Authors Note: Okay, so I'm back. I've decided to make one these about abused she-cats, because I love both EagleClan and BumbleClan's story, so I've decided to do my own. Credit for the idea goes out to them, so no flames for that. Here we go...
In a forest, far away from the wrath of EagleClan and BumbleClan's ways, was scattered groups of rouges and loners, both of which lived either alone, in pairs, family's or in mishap groups. They all fought constantly, and many deaths came upon the forest. One tom came to this forest, though, and his name was Pine.
Pine was a very handsome reddish-brown tabby tom, with white front legs as if he had fallen in snow up to his chest. Pine's voice soothed she-cats like honey, and his twisting ways made them completely fall for him. Pine seemed to be a sweet, wonderful tom, every she-cats dream. Pine was coning. He would lure a she-cat with him, and pretend to love and respect her for quite some time. It wasn't until Pine craved a new she-cat that he would simply kill her and be off to set for a new 'mate'.
Pine came across a ran down rouge, his fur plastered to his ribs, and his eyes bloodshot. He told Pine about a clan that he had seen, BumbleClan, and their ways. Pine was very interested in this, and listened to the rouges stories about how BumbleClan treated their she-cats, like dirt, and would often abuse, and sometimes even kill them. Pine knew what he wanted: To start a clan just like BumbleClan's, a she-cat abusing one.
Pine and the rouge agreed to do this, and captured every single rouge in the forest. Pine, the rouge Finch, and their prisoners came across a clearing in a forest that suited them, and there, they started PineClan. Pine tortured the she-cats all the same, and never had a single drop of mercy. Pinestar couldn't grasp she-cats like he could usually do, now that they knew all of his tricks and schemes.
Pinestar then started falling for a she-cat by the name of Echoheart. She fell for him too, and they had kits together. Echoheart died giving birth to their one kit, a she-kit, who sadly died of greencough the next day. Pinestar then thought that every she-cat was so useless, and made new laws for them. The current medicine cat was a tom, who had received a sign from StarClan saying that they agreed with Pinestar's ways. PineClan was then made toms in order, with she-cats treated like foxdung. And so the new laws where made for she-cats and toms:
- Leaders mates have their last name -petal, deputies mates -feather, medicine cat's mates -pool, warriors mates -wing, unchosen she-cats -flower, and elder she-cats -cloud
- Toms are allowed to beat or kill his mates. He always will get an new one after.
- Medicine cats are forbidden to lay a harmful claw on their mate, or they will be looked down on by StarClan
- If a she-cat tries to kill her mate, she will be killed herself