New updated chapter one thanks to my new beta heartxfire going to post chapter eight soon kinda on a video game benge been playing bully for like three days straight goin to be done soon still thinkin of ideas for chapter 8

Bold" Kyuubi
"Italics" Flashback/thoughts
"Underlined italics" Inner Sakura
"Dialogue" Spoken Dialogue
Underlined italics Flashback thinking

"Ring...ring...ring...ring" Naruto reached over and turned off his alarm
clock time to wake up so he crawled out of bed. The first thing he did was
make a bowl of instant ramen for breakfast.
Then he went to the shower. He got out of the shower and dressed in his new
clothes, his outfit consisted of a black shirt with a white swirl a long
jacket similar to the fourth Hokages except this one had lightning on it and
the kanji that spelled the crimson fox on the back. He also got a new pair of
baggy dark blue cargo pants and a new leather kunai holster with a new
shuriken pouch.
He began reading over the scrolls Jaraiya sensei gave him to train with,
there were tons...literally."Oh shit!" Naruto thought grimly, but
hey...what could he do? Naruto continued reading...and reading...and
reading...until it was hm midnight? "God, I'm never going tohat
again! Ah" Naruto looked down at his feet, there were still a lot of scrolls.

"Gah! Well I better put use to what I read" So Naruto headed out locking
his apartment and he set out for the training grounds. Running through town he
ran into Shizune who dragged him to Tsunade's office. "What the hell!?"
Naruto grimaced, couldn't the world give him a break? He wanted to learn
something for once dammit!! "Whoa, did I just think that?" Naruto thought
amazed./\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\
"What do you want baaChan!?" The old woman cleared her throat and then
said "Naruto Uzumaki you're team has fallen apart after Sasuke left" Naruto
clenched his fist at Sasuke's name, the damn emobutt seemed to have it all!
"and Sakura would like to become my apprentice leaving you the only member of
your team, as it so happens rock lee is out for two years for therapy he is
still badly affected by his fight with Gaara and the fight with Kimmimaru just
made it worse". So team Gai is missing a member I am placing you there. That
is all" Tsunade finished calmly.

"Now leave shoo get out of my office" She waved airily. "But! But!
baachan NO! Hear me out, will ya?" Naruto begged. "I said get out gaki!"
Tsunade screamed throwing a sake bottle at him. Naruto quickly ran off. He
decided to go to the training grounds but ran into Sakura along the way.
"Hey Sakurachan!" Naruto grinned cheesily"I heard you are going to become baachan's apprentice is that true?" He
rattled on, unaware that his exteammate was obviously uncomfortable with the
subject at hand. " Dammit Naruto!!" Sakura whacked him over the head.
"Ouch" Naruto winced rubbing his now sore head, girls were seriously
scary! "First off all show lady Tsunade some respect! And second off, yes I
am, you heard right Naruto. I am becoming Tsunadesama's apprentice. I'm
tired of being weak and I'm tired of having you there to protect me, I want to
get stronger on my own it's my fault we lost Sasuke...It's my fault..."
Sakura muttered, as she broke down crying,
Naruto stared helplessly at her "You should never blame yourself when
it's my fault, I almost had him if I hadn't of been so weak I could of
brought him back!!" He smiled sadly, but then grinned, puffing out his
chest.
"I'm going to bring him back! I promise Sakurachan. It's the promise of a
life time!" Naruto exclaimed striking a good guy pose. Naruto stopped and
thought for a minute "no I'm becoming like Gai already! God damn it!! Damn
it!! Damn it all!! Kamisama, I hate you!" Naruto sobbed inwardly, shoujo
tears falling down his cheeks. Then he remembered he was talking to Sakura, he
looked up to see Sakura smiling weakly at him.
"Look for the last time it's not your fault ok?" Naruto muttered
comforting her, "But now I have to go train bye Sakurachan!" He felt a
little bit bad for leaving her, but hey! She was strong enough to do something
for herself for once.
He ran off waving bye, then he finally got to the training grounds. Sakura
thought for a moment
"Naruto never thought of himself he was always looking out for others...
wait!" She stopped her train of thought "no no no no my love belongs to
Sasukekun only!" She convinced herself, then went off for her first day of
training. Her first day of not confessing her undying love to the duckbutt,
since he was now obviously gone./\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\

