I do not own Maximum Ride, because I'm not JP. But, I do wish (with all my heart) that I did. And will someone tell me if I have severe grammatical errors and/or I suck at the details...in the form of...reviews?
PROLOGUE:
She carefully implanted the delicate string of avian DNA into the human embryo. This mix would be a mix of myioborus pictus and homosapian, painted redstart and human. Of course the doubts from coworkers and superiors, even her own husband, almost convinced her to stop the quest for a new, perfect human, in the beginning. But, now, it only spurred her on.
She impatiently brushed back some of her dark, wavy brown hair from her face. Perhaps it needed a cut, but her mother had always told her that long hair complimented her high cheek bones,small nose, and 'warm chocolate-brown eyes'-her husbands words, and...she just liked it.
She checked the microscope, looked away, and then did a double-take. While she was lost in her thoughts, the avian string successfully merged with the embryo! Her eyes widened, she thought it might work, but she wasn't completely sure, she thought maybe a couple of trials and errors, then she would succeed! Not on the first try though!
Now she needed a backup plan. Something to ensure that in the future, the embryo would absolutely be completely evolved, not a half-developed, tortured soul. She could...put the DNA in...a...food? Yes! A fruit...a...a...banana!
She quickly started spinning around, flitting from station to station, and prepping necessary equipment. First she tidied up station one by; putting the embryo up safely, making notes in her journal, cleaning supplies, and lastly, putting her findings on a secure hard drive. Next she prepped station two; disinfecting the table, getting the fruit, (one for her snack, and one for the experiment,) and getting the supplies.
Her mind was set on injecting the peel that would, according to her hypothesis, allow the DNA to be absorbed, how long and if it would work were the things she didn't know.
She injected the banana, then a few minutes later, started to peel it, lost in thought.
To this day, she doesn't know that the banana altered the genetic compound of the twins developing inside if her...yet.
Sorry if it isn't that long, I posted this from my phone, and I couldn't check the length.