Hi everyone! This is my first Fan Fiction on here, I've written a few others but never published them. This story is an alternate ending (sort of) to Insurgent. It begins right when she opens the blue door to enter Jeanine's office. It's more bloody and gory than the original- just a warning! LOTS OF SPOLIERS! Any advice or anything is always appreciated. :)

TRIS POV-

When I open the blue door in front of me, I scream. I hear the fire of a gun and feel intense pain in my arm. Clutching the wound, I fall to floor to look up and see Tori with gun pointed at me.

"I thought you were waiting for your heroic boyfriend to return." She said to me, but it wasn't like the Tori I knew..a deeper, more snake like voice came out instead of hers. I slowly rise to my feet.

I gathered my thoughts when I see Jeanine shaking and silently crying in a chair. "Don't kill her!" I do my best not to sound weak and scared.

"Traitor!" Tori screams. "You shouldn't try to protect her!" She fires again, but I am too quick for the bullet to hit my heart. I run towards Tori, and kick her where her bullet wound is. She screams and falls to the floor, dropping her gun. I reach for it, but she is faster and grabs it before I do.

I throw myself on top of her, fighting for the gun she has. I scream for Christina- who waited on the stairs for she had been shot in the leg. I scramble off of Tori and back a few feet away from her, thinking of a new tactic to attack her.

But Tori thinks before I do and shoots me in the leg. I scream in pain as my knees buckle, forcing me to the ground. "I thought I could trust you. I thought I knew you. But it turns out you're just an Erudite in disguise." Tori hisses at me. The blood from the wound in my arm is covering my hand and elbow. I can't even see my skin on my right arm, just the sticky blood.

"You can. She has information we need." I say, but I don't sound as strong as I did earlier.

Tori walks around me in a circle examining me, smirking when she sees what she's done. But she leaves me to my pain and walks back to Jeanine. "How should I kill you?" She says, speaking to herself, mostly. While she whispers to Jeanine about ways that she could kill her, I crawl to the back of the room, under a table, blood leaving a trail behind me. I need to gather some sort of a plan.

CHIRSTINA POV

I hear Tris's cry for help. I stumble to stand, but I hear footsteps behind me. What now? I think to myself.

"Christina?" it's Uriah. I turn around and see Four standing with him a gun in hand, pointed at me. I bite my lip to keep from crying out. Tris needs me, but if Four goes in, I know he and Tris will be over. That would cause Tris more pain then whatever she is in now. But even more importantly- we won't find what the Erudite stole from the Abnegation. But, I decide to myself, if she calls again, I will go.

"Sit. Against the wall. Both of you." I pull out my gun and point it at them. "I'm not afraid to shoot."

"Neither am I." Tobias almost smiles at me. But I know that if I don't do this, they'll go past me. I inhale and…fire at his hand. His gun goes flying to my feet and I bend down and pick it up, shaking as I do so. Four doesn't scream- but Uriah sure does.

Whimpering, and holding his hand, Four sits against the wall. Uriah looks from Four to me and sits too. "I..I..Chris..Christina? Are you..are you okay?" Uriah stutters. I want to yell at him NO OF COURSE I'M NOT! But instead I just look away, up the stairs, where Tris is. I wonder what she'd think of what I just did. I grab the railing to steady me as I shake.

Four seems to catch on. "What's up there?" he nods to where I was just looking. I exhale loudly.

"Nothing you need to know." I don't recognize the voice. It's not mine.

He looks at me like he is still my instructor-scolding me for throwing a knife wrong. "Oh, but I think I do." His eyes gleam. I'm about to shoot him again when I hear a scream.

"Tori?" Uriah breathes. I sigh. Tris is okay. For now.

Four stands up. I turn on my heels and point one gun at him- and the other at Uriah. "It would be wise not to move."

"As a leader of Dauntless, I command you to move or you will become factionless." Four hisses at me.

"Dauntless doesn't even exist anymore." Now I'm hissing too. "Don't you see?" I stifle a laugh, "The factions don't even exist anymore."

Uriah almost stumbles, "Yes. Yes. Yes they do." He stutters again. "They do." He says it again as if to reassure himself.

"Christina! I could use your help right now!" I suck in my breath and my eyes go wide. So much for Four not knowing.

"Tris?" Now Four is stuttering. I turn around and don't look back. Tris needs me.

