Another story i have here to present to you. I hey, the show may be over, but there is always room for new ideas and is what I bring to you this fine afternoon.
After the episode Quite Minds, I've read some stories, in which Neal didn't dies, or come back from the death; myself, wrote a couple stories like that. But I bet 12,000 Dollars that nobody considered writing something like this idea I present to you guys the next page.
The following story is basically a retelling of Season 3B, in which Neal not only is alive, but also is the one who went to NY with Henry.
Now, in order to not become confused when reading the first chapter, which begins at the end of episode'' Going Home'' pay attention in what happened.
According to Neal´s new memory, he isn't son of Rumpelstiltiskin. He´s father was a simple drug addicted and his mother was a prostitute.
After run away from home, he spends some years in Tallahassee, married some woman who dies giving birth. In his new life he didn't meet Emma, or August, because they are just stories.
Instead, he´s is a Private Detective, who raised his son Henry alone. Until one day, Hook show up at his door.
One last thing, this story will not end quickly. First, because I have other ideas in mind. Second, because I want to keep the mystery.
Well, it's all for now, I feel that if I say anything else, I'll spoil the story.
Thank you all for your cooperation, have good fun and hunches and constructive criticism are welcome
Ana Serpico