this is my first Inuyasha fic. so please be kind!!
here it goes: Behind The Golden Veil
By: Kyoko super girl
Prologue
There was a legend about a land that was invisible, the Centre. There was a wonderful castle that is shinning of a strange golden light. Some says that was the light of the God. Some says it was creepy and it was the evil it self casts on it, want the humans go there and takes their bodies. But the truth is that this golden light was produce by a powerful being that was hiding in the dark… who was it? No one knows…
A girl was running in a dark forest. She has golden hair with silver strips put in a high ponytail. Even she is still a child, her beauty was incomparable. She was running very fast, her pale cream skin is cover with sweat. She is wearing a whit top with all over golden sign, a short dress that comes to her knees. 'I'm going to find you again, little sister! Don't worry! Even that is the last thing I do!' she promises to herself. 'and I will not let that bastard steal you away from me!' with that promise, she runs in the deepest forest…
i know it is short but please review!!
kyoko super girl