Ok i remade the story Starting over so it would be less fast and stuff and i have better grammer now.
Please review to tell me if i made it better!
Chapter 1
My mom always said to give people a chance and when I did they turn around and stab me in the back. That is why I am on my way to Forks, Washington. It is time for a fresh start.
The plane just landed and I was lugging my stuff out. Why is this so HEAVY! Oh wait, I packed a lot of books oppss hehe.
I got to the information desk and was waiting for my dad when I had someone pick me up in a huge hug.
"Em . . . down," I said and with that let go and I was wobbling around and then another person hugged me, but not as much.
"Hi dad,"
"Bella you go so big, here Emmett, take Bella's bags to the car, and Edward help her to the car."
"Edward? Who's Edward?" I don't remember Edward the last time I was here.
"Oh I forgot to tell you, the Hale's and Mason's are getting there house remodeled so some of the family is staying with us and some are staying at the Newton's."
"Wow" then I got introduced to Edward Mason and Rosalie Hale, Rosalie is a tall blond that is very beautiful and Edward is a god. He has bronze messy, but very cute hair and god like features and the most breath taking thing was his emerald eyes.
"Bella, hellooooo, do I have to carry you to the car." Edward said and that brought me back.
"No, I can walk there." Then I turned around and tripped over my feet I prepared to hit the floor, but I never did I then opened my eyes and I was staring and Edward. There was not that much space between us. Then again I was brought back by Rose's giggling and I pulled away and followed Emmett.
The car ride was silent, but not the awkward kind. And the whole ride I could feel Edward stare at me. And when I would look at him he would quickly look away.
"Okay, Bella do you remember where your room is." I nodded "Oh and Rosalie and you are sharing your room." "Okay" and then I followed everyone up stairs. I would trip a little, but nothing big.
When Rose and I got up stairs, I started to unpack. "Do you what help," she asked pointing to the bag with books and shoes. "Okay"
After I was done unpacking I flopped down on my bed and Rose was lying on her side next to me.
"You like my little bro don't you," she said with a smirk and to me it was a little smug.
"I do not," I said. I could feel the heat rising in my cheeks. Dammit I get embarrassed so easily!
"I'm serious the way you two look at each other says something. And the way you space out says it all. Oh this is awesome now we got a date for Edward. Oh would you like to go to dinner with us tomorrow night." She looked so excited and she gave the puppy dog eyes.
"Fine Okay" Then she raced out of the room and called Alice. Damn those puppy dog eyes!
I sighed. "Is going on a date with me that bad," Edward said out of the blue.
"Oh, my, gosh! Don't do that." I screamed
That made him chuckle. "Dinner is here." And he walked out of the room.
The rest of the night went well. After Charlie went to sleep we played truth or dare and stuff like that and everyone asked me a lot of questions.
"Soooooooo my little sissy what have u been up to with mom?" Em asked
"Not much, she got remarried about a year ago to a guy named phil. He is a minor league baseball coach so they travel a lot." I said
"OH NO my poor little sister has to stay all alone in a big house!" Em said while trapping me into a bear hug for the second time today.
"Em can't…… breathe… again," I barely choked out.
"Oh sorry forgot about that." Em said and let go with a sheepish grin.
We all stared to laugh and then I yawned.
"Time for little Bella to go to sleep." Edward said.
And then I fell on a pillow on the floor and went to sleep.
"ISABELLA SWAN GET UP," shouted Rose.
"I'm up, I'm up."
"Good because we are going to make you beautiful."
"No I want to sleep some more."
"ISABELLA GET UP NOOOOOOOOOW."
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!"
Alice and Rose picked out my clothes and put a bunch of make-up on me. They said that I would be the center of attention of all the boys in the school.
On the way to school was not much different from the ride from the airport except that Alice and Jasper were here too. When I walked up to the front desk and got my schedulable, first was English.
When I walked in I was surprised by the reactions of everyone when I walked in. I walked up to the teachers desk gave him the little slip and sat down. When I was starting to leave when the bell rang there was a blond boy with blue eyes and kinda had a baby face, but it was cute.
"Hi" he said with a smile.
"Hi"
"My name is Mike"
"Mine is-
"Isabella"
"Bella for short"
"What class do you have next" I can tell we are going to be friends.
"Umm Spanish I think." Then a very interesting smile appeared on his face.
"Me too may I walk you to class"
"Kay"
The walk was not very quiet. Mike is a person that you can talk to a lot.
"Here we are" he said very cheery but then lost that cheeriness when he looked inside. There was Alice that cannot keep still when she saw me and Edward that was looking just as happy but it was covered in anger when he saw Mike.
Mike took his seat and I went to the teacher's desk. He signed my slip and told me to sit between Edward and Mike. The whole time it was very tense.
