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Okay, this chapter is going to move fast and won't be that interesting but that's because I never really thought about what would happen until after they left the outpost town. After that it's more interesting.
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Torin had invited Ginny and Kelsey over so that they could watch the new episode of Naruto together! YAY! It was the beginning of Shippuden, where Deidara is fighting Gaara. DOUBLE YAY! Except…well, Ginny is a Deidara fangirl while Torin is a Gaara fangirl. CLASH! Kelsey kind of liked Gaara a little more, too. The night could have been more fun since Ginny was practically squealing at Deidara while Torin pouted about the Sand ninja.
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Ginny, Kelsey, and Torin all sat in a circle on Torin's bed as it started to get late. They weren't really sure what they were doing though. Kelsey let Torin wear one of her 'Soul Pouches.' It's an inside joke between Kelsey and Ginny. They have small metal pouches (fits in the palm of their hands) with a simple hinged lid. Seven round jewels encrusted both sides of the pouch and there was also one on top. The jewels were blue on Ginny's, green on Kelsey's, and yellow on Torin's. They pretend that they can steal the souls of others using the pouches. The three of them were all focusing their energy towards a certain part of their body: the lungs for Kelsey, the forehead for Torin, and the throat for Ginny (smart places to focus energy, right? -sarcasm-)
The three of them started to grin and all pointed the Soul Pouches at each other as if to steal the other's soul at the same time. Suddenly they felt a sucking feeling and tightness on their focus points. Ginny's throat closed, and she was unable to breathe. Kelsey's lungs constricted leaving her gasping for air. Torin's head was pounding in a painful migraine. Suddenly the three of them were surrounded by darkness and the sucking feeling became a pulling. The girls were still sitting yet it was like they were sitting on nothing. Ginny found the dark calming and peaceful, Torin didn't like the dark that much, and Kelsey, she just had a 'WTF!' look on her face.
After what seemed like eternity and yet lasted for a second, the three girls were thrown onto the ground. However, they weren't on a soft bed anymore. They were on hard earth. Dirt and grass and moss, surrounded by giant trees. Green light filtered in through the leaves. They all stared at each other, all wondering the same thing.
"WHERE THE HELL ARE WE?!"
The girls must have had a terrible strain on their bodies because they slowly fell into unconsciousness, one by one.
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As Torin opened her eyes she found herself in a bed. She slowly rose before falling back clutching her head and moaning, "DAMN! Why does my head hurt so fucking much?" When the door opened, Torin opened her eyes and saw someone wearing long cloaks…just like the ones doctors in the show Naruto wear. Holy fucking shit.
"You should not be moving," he said. "You suffered from a concussion and a cracked skull. However we managed to repair the damage." This doctor didn't sound like a doctor except for the smartness. He sounded like he didn't care what happened and that he was just there because he had to be. "Your friends are also fine." Torin looked to her side and saw two more beds, one with Kelsey and the other with Ginny. She heard a moan as they started to open their eyes. Kelsey's breaths were short and quick while Ginny's were long and slow.
"Okay, either my eye sight is a hell of a lot worse than I thought, or that's a medic-nin," Ginny stated, before stopping to breathe deeply again. "I am a medic-nin. And if your eye sight is so bad why haven't you had it healed yet?" the doctor guy asked.
"I can do that?" Ginny said, dumbfounded. The medic-nin resisted the urge to roll his eyes and nodded. He walked over to her and placed his now glowing hands over her eyes. When he pulled them away to look at Kelsey Ginny was looking around and Torin asked, "Well?" Ginny smirked and responded, "Epic." Kelsey now sat up, feeling much better, and looked around. "Hey, where-" she started to ask.
"We don't know," Ginny cut her off. She looked up at the medic-nin. "Hey, when can we leave?" she asked. "If you three do as you're told and stay in bed for an hour or two you can leave when you want." Aww, he cares SO MUCH! (SARCASM!)
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That hour was passed by the three girls discussing what was going on. That was a medic-nin. He used chakra. First thought, as usual, a dream but the pain was enough to stop that. As soon as the doctor came back and gave them the okay to leave they were gone.
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Walking down the road they decided that they might need new clothes, them being in their PJ's. "Small problem, we don't have any money," Ginnie said, being the negative one. They all frowned until Ginny suggested, "We could always do the wrong thing." When Kelsey and Torin looked at her she said, "Stealing." At their continuous looks she added, "Look, we need clothes and weapons, whether we can use them or not, and food. Do you people want to get killed?" Suddenly they were all aware exactly how dangerous this world was.