Naruto arrived at the training grounds only to see Tenten, there he decided
to hide and see what she was doing. He knew Tenten well ever since they were
children her family owned a weapon shop that Naruto visited almost every day
practically drooling over the exotic weapons that was in her shop. Tenten's
father was one of the only vendors in Konoha who would sell him anything at a
normal rate.
The other old farts would just try to overcharge him.
He watched Tenten work on her taijustu. He watched... until he saw how
perfect her curves were. Naruto drooled, damn she looked hot!
Finally after practicing for a while he saw her stop for a break and took her
hair out of the buns she normally kept them. Her hair flowed down her head,
just below her shoulders
Naruto stared. He saw her glisten with sweat, She truly was beautiful. She
dropped the water bottle she was drinking from and turned around whilstcrouching low to go get it. Naruto took in the view for a moment. Then looked
closer to see... God...he was such a pervert!
"Oh my god she's wearing a thong" Naruto thought to himself "So kit you
like this human girl...how do I put it... assets!" Howled Kyuubi, snickering
in laughter. "shut the hell up furball!!" At this the fox silenced,
looking from afar was just as good.
"She's so damn sexy!" Thought Naruto, as she bent over again. Naruto
stopped. "what the hell am I doing!? she's one of my closest
friend's! damn you puberty! Damn you to hell! Naruto mentally cursed
himself.

He stood up and walked towards the training ground. "Well if it isn't
Narutokun! what brings you here?" Tenten asked with a playful smile. "To
practice justu at first but now I get to see your pretty face" he said
jokingly. Tenten hit him on the shoulder playfully.
Naruto laughed, shaking his head. But he inwardly cursed himself, that hurt!
He rubbed his right shoulder sympathetically. "Don't worry Max, we'll
get out alive! I promise!" Naruto cooed, stroking his shoulder once more.
Kyuubi shook his head. How did he get stuck in such an idiot?
He saw Tenten give him a weird look, "EHEHEHEhe...I love cheese?" Naruto
laughed nervously. "Whatever" She laughed, "weirdo!"
"So what kind of jutsu's are in this baby?!" Naruto opened the first
scroll, "Holy shit! This one is the fourth Hokage's lightning god, it's
basically the flash step but this one is a more advanced form!"
"But first, I have to tell you the good news!" He grinned at his friend.
"I just found out from Tsunade wear on the same team now!" Naruto
smirked, "Awesome, huh?"
Tenten thought for a moment, before breaking out into a full smile "since
we're on the same team now, how about a sparing match?"
"Sure but how about a drink first! I'm seriously thirsty" That wasn't
a lie, he mouth was freakin' dry!
"Ok!" Was the response from his female conpanian.
Naruto walked to the vending machine and got two bottle of waters. He handed
one to Tenten. "so how much have Neji and lee worked with you on
taijustu?" asked Naruto casually, taking a sip from his bottle.
"Just the basics" said Tenten. "Lees style is too damn fast and I
can't learn the freaky stuff Neji does since my eyes are only average."
"Hm how about I show you like train you?"
"Sure!" Tenten exclaimed enthusiastically.
"Ok first off..."Naruto showed her different holds and grapples and
didn't stop untill she learned every one. Basically he worked her to death. At
about an hour before sunset Naruto grinned once more, "How about some
sparing?"
"Sure!" But her smile soon turned into a smirk, "But I'm going to kick
your ass" She grinned with passion. "Alright give it your best shot!"Naruto laughed, thinking somehow he was going so going to regret this later.
Naruto looked at the chesire grin blooming on her face. "Oh shit"

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