Hey, first Fanfic! This is going to be lousy, I just know it -.-'. But I'll improve, I hope. This is a one-shot test so I could get used to writing with other people's characters. Which is considered easy because they already have their personality and all you need is the story, well here it is, hope you like it.
Brick's POV
After Him was defeated, my bros (Boomer and Butch) and I had to get out of town. It has been a years since we left, so we are actually one year old even though we look like we're 11.
While we were gone, I figured the Powderpuff hags were practically worshipped for saving the world. The thought made me sick that they had all the glory, I found out later that wasn't the case, we don't watch the news, but who does?
Well, we're back now to get some sweet revenge. Right now, we looked like ordinary guys minding our own business, when BAM! Someone slams right into me. The same happened with my brothers.
"Hey watch it!" I growl. All six of us are on the ground.
I look up and see cotton candy pink eyes looking at me with concern. I swear my heart skipped a beat. She smiled apologetically showing pearly whites. Her bright sunset hair flowing down to her waist tied by with a red bow; she offers a hand and I gladly take it. I think I see a slight blush when I gripped her hand. I feel my face get a little hot too.
A year ago, I would have complained about cooties but that was then and this is now.
"I'm sorry; I wasn't looking where I was going." She says and looks at her watch, eyes widening. "Oh no, we're late. Come on Kaoru, Miyako we better hurry."
Without saying goodbye, she dashes off with two other girls following close behind.
I didn't even get a name before she left, oh well, it's a small city. We'll meet again soon.
Something in the back of my mind was saying she somehow looked familiar.
I brushed the feeling aside and smirked at Butch and Boomer. They seemed to be in their la la land. I snap my fingers to get their attention.
"Hey, who wants to get some candy?" I asked
"We do!" Boomer cries.
"Old fashion way?" asked Butch.
"Old Fashion way," I answer with my brothers following behind.
Okay, not much going on but I'll make a sequel with a lot more action. If you want, you could add some suggestions on what you want the sequel to be like and I'll be happy to try and add them. R&R. (This feels like a failure -.-')