Sadly, they went with Ginny's idea. Wasn't that hard. People don't expect three teenage girls, who clearly aren't ninjas, to steal. Idiots. When they changed, Torin had on a short black skirt with splits up the sides with leggings underneath, a black shirt, and ninja gloves and sandals. Ginny had long dark green cargo pants, a royal blue shirt with a long, loose, right sleeve and a short left sleeve with fishnet, no shoes (she has some, she just doesn't feel like wearing them), ninja gloves, and a loose belt over her shirt and two belts over her right bicep. Kelsey, being more colorful, had knee high tan shorts, a pink tank top over a black shirt with long sleeves rolled up to her elbows. Again, she also had ninja gloves and shoes. They also found some pouches and filled them with the usual: kunai, shuriken, wire, some paper bombs…all they had to do was not kill themselves. Ha, good luck.
As they walked Ginny noted, "Must be an outpost town. It doesn't have the giant walls like the hidden villages or a building for a kage."
"You're right," Torin said. "Anyway, this place is boring. Can we leave now?" Kelsey agreed with Torin, so the three of them quickly left the village.
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They walked through the forest for an hour before they were bored. Torin sighed then brightened at a question which all of them were, apparently, too stupid to ask. "Think we can use chakra?"
"…wow. We're stupid," Ginny commented. "So, how do we find out?" Kelsey suggested trying to walk up a tree. Simple and didn't require a million handsigns that none of them knew. After a few (-cough- million -cough-) tries they managed to figure out that they did have useable chakra and that they weren't that good at controlling it. Not suckish but probably no better than Naruto. The three girls then chose to jump through the trees like the awesome ninjas they wished they were.
Ginny loved the feeling of going from one tree to the next which didn't last when she didn't use enough chakra and fell short of the next branch. As she fell she planned on landing like ninjas did so that she didn't kill herself, but the moment she touched the ground it crumbled beneath her. She stole a glance down and what went through her head was Spike trap! (I don't know if those exist in that world but they do now.)
She desperately tried to grab on to something, a root, a rock, anything sturdy but everything fell with her. She slammed her hands into the sides of the wall (which hurt like HELL!) trying to slow herself down which worked, except she was already close to the steel spikes. She tried using a foot too but left the other down. This other foot was then suddenly impaled by one of the spikes. Her force had been lessened but the spike went straight through the foot. Doing the, smartest thing to do, she opened her mouth and let loose a very long, very loud, very pained wail.
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Torin and Kelsey saw Ginny fall and they stopped on the branches ready for her to get up and come back up the trees but then they saw a large pit open beneath her. "Shit!" Torin cursed. They quickly jumped down to help when they heard her scream. They looked down the giant hole and saw Ginny, thankfully alive, unthankfully with a spike poking straight through her foot. They tried moving closer but the earth kept crumbling. They looked around for help when Kelsey saw two figures not too far off. Maybe they heard the screaming, hell who wouldn't hear it? And came to help. But as they got closer Torin saw what they were wearing: straw hats and large black cloaks with red clouds on them. One of hunched and the other had blond hair. If the situation wasn't so bad Torin would have thought very evil thoughts.
"Can y'all help?" she called out to them. Torin didn't know if they'd come or not. They were criminals, what would they care about helping some teenage girls? Despite her negative thoughts they changed their course and came over.
"What's wrong, un?" the blond asked (for the record, yes they know who they are but until introduced their names will not be mentioned.) Torin and Kelsey frantically motioned them over to the pit and pointed down. "Our friend got caught. She's still alive but she's hurt." Truthfully, the Akatsuki members didn't seem that interested but they looked anyway. "Damn," the blond cursed. In the pit was a girl. She had brown hair with a hint of a wave to it that came down to her shoulder blades. Her breathes were shallow. He quickly used his AMAZING ninja powers and got close enough that he managed to reach down far enough and grabbed both of her wrists.
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Ginny heard talking above her, but she couldn't care less about it right now. She couldn't' even scream anymore as she felt the hot blood run down her foot. Her breathes were weak and she felt like she was about to fall over dead. Her eyesight was filled with blackness and just before she fainted from the shrieking pain in her foot, she felt something grab hold of her wrists.
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Sadly, that's all I've got right now. Sorry it was boring. Like I said at the beginning, I didn't really think much of what would happen until they got to the forest and Ginny fell into the spike pit.
REVIEW PLEASE! I know my writing style is kind of…not that amazing, so I need you, the readers, to tell me what to fix.
If you think this story sucks tell me why. Don't just say 'It sucks.' I want reasoning for insults, please.
But yeah, this beginning chapter did suck. I know it did. :(
See ya next time, maybe.