The Horror Dream
( Everyone has a horror dream. Just remember that dreams are fake. Don't make them real!)
THEME- Don't let your dreams take you over.
SIGNIFICANCE OF CHARACTERS NAME- Melissa= Honeybee; Kelly= Bright- headed; Sarama= Bravery
IRONY- Dramatic
FORESHADOW- Never trust a girl with a dream.
INTRO- It was late October. It was actually Halloween night. I
was walking down 5th street in New York, where all the spray painted
buildings are. I was alone. Not one person in sight. That's all I can
remember. OH YEAH! I woke up in a van with a guy wearing a ski mask.
I must have been in a lethargy because, I don't remember much at all. All
I can really remember was that the guy wasn't anyone I knew. Of course I
don't know because he was recondite under that black ski mask. " Wow
that sounds awesome!" Said Sarama as she was smiling. " No it isn't!
I woke up scared to wait for the bus!" I said. " It is very conspicuous that
you had a lot of sugar before you went to sleep last night." Kelly said.
"Not even a bit!" I said snippy. " I've been getting these dreams for two
years now!" I said. "I think you should tell us each dream that you have
each night at lunch time! There awesome!" Sarama said exciting. It is
very obvious as you can see that Sarama loves my horror dreams! Also
she always tells me, "Don't trust a girl with dreams." Doesn't it fit me so
good? On the other hand, Kelly thinks that my horror dreams are stupid
and scary. Her parents are very archaic, so they don't even know that
horror exists. For me, I've been scared these years because, of my
horror dreams! That's all I can dream of! I'm going crazy! I am just in
sixth grade! That's imminent that I'm failing classes because whenever
my mind gets thinking, it shows me flash backs of my horror dream I had
that night.
RISING ACTION- It was the next day in the lunch room of New York
Climbs Elementary School. I was telling my horror dream, to grant
Sarama's wish. " Yeah, so then I was locked in a small room of the
predators house then…." BBBBBBEEEEEEEPPPPPP! The bell rang. "
Man you didn't get to finish telling the horror dream!" Sarama said as we
were walking out of the lunch room. Sarama asked " What's our next
class?" I started to think. "UMMMmmm…." I coalesced the wall of the
hallway to hold me up. I had a flash back of my dream. Me getting shut
the tiny room of the predators house. " Are you ok?" Sarama asked with
a worried look on her face. " Yeah" I said starting to get my balance back.
Sarama remembered which class she had next. I didn't though, after what
had just happened. So I went up to my science teacher Mr. Mark, and he
exalted every class that I had for the rest of the day. It was about 1:00.
About one more hour of school left! I very exulted about that! At the same
time though, I wasn't because of my dream I had two nights ago. It was
finally the end of school! It felt like the most extraneous day ever! I fell
asleep on the bus. I had a bad dream. It was about a witch who cast a
incantation spell on me. I couldn't stop singing. Couldn't even catch my
breath! Then I got an idea!
CLIMAX- The next day at lunch I told my idea to Sarama. " So
we go to 5th street where people go to steal children. Then we wait until
the guy in the van with the ski mask comes by with the van. When he is
about to steal us we fight him!" " I am sooooooooo in!" Sarama said
practically jumping up and down. I thought of this idea because, I thought
if I fought the ski mask guy, it would scare the horror dream right out of
me. Kelly must have overheard my idea that I told Sarama because she
came running over to me yelling. " Are you crazy! You've got to be out of
your mind!" " Kelly calm down!" I said trying to assuage her worried that
she would get the whole school's attention. " No I won't calm down!" She
said with her face all red. " It won't work, you know that right?" She asked
me still yelling. "Yes I do know that it won't work." I said to get her to be
quiet even though I know it will. " Just promise me that you wont do that! I
heard that the guy with the ski mask is very insuperable to run away from!"
She said now not yelling, but being more serious with me. " Yes I
promise." I said not meaning it. " I am just protecting you Malissa! I care
about you! I don't want you to get hurt!" Kelly said thoughtfully. " Oh
thanks Kelly!" We both gave each other hugs. Lunch was over and Kelly,
Sarama, and I were walking down the halls with each other. I whispered
into Sarama's ear, " Meet me at 5:00 at the intersection before 5th street.
" Ok" She said whispering back. I whispered, " Make sure that you stay
very assiduous When you wait for me. The ski mask guy might drive past
you!" " Ok" she said once again. It was my last class of the day. I was
trying to map out directions to get to my apartment on 31st street in New
York, to 5th street. Then I remembered that it is a indulgent road to find
because, it had no street lights. School was out and I was finally home
my money that I avarice over the years that I had my birthday, I can ride
bus to 5th street. I had $5.00. That would be plenty to ride the bus down.
It was 4:30 I had to get moving! By the time I got to 5th street and saw
Sarama there, I looked to see if I had any money left, but I squandered it
all on my way down. I felt penurious now that I didn't have any money left.
I will have to leave all of my worries in the back of my head now. It was
time to fight! Sarama and I just got down 5th street right at the nick of time
because the ski mask guy had pulled over and was trying to grab us! I
said " Come on Sarama lets do this!" It was too late though. The ski
mask guy came in back of me, and started to choke me. I knew now that
my horror dreams were over. For good.
FALLING ACTION- It was a week later. I could see the whole
world below me. I saw Kelly, Sarama, and a lot of other people at my
funeral. Kelly started to yell and freak out. She said " Why didn't she
listen to me?" Sarama said, " It's all my fault! I shouldn't have let my
father see me and pick me up! I should of helped Malissa! It was time for
my friend to stand in front of the church to debunk their feeling to words.
Kelly started " I found it kind of eccentric." She said crying into the
microphone. " That her dreams were so real. I should have helped her
more! I should have followed her feelings more than mine!" Kelly went on
for ten more minutes with her thoughtful speech.
RESOLUTION- Then it was Sarama's turn. " This ought a be
good!" She said. " OOOoooppppsss the microphone was on!" She said
now making the whole church filled with laughter. She started to say,
("never trust a girl with dreams.") She was know worried like. " Everyone
has horror dreams, but just remember that they are fake. Don't make
them real." Then Sarama froze with fright. The ski mask guy walked in….