Um, this is my first story, any helpful criticisms would be nice
sorry if its too ooc but thats how it works best, I do not own Naruto or any of it's characters, only mine.
enjoy part 1 of the adventure
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Her head hurt so badly. It was one of those headaches that wouldn't stop hurting until it had run its course. She went up to her room to listen to Moonlight Sonata and sleep. Sleeping always seemed to make the headaches stop sooner. Unfortunately, as soon as her eyes closed in her dark room, they opened to reveal a swirly orange mask over her.
"Holy shit!" Where was her room, her music? Why was there a weird person looking at her?
"She's awake! Leader-sama, she's finally awake!" yelled the orange face.
"Shut the fuck up, orange face. You're making my head hurt worse." And it was true, her head didn't feel the normal headache pain now, it was throbbing.
"Hidan, you come, too. I think she has the same language version as you." He said, now in just a loud voice, but it was better than the yelling.
"What the fuck do you mean by 'same language version,' we all speak the same language." says the white-haired man, presumably the 'Hidan' that orange face called.
"Tobi, do you realize exactly what time it is right now?" asked the orange haired man, who was, she guessed, the 'Leader-sama' he had called.
"I know it's early, but she's awake and she cusses like you." the last part he said to Hidan, and he sounded more solemn, Tobi was what Leader-sama had called him.
"Where am I?" she asked the general area.
"I didn't hear one damn swear word, so can I go back to bed now?" Hidan asked their leader.
"I don't swear when I don't want to, not to mention my damn head is throbbing and no one has answered my fucking question." She said getting more mad than confused now.
"You're not entirely hopeless, if you stay around me long enough, then someday you might be half as good as me, but don't yell so fucking early in the morning!" Hidan seemed to get more irritated as he spoke, while Tobi and Leader-sama watched in silence. The girl did something entirely unexpected; she got up and walked right up to Hidan and said with a great deal of menace,
"If you ever doubt my damn swearing skills, I'll cuss your bastard ass out the fucking door into the fucking mud pile where it belongs." Then she slapped his face and walked back to the bed and sat down. When she looked back at the three other people in the room, two were glancing between Hidan and the girl with a mixture of shock and fear. Hidan stared at her in shock with a mixture of joy and anger (joy for her cussing abilities and anger 'cause she slapped him).
"What?" she asked, innocence and confusion appearing in her voice. If her twin was here, he would be telling her that her mouth is going to get her into a lot of trouble in the future, and she, as per usual, would disregard his words. Hidan walked over and grabbed her neck and lifted her off the bed with an evil glare on his face.
"You will never lay your fucking hands on me again." He said in a deadly whisper. Tobi started to run to help her when Leader-sama said,
"Enough, Hidan. Put her down and leave, go back to bed." Tobi seemed more relieved and the girl, who had been very tense since Hidan had walked toward her, had visibly relaxed as he set her down and left the room.
"Tobi, you go, too." Said Leader-sama. After Tobi left, Leader-sama walked over and sat down next to the girl on the bed.
"Don't mind Hidan, I don't think a girl as young as you has cussed at, and then hit, him in many years." He said, almost gently, with a sigh.
"Where am i?" she had to know.
"You are at the Akatsuki base." He told her calmly, mentally preparing for the forthcoming barrage of questions.
"Where is this 'base', exactly?" she seemed to get more confused.
"In a mountain near the Sound country." He told her.
"How'd I get here?" she was even more confused and was resting her head in her hand.
"Tobi found you outside, collapsed in the field." He replied.
"Tobi is the orange faced gut, right? And when did I get outside anyway? The last thing I remember was listening to Moonlight Sonata and laying down for a nap in my room." She asked, somewhere between confused and sad.
"Yes and I don't know. But Tobi has been taking care of you until Konan was forced to come and order him to go to sleep and-or eat." He stated calmly.
"Wow, and who is 'Konan'? And where are my clothes?!" now, she was shocked, who had changed her clothes? A blue haired girl came in at that moment.
"I'm Konan and I changed your clothes, they were filthy and torn. I also ordered Tobi out of the room while I washed you up. By the way, you got one hell of a bump on your head."
Tobi came back in with a tray that had eggs, bacon, toast, and water on it. Her stomach growled like the angry Kyuubi. Everyone, except Tobi, stared in shock at her stomach. Tobi brought the tray over and put it on the other side of her on the bed, then he gave her a hug and said in a whisper that Leader-sama and Konan couldn't hear,
"I hope you enjoy your breakfast. I made it myself."
Now Leader-sama and Konan stared at Tobi in shock as he walked to the kitchen, clearly happy about something.
"Wow, Tobi must really like you. He usually only cooks for himself, and his cooking is amazing." Said Konan to the girl as she followed Tobi to the kitchen, in a voice filled with awe.
"Eat up." Leader-sama said. As he walked out, he fell entirely into his thoughts and glanced back to see the girl eating the toast as he shut the door.
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Thank you for reading. *happy now*
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