hi this is my first fan fiction i hope you enjoy but please since this is my first time please tell me what i need to improve on thank you! besides Grammar!
My name is Yuri Kuran and i grew up in Georgia. i had long curly brown hair and hazel eyes. i'm actually a vampire but no one knows it except my family and my sister is a vampire too it runs in the blood line. i always had this kinda crush on my friend Julian Sterling and me and a few of my friends were battling it out again on who would eventually go out with him. My friends all got rejected by him. WE all got friend zoned as some might say. But it was that last day of school (at Willie J. Williams middle school) when i finally thought i might have a chance. because as usual he would walk me to my bus stop. so i gave him my phone time he just left... then i kept looking back telling my self look back julian please look back ,but he didn't so i looked at my bus and sighed and was about to go on when i heard him say "Yuri this will probably be the last time i see and talk to you this summer so..." then he picked me and hugged me. i was so shocked by this that i couldn't breath. and when he put me down he just ran or so i thought. then i went back to looking at the bus. sighed and took a deep breath and went on the bus.
As soon as i walk on i was greeted by one of my best friends , Trish, she said "where the hell have you been! i was worried!" then i stated "I thought you would know since you were peeping out the WINDOW the whole time!" Trish said" well SORRY! for worrying about my friend and wanting to know what that was all about!" i finally said surrendering"fine..." i sat down with my sister Yuuki Kuran she had short red hair and hazel blue eyes with freckles. i said excitedly "you have NO idea what just happened!" "julian just PICKED me up and hugged me!" Yuuki says exaggeratedly "oh really?! good for you!" i said sighing "ugh when will you ever understand!"
She said under her breath "probably never!"
-Later the second day of summer...-
julian calls and my dad got onto me about giving our number away but i didn't care... i was just happy julian even called...
I hope you enjoyed it there will be A LOT more chapters maybe 11 and then another book! I don't know what the name of the book will be called! though maybe something along the lines of "A New Beggining!"