This is my first story and I don't know if I like it. The first three chapters will be introducing the girls then the story will start. To start we have Jane, James's twin.
Summary: the Marauders all have family but what if they had sisters.
Jane Potter
Jane Potter stood at the train station in Hogsmead her coat pulled tightly around her. The temperature had dropped with the sun on that winters day, you could see every student's breath as they boarded the train that had come late. Everyone was excitedly getting on; to go home for the holidays but Jane was still standing out of the train looking up the path back to the school. She breathed into her hands trying to warm them up but nothing seemed to be working. Looking up at the clear sky all of her worry was renewed as she saw the un-obscured full moon. She wanted to stay but the Marauders wouldn't have it, according to them it wasn't necessary they could handle it. Just a few days prayer they had each told her to go back home and have a good holiday.
The Gryffindor common room was nearly empty except for one girl sitting in a chair by the fire with a potions book in her lap. The assignment wasn't due for another two days but she couldn't bring herself to go to bed with out it being finished. The port hole creaked open and for boys walked in rather loudly arguing. "It's going to be the day we leave?" the timid of the grope asked meekly. "Yes" came the angry voce of the boy entering, he had longer hair then the rest and an air of rebellion to him. The next to speak was the sanest in the grope "we can't do anything about it, unless you know someone who can control the moon." He had light scars on his face that would only be noticed by someone looking for them. The finale boy had glasses he turned to look around the room and was the first to notices the girl sitting by the fire. "Jane! What are you still doing up?" He inquired looking at his twin sister, it was unusual for her to be up when they came back from a detention but there she was reading.
The girl in question looked up from her text book with a completely normal expression. "Why hello boys." She said looking at each of them be for continuing "well James, I had a potions essay that I wanted to finish and it appears I lost track of the time." Jane answered simply as if it was a daily occurrence. The boy with longer hair more commonly known as Sirius Black raised an eyebrow at her statement and asked in disbelief "how do you stay up late doing home work?" At this Remus rolled his eyes "she cares about school work."
The Marauders sat down around the fire spread out on the couch and availed chairs. With out missing a beat they picked up on their conversation about the upcoming full moon as if Jane was not there. "Then how are we supposed to go home?" Peter asked from the far chair. At this he received a shocked look from both Sirius and James. "We have to stay and help Moony!" Sirius said firmly as he looked at the mouse like boy. "We're going to stay no argument." James gave a meaningful look to Remus that said 'we are not leaving you now.' Jane looked at them all then smiled at Remus "I hope you know I'm staying too."
"NO YOU'RE NOT" three out of the fore Marauders nearly screamed at her. Leaning back in her chair and glared at them and hissed "quiet or do you want to wake the whole house?" that shut them up at least for a minute in till James decided to play the over protective brother. "Jane, you are going back home. If you stay you're not going to be able to do anything anyways. Go home have a nice holiday with mum and dad." Then Remus started "just because they want to stay doesn't mean you have to. In fact it should mean you have to go." "Do you want your parents wondering why both you and James are missing?" Sirius finished. Peter was just sitting there watching everyone maybe he could get out of it as well he thought to himself as he watched Jane's face go red. "I'm staying and that's final." She said firmly.
At this James and Sirius shared a look and everyone new she was in trouble. "No you're not" said James as Sirius got up and walked over behind her. Jane gave him a warning look but he ignores her and picked her up under his arm "SIRIUS BLACK! Put me down this instant!" the boys smirked as he did. He put her down right on the bottom step to the girls dormitory and pushed her up a few more being careful to never steep on them himself. "Good night Jane!" all the Marauders chimed in together as she started up the stairs knowing that they weren't going to let her back down.
That was 4 days ago and they had even had someone make sure she was at the train station that afternoon. The whistle sounded and Jane looked up once again as snow began to fall. "Come on Jane, the train is leaving soon" the red head Lilly Evens yelled out the nearest window. She bit her lip before turning around "coming!" she yelled over the train as she walked toured it. Shed right them in the morning.
I am so sorry for those of you who have red this and couldn't understand it because of all the errors. I honestly couldn't believe I didn't catch them when I went over it.