TRIS POV

I rack my brain for ideas. But I can think of is how badly I need a gun, why in the world I didn't grab one, and how could I be so stupid? I know Christina has a gun, maybe I could yell for her and ask for her gun? But then Tori would hear me. I could leave and get it? Tori would see me. I decide my best option is to just tackle Tori, try to get her gun, and then yell for Christina if all else fails.

I take a few deep breaths and while Tori's back is turned to me, I lunge. I grab her hair and pull her to the ground. "Traitor! You're a traitor. I was a fool to actually trust you." She whispers. I know she's right. I knocks me off my guard, actually mentally accepting that I am in fact, yes, a traitor. Tori sees my eyes go elsewhere and flips me over.

We have now switched positions. I'm the vulnerable one, she's the one with the power. She aims her gun. I yell for Christina.

TOBIAS POV

Was that..Tris? No, no it couldn't have been. Tris is safe in the Abnegation sector. That's what she said at least. Just like she said she wouldn't go to Jeanine Matthews when she knew she was going to die.

Of course. It is Tris. This is the type of things she would do. I don't want to believe it, but I follow Christina anyway.

TRIS POV

I try not to cry out as Tori places her foot on top of me. Her gun pressed to my forehead. "I never met such a disloyal Stiff." She scoffs at me.

I summon all the dignity I have left to say, "I'm Divergent."

"That doesn't affect your loyalties, Tris." I hear the bullet click into place. I hear Jeanine take big gulps of air. I can't see her, but I know she must be sobbing. I can also hear footsteps. Coming this way.

I look up to see an up-side down Christina. She jumps, and kicks Tori in the stomach. Tori fires her gun. Because she was knocked off balance, it hits the inside of my ear- not my face. I scream as all I hear is ringing in my left ear. Blood gushes out down my neck. Tori falls back to the floor. "I thought you might need some backup." Christina half- smiles at me.

I hold out my hand and she hands me a gun. But I notice she has two, who the second one belongs to, I have no idea. "Great timing." She nods. I take a deep breath and walk up to Jeanine Matthews. Christina aims at Tori, who after some shouting, obeys and sits quietly.

"Hello, Jeanine." I say coldly. I press my gun to the side of her head.

"Beatrice." She whimpers.

I smile. "I believe you have some information I want." I push her chair to the computer nearby. "I want you to send it to all of the factions." I click the gun into place and press the down harder.

"You don't have it in you to shoot me." She holds her arms and makes a stubborn face. I see Christina biting her lip, looking like she had just seen a ghost.

I sigh and say, "Oh, I believe I do." I aim the gun at her foot and fire. She screams and I hear somebody suck in their breath. She grabs her foot and starts crying. I hiss in her ear, "Put your foot down right now, and do what I told you to do." I press the gun back into her forward. Jeanine breaths in quick, small breaths. Holding back tears. I almost feel sorry for her, almost. When I remember all the people she killed, what she did to Tobias and me. Tobias. My breath catches on his name. I feel tears streaming down my face, but it only makes me press the rim to her face harder.

Then, I can't hear anything.

My eyes start to go blurry all I can see is blood. I start to cough, and choke up even more blood. How much blood have I even lost? I think. I feel shaking on my shoulder.

TOBIAS POV

When I enter the room, Tris is covered in blood. I can barely see her clothing, her skin. I don't know if that's her blood or if it's someone else's. She's talking to Jeanine, but I can see is the blood streaking her face, her beautiful face. I scream her name, but she doesn't move she doesn't even flinch. I catch Christina's eye, and she moves forward. Saying her name, trying to keep her voice as steady as possible. Christina moves toward Tris carefully taking each step with caution. But when Tris doesn't answer to her either, her knees break and she falls to the ground. She starts to cry, but again, Tris doesn't even move, she coughs up blood instead.

I don't why Tris is ignoring us, but I go up to her and shake her shoulder, trying to get her attention. She screams, and looks my way. I stop breathing, Tris has lost too much blood. Her eyes find mine, and she falls to the floor.

I scream.

Christina, Uriah, and I rush to her side. Jeanine tries to get up. "We didn't tell you to get up!" Christina screams.

"She's a traitor! Leave her." Tori hisses at us from the side of the room. Her eyes are cold.

I feel her pulse. Tris is still there. She is still mine and I am still hers.

I'm going to be adding another chapter soon! Thanks for reading!