Hey Guys so this is just a small FF I wrote. It might not make sense but basically it is when Rose is hunting Dimitri in Blood Promise and she believes she is going to die doing this, just paragraphs picking up on certain trail of thoughts that's why it's so disjointed. Yeah I suddenly had a burst of inspiration whilst listening to a song; sadly I can't remember which song it was. Not some of my best work but oh well, u only improve with practice and helpful suggestions. And I finally wrote a story in 3rd Person YAY for me! :D maybe that's why it's so bad, let's go with that and say it's not due to my sucky writing :p Soz I'm babbling on with the story
Richelle Mead owns all characters and stuff. So enjoy.
The pain. The never ending pain. It was heart breaking. Shattering her insides with every sob that wracked her body, every memory that flooded her head. Taking her over completely. The only words evading the memories was a mantra. One mantra, the one that she had followed for the past three months. Dimitri. Kill Dimitri. Save his soul. Dimitri. Kill Dimitri. Save his soul.
Thud. Thud. Thud. Thud. Thud. Like a beating drum punching her in the gut with every pound. Every night she got up to hunt. To hunt the man she loved. To hunt her other half. So did he. But it was to prey on the innocent. To drain every ounce of life out of them just so he could live another day.
That night. That one fateful night they had given into temptation and brought themselves together in one fiery night of love, lust and passion. After all those months of tears and denied feelings. They had finally caved. Only to have it ripped away from them in one agonizing moment. One mistake and it ended it all. He had lost his battle and had become one of them. The things we despise. The things we hound. The undead.
What if? Those two words would forever haunt her. Things could be different now; only if she had listened to Masons warnings. But she hadn't. She was scared; she thought she was going crazy. She couldn't go back and change things no matter how much she wanted to. But that's life. All we can do is accept it and deal with the consequences. No one ever said life is fair. Was it fair that she had to kill the man she loved? Was it fair that she was alone? Was it fair that she had to see one of her best friends murdered? She had walked out on anybody who had ever cared for her, anybody she had ever cared for to do this.
It feels never ending. She doesn't think she'll never make it home. She's accepted her fate. Yes, this was a suicide mission. Yet she still dared to go. She would kill him even if she died trying.
But she was okay with that. Because she knew it all ends with her final blood promise. Her final battle.
This woman will die. But she will die content in the arms of her dead lover as she takes her final breaths and slips into a never ending sleep.
Her name is Rose Hathaway and she; is a legend.
So there it is. Sucky I know. Review! Constructive criticism is really appreciated. :D Have a fantastical day!