Prologue
It has come to my attention that having a prologue to start the next epic of The Godforsaken Realms could impart another way of looking for what is to come in the chapters without giving too much away with spoilers. These chapters can even add to little surprises, okay big surprises, which will be in the Godforsaken Realms saga.
I have already written eleven chapters of The Tsufuru-jin Saga, and I know that I will be fusing in extra chapters that I discounted though a lack of care and understanding. I have a more lucid story line to follow than I did when The Tsufuru-jin Saga had nothing to do with epic of The Godforsaken Realms.
This view of unawareness of what I was to write and what it could have been is vastly decreased for the edition you will have available on this website. I have read what I have already wrote, and see some problems that you will never see and some problems that you wonder how I overlooked once again, or dare I say, added?
First of all, this fan fiction is a somewhat of an alternative universe variety that has Tsufuru-jins alive after the overtaking of the planet by the Saiya-jin, though all of the Tsufuru-jins remain underground or captives, while many naturally are dead. I have taken the most realistic I am going to get with the possibility that Tsufuru-jins are alive, because I have noticed my hotmail account (icozyi@hotmail.com if you already bolted off to send me some flames, and for the grammar aspect of the flame mail, icozyi@hotmail.com, once again for that last comment of my hypocritical cynicism) does not have the luxury in space for me to be a bad writer with bad ideas, which I think we can both like, though if you don't like this, I am not holding back to keep the fan mail from clogging up the bandwidth (icozyi@hotmail.com if you find my story rewarding to read, but also if you have some critical points that I should have not made. And yes, even this early on I need that grammar lesson I am sure from the readers).
For this alternative universe, with other authors' desires, I took this perspective to the history because I was frustrated by questions of why, of what I thought was a too perfect battle against a civilization that succeeded better than that of Earths, which is either canon or fanon details. So, this saga will look at the race as defeated but with some hope as the underground faction plans to free the captives and escape Planet Vegeta before the evident end pending with Lord Frieza (I use Freeza sometimes, but if you can read Frieza, you should have no problems with pronouncing Freeza).
The story strives to emphasize a convincing plot that recognizes the truths set out in the anime. You will not for whatever reason see the Tsufuru-jins prevailing, romance at all directed at the young Prince Vegeta or the suggestion of it, Frieza dying, the name of Goku's mother, or much of Goku, and many other eccentric stuff that could be found in a fan fiction like this including those silly group called the Ginyu Force. You will discern cameos of certain members of that team, but not in the group form now.
This saga is for people who want to know about those radio hijackers in The Godforsaken Realm, another fan fiction that I am writing. They appear in here, both Prince Jefiea and Stucha, and even the mentioned character, Jefiea. If you like Vegeta, which the fan fiction is only more amiable if you are just interested in him like myself who can see him both as a villain or a hero if the writing is good enough, you will get in it this saga. The focus of the action will contact to every tangent of fighting, and will be inclusive of most trendy genres with emphasis on the struggle of the oppressed functioning to gain freedom, while the theme of The Godforsaken Realm, deals with the opposite, as Conkenu has to forfeit freedom. Oh, was that a small little secret revealed? Nope, it's a very well known fact. Also, with much experience of my first Dragonball Z fan fiction posted on www.fanfiction.net, this one will be completely formatted.
The main goal in this is convey the reason of why Stucha, Jefiea, and Prince Jefiea have any reason to be in The Godforsaken Realm, because they will have an important part in that saga and I figured the best past to answer question, "Where did that come from?", which is a good question that needs a good answer.
In conclusion, I hope that people will enjoy this piece of writing, which will have the precision that was lacked in the first edition, and earlier chapters of the other saga.
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(icozyi@hotmail.com for comments about this stale user name shown above)
( for the Godforsaken Realm Saga, which I will apologize for the formatting, which doesn't look good until chapter seven)