Hi am kind of new but new at writing a story so tell me how it is and tell me honesty and if my grammars suck.
'thinking '
"SHOUTING"
"talking"
"communicating with kyuubi"
Disclaimer: Naruto belongs to Masashi Kishimoto
10 years ago, on October 10, there a giant red fox name The Kyuubi no Kitsune. He is one of the 9 Bijuu, and the most powerful than all the other Bijuus. Kyubbi attacked the Hidden Leaf Village. The Fourth Hokage had to protect his village because that what all kages would do even if it cost them their lives. He was ready to do the seal, to seal the beast into his son because he didn't have a chose. His sensei Jiraiya came and grab him and Jiraiya sensei, the former third Hokage did the seal that ended his life in order to save his successor. Minato Namikaze, the fourth Hokage, ran to Sarutobi to see him breathing really shallow.
"Minato...i-i-i couldn't...let you do it...you have a-a-a f-family now...and your still young to live out your ...l-l-ife." Sarutobi said with his last breath and was gone from the world.
What Sarutobi didn't know was that Minato wife, Kushina Uzumaki, pass away while giving birth. Minato and Jiraiya were very said that their mentor died until they heard the baby crying. Minato walked over to the crying baby and named him Naruto Uzumaki instead of Namikaze because he had some enemies and they will go after Naruto. Minato and Jiraiya went back to the damage village with Naruto. They will hold a funeral for Sarutobi Hiruzen, the former Hokage.