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4 years after breaking dawn
Bella's point of view
surprise
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As me Renesmee and Jacob walked into the big house--after playing one of one of Nessie's favorite games, tag-- Alice ran over to me and handeed me a letter with a wide grin on her face--of course she already new what it was--I opened it and it was from Charlie and Sue it was a wedding invitation. I all but screemed at the top of my lungs for everyone to come down here, two seconds later me and Alice were surrounded by our family.
"Guy's Charlie and Sue are getting married!" I almost sang with joy. Renesmee jumped into my arms and pressed her hand to my cheek--she still wasn't to fond of speaking outloud but she did lots of the time, even though she was four but she looked like she was eight-- and showed me a picture of Charlie in a tux and Sue in a wedding dress she was thrilled. Then in no time at all I felt Edwards arms wrap around me. "Thats wonderful!" he exclaimed. Then I thought I heard murmers from the others but I wasn't sure because Edward had just kissed me.
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A month later me and Renesmee were in my oversized closet with Alice getting ready for Charlie and Sue's wedding "Alice," I moaned " why do I have to dress up? Nobody will reconize me." "Bella it does'nt matter if nobody will reconize you Charlie and Sue will and that's all that matters beside's it's there wedding that is one time you should dress up!" and with that I could'nt argue any farther. Alice had choosen me a black knee length spaghtti strap dress with black polka dots on it and black stilleoettes with a hot pink short sleve coverup. Renesmee on the other hand loved to be dressed up by her aunts and so Alice choose her a light purple dress with spaghetti straps and a white short sleeve cover up and white Alice had finished playing dress up on us she reminded me as we were running back to the big house. "Remember Bella if someone asks you who you are say that your Charlie's cousin," Alice said "and is they say something like 'you look kinda like Bella Swan' say thats because your her cousin. Alright?" "Ok Alice." Then she hugged me lightley around the waste. "Remember Nessie," Alice told her "dont show people your gift or do anything that you would around us." "Ok Aunt Alice" Nessie told her in her singing voice. "Um... Bella Nessie I think we should hurry." Then with that we took off at full speed.
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