The Last King
In this world where evil resides there were the Seven Princes of Hell; Lucifer the demon of pride, Beelzebub the demon of envy, Sathanus the demon of wrath, Abaddon the demon of destruction, Mammon the demon of greed, Belphegor the demon of seduction, and Asmodeus the demon of lust. These Seven Princes of Hell ruled over earth and hell. The Seven Princes caused havoc and chaos on earth. In this time many men died. It was a time of great distress for all people throughout earth. Nations were destroyed and leader fell. The stench of death could be smelled everywhere. So many people died that there was not enough men to bury the dead. The demons created this great evil to corrupt the earth. Lucifer caused pride to come to men and for the men to try to protect their pride no matter the cost. Generals lead armies to die because of their pride. Beelzebub made one nation envious of another and so there were many wars during this time of havoc and chaos. Sathanus caused tiny incidents to grow into great hate. Abaddon caused ocean waves larger than hole cities to come down on the coasts and for volcanoes to erupt and pour lava down on villages. The demon Mammon made Kings and Noblemen greedy and try to take more than what was owed. Belphegor used women to seduce kings so that he might cause more destruction in this world consumed by hate. Asmodeus the demon of lust caused men to lust after Queens of other countries. This caused pain and fear to enter the earth once again. With all of this happening on God's beloved earth and all the cries of pain he heard he acted to save his creation. God bestowed a blessing upon a man that would one day destroy the demons. The man will be known as The Last King.
This is my first story that I have ever written and I would appreciate it if you could give me tips and help me improve my work. This is just a sample of what the story will be based off of. I am looking for feedback to determine if I should continue this story or start something else. I will really appreciate anything that you all have to say, Thanks.