Written for the Freeverse Prompts Challenge on the HPFC. I used the prompts "I hate you, why do I love you". This is my first attempt at freeverse, I hope you like it :)

Please review.


I Hate you

With your smiles

And laughs

When you're with H E R

(not me, never me)

I am here too

Except you don't see me

You never (ever) looked at me

The way you look at H E R

And it hurts

It should Not

I Hate you (hate)

Why do I Love you? (love)