I don't know how this is going to turn out so Ill write a small first chapter thingy and you can review to tell me if I should carry on. Please tell me what you think!
I peered over the cliff edge and saw the angry black water and its jagged teeth waiting for its dinner, me, to drop into its hungry current.
I wasn't sure if this was going to kill me but if I looked like a human, I could die like one, maybe? Of course I knew that Carlisle has tried this when he rebelled against what he was but this was different.
I used my vampire power to change my appearance ; I changed my hair into the bronzish colour Edward has and his emerald human eyes. I don't know why, but I wanted a part of him with me if I did die. I changed my skin into a creamy colour like a humans so no vampire would recognise me if any of them passed. It was unlikely though: there were no vampires left in Forks except me, the unwanted, unloved one. Besides, my scent would probably give me away.
I rocked on my heels, ready to jump and finish my life when a white hand suddenly shot out and grabbed my wrist.
It was a vampire.
I looked up and gasped in surprise. It was Edward
But he didn't know it was me.