ZAP'ed. I'm confusing myself again, so I think I'll stop trying to explain things now.
Ja ne minna! (good bye, everyone!)
'Till next chapter!
oh yeah………..and since this is my first fic, I would appreciate a review or two letting me know how I'm doing.
the moonlit fire