Forth period was lunch. I followed Alice to the table we sat at.
"Alice, do you know what happen in Spanish?" I asked.
"Bella do know why Edward was so different in Spanish." I shook my head and took bite of my ravioli. "Well, a year ago Edward was dating a girl named Jessica and he thought he loved her, but right before prom she dumped him for Mike and then every girl he would like Mike would ask them before Edward would have a chance."
"Please don't do that to Edward, Bella" Emmett pleaded.
"We think he is really starting to like you and we don't want him to get hurt again"
I smiled "I won't do that to Edward."
Then everyone cheered.
The rest of lunch and school went well. I had biology and Gym with mike and thank god only Biology with Edward and not gym. I got to sit next to Edward again. They were right Mike is a huge pig. He keeps falling and getting hit in the head because he was looking at all the girls. And when he would make a basket he would look at me, smile and winked. Then Emmett would throw the ball at his head very hard. It made me giggle and mike would blush and throw death glares at my brother.
The way home was the same, silent. But Edward was very tense. When we got home, Edward just got out of the car and ran up stairs. I did the same, but not as fast. Rose and Alice then came in. Rose had a dark blue dress and matching flats and Alice had a make-up kit and a hair kit.
"It is time to get you ready!" Said Alice, with a very mischievous smile. I'm scared.
"Go in the bathroom and put this dress on." Rose said with the same smile. Then she threw the dress and flats at me. Thank god they weren't heels. I cannot afford to be in the hospital tonight.
"I have to admit you look pretty hot."
"Bella you are drop dead gorgeous," said Rose. And Alice wouldn't stop giggling. I swear sometimes I think she is a 5 year old.
"Alice stop giggling you are going to ruin your make-up, and I'm not redoing it," Rose said, but then she stared to giggle twice as much. Then she and Alice were rolling on the floor.
"Stop it you guys, why are you so giddy."
"We have a huge surprise for you Bella," they said together.
The car ride was much, much better. Edward wasn't so distant, but he keep staring at me. Which made me blush which made Alice and Rose giggle even more.
When we arrived there had people open our doors. But Edward opened my door and helped me out. And he didn't let go of my hand. When we were inside there was a strawberry blond hostess. When she saw Edward, she puffed out her chest.
"How many will there be here today," she asked. Then Edward let go of my hand and put his arm around my waist. "Six please," he answered very coldly.
When she led us to our table, she swayed her hips a lot. Then she sat us down and walked of but not before she could look glanced and Edward every so offend and shot glares at me.
Then the most surprising thing happened.
"Bella?" said a very confused voice.
When I looked I saw Mike, in uniform with a puzzled look that chanced to anger when he looked at Edward's arm and then happy when he looked at me.
"What are you doing here?" he asked leaning really close to me.
"She is having a date with me. Do you mind?" Edward said very stern. And then he pulled me close to me and kissed me on the cheek. And I blushed. I most have looked like a strawberry. Then Mike looked mad really mad.
An then the rest of the night cared on like that with me getting little kiss every once in a while, But when mike tried to give my his number Edward took at and ripped it up right in front of Mike and before Edward could lunged at him I kissed him on the lips and he settled down.
Mike looked really anger and everyone else was surprised.
When we got home I changed and crashed, but I was awakened by a booming noise and my bed shaking. I sat up to see Emmett jumping on it.
"What the hell are you doing Emmett." I said while getting out.
"I'm your new alarm clock," he said and jumped on the ground making it shake. It was like an earthquake. "Apparently Rose can't get you up herself."
"What was that shaking? Why is Emmett in Bella's bedroom?"Edward said rubbing his eyes.
"I'm Bella's new alarm clock." he shouted.
"SHHHHHHHHH the whole neighborhood will hear you!" Edward and I shouted in unison. I blushed and he had a shocked look on his face, but quickly composted it.
"Breakfast is ready." Edward said and left.
"What it up his butt. He looks like someone killed his puppy." I stared at him. That is a weird way to describe how Edward looks but ok.
"I don't know." He didn't look to good.
We went down stairs to see two tables full of food.
"Something is definitely up." "Why do you say that?" "The way he vents is through cooking."
The whole ride to school was with Jasper and Emmett trying to make the best Yo Momma joke ever, and with Rose and Alice trying to plan a shopping trip to all of the stores with great clothes and great sales.
When we got to school Edward raced out of the car. Leaving me and the others dumbfounded.
"I deafeningly know what is happening here." Jasper said.
"What is it."
"He is very confused, jealous, and angry at himself." he answered.
"How do you know that." I asked a little confused.
"It is written all over his face." He said as if it was the mast normal thing ever.
"Do you know what it is about?" I asked.
"You, Mike, and himself."
Ok the newly edited chapter for my Story Starting Over hope you liked it.