I would like to start off saying that this is my first fan fic it's the best I cold do so please R/R.
Disclaimer- I do not own any of the yu yu gang no matter how hard I wish I will never own kurama and I also do not own Cinderella .
Mz.vile : okay every lets settle down please.
(everyone looks up wondering where the voice came from)
yusuke: where the hell did that voice come from
Hiei: how the hell am I supposed to know I was down here with you idiot
Keiko: children could you please shut up so we can figure it out
Hiei: whatever
Mz.vile thank you Keiko now as for you Hiei and Yusuke you will be punished for what you did
Hiei & Yusuke: what did we do
Mz.vile you said hell and you will be punished severely
Hiei :but you just said it yourself
Yusuke: oh yeah she did
Mz.vile: I have already accepted my punishment
Everyone : what!
Mz.vile: I have to stay here all day with y'all
(everyone looks astonished at the fact that their her punishment)
Mz.vile : okay people lets gather round so I can give parts out to every one
Everyone: parts for what
Mz.vile: the play of course why do you think you're here parts go as follows
Yusuke-Cinderella
(what) punishment dear
Hiei-mouse
(Damn you wench) I live to make you hate me
Kuwabara-godmother
(I'm a dude if you haven't noticed) oh sorry godfather (that's better)
Kurama-stepmother
(I am also a male if you haven't noticed) oh sorry I forgot again stepfather (that's much better.
Okay everyone else fill in all the smaller parts. Out of those does anyone need me to announce their parts
Sensui: I do
Mz.vile okay you're a step brother along with seaman okay on with the pl………
Everyone else: we do
Mz.vile okay all of your parts are as follows
Shizuru-queen
Botan-kings assistant
Genkai- conscious (like jiminy cricket)
Koenma-king
Mz.vile: anyone else in which I doubt there is , will be stage hands including you Ryu .
Ryu: come on do I have to
Mz.vile: what was the agreement
Ryu: I do what you say and you wont cause me bodily harm
Mz.vile: good puppy
Ryu: arrrrrrggghhh
Mz.vile: okay now lets begin
Kuwabara: how are we supposed to do that with no scripts
Mz.vile their on your seats if every one where sitting down their wouldn't be a problem
(everyone picks up their scripts)
Act1,scene1
Hiei-wake up Yusuke
Yusuke-I'm tired go away
Hiei- I'm a freakin mouse so wake up before I bite you
Yusuke-ha
(and rolls back over)
(chomp)
Yusuke-oowwwwwwww you bit me
Hiei- I never go back on my word
Yusuke-you could have warned me
Hiei- I did or didn't you hear me
(Mz.vile- anyways)
Yusuke- if you go away for ten minutes ill be up
Hiei-whatever I could careless
(10 minutes later)
Hiei- why do I bother this idiot wouldn't know 10 minutes if it slapped him
Yusuke-snoring
Hiei- he went back to sleep (bite)
Yusuke-ooowwww okay okay I'm up I'm up
Hiei- get down stairs and do your chores before I (flashes teeth)
Yusuke-okay okay
(Yusuke walks down stairs while Hiei continuously washes his mouth out saying blech and saying he'd never do that again he might get poisoned)
Kurama-(yelling) Yusuke, Yusuke we need our break fast or do you expect us to starve
Yusuke- yeah, yeah whatever like you could do some thing if I were to starve you
Mz.vile I heard that
(whatever)
Yusuke- Yusuke clean the dishes make the breakfast wash the terrace (what is a terrace anyways) they can tell me to do that stuff but its not like I ain't gonna break anything they should just let me sleep all day
Hiei- come on you dolt and feed me
Sensui- (yelling) Yusuke bring me my breakfast now
Seaman- (yelling) and don't for get the scones
Kurama- if anything goes wrong with breakfast like last time let's just say don't let anything go wrong
Yusuke- wow great acting kurama
Kurama- thanks I was just channeling hiei
Hiei- grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Mz.vile ahem
(yeah, yeah, yeah)
Yusuke- I'm comin and hiei boss me around like that again and I'll feed you to the cat
Hiei- you wouldn't
Yusuke- try me I never go back on my word
(hiei quickly goes hide under a cup on one of the trays )
Okay everybody what'd you think so far don't be too harsh it's a work in progress if you have any suggestions please review and I will take them into consideration. Thanks