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Hello everybody! I have rewritten this chapter. After a handful of people told me it sucked well I decided to repost. I know this isn't the greatest I've written but I need to make it so it didn't change out of the lines of the story I made. Like it or not, this is the chapter. Tell me what you all think.
Disclaimer :
The police would get me if InuYasha I claimed
I'd get thrown in jail, executed and maimed
And although it would be an exciting chase
I own fricking nothing so get out of my face
Everlasting Wishes Chapter 1
The Encounter
Everyday stories are told about amazing people, who do amazing things. The adventures they go on, the power they hold, they lives they lead. These things happen to extraordinary people, with mysterious pasts, and dark secrets.
But this story is not. This story is about a regular girl, doing regular things, having a regular life. Until one day...
A pretty asian girl flipped through her math notebook, bored out of her mind, counting the seconds until the bell would ring. She had just bought a new comic book. Of course she had already read it, and passed it on to her friend Yumi.
Yumi is one of her best friends. A very strange girl, Yumi is, but that didn't stop Koi from liking her. She always seemed to say random things at the most random times. Forever smiling and laughing, without a care in the world, yes that is Yumi. But really she wasn't that different from the crowds of people that walked the halls of the school. Except for her strange fascination with the manga that Koi always bought, and her weird sense of pride about being in band, she was pretty average. Yes, she did have a unique sense of fashion, and questionable hair styles, but she was a good friend.
Koi sneaked a look a look at her friend. She always watched her friend's expressions when she read stuff, because her face was constantly in motion. Gasping in horror or smiling with glee. The new book she had bought was a series she was already familiar with but Yumi was not. It was called InuYasha. She had just got volume 14, which was what Yumi was currently reading.
Yumi's eyes were snapped open and her mouth was hanging open. Koi guessed that she had probably come to the part in the book where Kouga came in. Yumi commented on his handsomeness already since he was on the front cover standing along InuYasha.
Kouga was the leader of the wolf demon tribe. His wolves had attacked a village and then turned on InuYasha and co. To protect his friends InuYasha fought them killing some of them. The remaining wolves then howled for their leader, which is how Kouga came about.
Koi glanced at Yumi again, she was now finished with the book, and her hands were shaking in her lap, the surprised expression still etched across her face. Koi flicked a piece of paper at Yumi, hitting her in the ear. Her expression remained the same, in fact it seemed that she had not even noticed that a wad of paper had hit her at all.
"Hey Yumi, whats wrong with you?" Koi whispered. Yumi slowly turned her face toward Koi and said one word,
"Kouga." And that was the last thing Yumi said for the rest of the period. Koi wondered at her reaction. Maybe Yumi had a bit of a crush on the new character? She certainly seemed to be taken with him. In fact now that she thought about it, Yumi never really had a loving bond with any character. Her reactions were always very expressive but she had never been speechless before. Yumi speechless was like Niagra Falls going dry. Hmmmm I wonder, Koi thought to herself. This was going to be interesting to watch.
Yumi walked in a dazed fog to her next class. She was going to band while Koi parted, heading to chorus. All morning she had been trying to analyze this new character Kouga. How could a warrior be so tough and have such a cocky attitude when he had ran from a fight? Safety precaution and all, yes, that's what she would have done. But someone who could ruthlessly verbally tear down his opponent then turn tail and flee than completely get up in his face again? Whew that was a complicated man. And it didn't hurt that he was drop dead gorgeous.
He had the sexiest pointed ears, and cute little fangs. He had on a brown head band holding his gorgeous, long, raven colored hair back, which was in a high ponytail. He wore gray armor across his chest and brown furry things on his arms, shoulders and legs. To complete his ensemble he wore a brown fur wrap around his waist and hips.
Very much drool-worthy this Kouga was. Yumi daydreamed about him, thinking about what it would be like to meet him. Sometimes she held private conversations in her head about what they would say if they ever met.
Koi teased her mercilessly about her "silly mooning over a comic book character."
Despite what Koi said or what anybody else said, Yumi still focused her time and money on Kouga. She was in love.
