Well i'm back!
i know that i haven't been the best fanfiction writer in which i start stories and then after one or two chapters stop writing. i assure you this is not because i've lost intrest in the stories no, it's just that real life has been getting in the way.
anyways i hope you like this new story it's been rattling about in my head for a few moths now since i've started to play through all of the gaes on my d.s
? P.O.V
"H-he-y a-are-y-yo-you a-alr-alright?" the words were almost unitelligable under the cackling roar of thunder and steady pitter-pattering of the drizzle that accompanied the dark dank clouds high in the sky.
The roar of thunder blitzed across the night sky which was soon accompanied by a "W-whoa!" from the taller one of two shadowy figures battling the storm in hopes of finding shelter "Wh-wh-whoa! Hey did that startle you?"
A sudden gale of wind blew the shorter of the two figures onto the edge of the cliff were he was teetering on the edge of the cliff and once he saw this the taller of the two rushed towards the other "H-he-hey co-come o-on g-grab on t-o my ha-hand d-don't l-l-let g-go y-you-you'll b-be f-fi-fine j-just d-don't l-let g-go, j-just h-ho-hold on"
A sudden crack of thunder startled the two pokemon and the taller one let go of the smaller pokemon in fright as the flash of lightning obscured his vision and sent him sprawling to the ground and leaving the smaller pokemon to yelp in fright as he fell to the ocean from the cliff smashing his head into the cliff face and losing himself to unconsciousness.
? P.O.V
The whole of treasure town rushed to any availiable place safe from the downpour that suddenly anounced it's arrival with a crackilng boom sending multiple pokemon flailing in shock.i took one look at the townsmon and rushed to the nearest shop that was open, as soon as i entered a flood of townsmon knocked me to the ground and my body was pushed to the back of the shop i hit the wall and i knew no more.
-timeskip-
I wearily opened my eyes to the world with others in the store when a few stray strands of sunlight wormed their way into the store as i shook my head trying to regain my bearings i noticed that there were a lot less people in the store which meant i could leave so i gingerly stepped over the sleeping bodies and slowly made my way to the door without waking anyone up and once i did i rushed over to one of the two most prominint guilds in the entire village or more specifically wigglytuffs i hoped i finally gained enough courage as to actually join.
As i climbed the stairs to the guild i started to lose some of my nerve and by the time i stood on the grate i had lost almost all of it so when i heard the voice of the sentry,
"Footprint detected, footprint detected. Whose footprint? Whose footprint? The footprint is Cyndaquils! The footprint is cyndaquils!" i lost it.
In my haste to get out of the immediate vacinity i failed to notice a floating sphere and a bat hiding behind one of the posts.
? P.O.V
"heh, Koffing that guy must have at least something of valuethat we can sell of to some of the stores in town"
"hoh, hoh! you're right as always zubat!"
"I should be koffing you numbskull! i'm the second in command of the mighty mphhhh!"
"Shhhhh Zubat don't say our team name out loud!"
"I know, i know anyway we should be following the kid right?"
"yeah, hoh hoh ho"
"heh heh heh"
So how did you like it? can you please leave a reveiw on hat i did wrong and what i sort've did alright
anyways thanks for reading