Finally got to the challenge! Here it goes. Anything is acceptable review wise. This is a two shot. H.P.T.H is Harry Potter third person. You can figure out the rest.
Disclaimer: I don't own the beginning of the plot and I am a young author, not J.K. Rowling.
H.P.T.P
They were sitting behind Hagrid's pumpkins, trying not to be seen, when Harry saw him. Peter Pettigrew. The man who'd betrayed Harry's mum and dad I'm going to get him! he thought. He got up and started running.
H.G.T.P
"Harry-" Hermione cried, but he was already at Hagrid's door. "Such and idiot," she muttered to herself. Then she figured she might as well try to fix the mess he'd make, so she went after him.
H.P.T.P
When Harry got to Hagrid's door he flung open the door screaming, "Pettigrew!". Then he found himself facing three scared wizards with their wands pointing at Harry's chest, and an angry Hagrid with his umbrella pointed at Harry's head. Harry froze instantly. "Who are you?" past Harry demanded. "I...uh...well," then he saw Pettigrew. "Pettigrew!" he shouted. "Who are you, and what do you want?!" past Harry asked again, this time louder. "I, well...I'm...future you," Harry said. Past Harry and Ron got shocked/suspicious faces, but past Hermione and Hagrid just looked surprised
"Harry, you just broke wizarding law!"past Hermione said. "How do we know he isn't Sirius Black using Polyjuice Potion?" asked Hagrid. "Because all enchantment goes away once you use the Time Turner. It's simple why; even though you're from the future, you're still in the past before the enchantment was cast," Hermione replied. "Why are you here Harry- the future one," Hagrid asked. "It's a long story," said a voice behind Harry.
Harry turned around. "Hermione?" he asked in surprise. "Yeah, I can't believe you didn't make a mess out of things, I've been standing here for a while," Hermione said, "shall we tell them?". "As soon as the give us Pettigrew," Harry replied. When he said that, Pettigrew started squirming fiercely. "Scabbers, stop!" exclaimed Ron.
Harry started forward and grabbed Pettigrew. "Show yourself Peter. Your old friend is waiting, just in case," When Harry said that, he felt the rat get heavier and realized it was transforming. "What's going on?" past Harry asked. "Sirius is innocent, Peter Pettigrew is the one who betrayed our mum and dad," Harry replied. By that time, Pettigrew had finished transforming.
All of a sudden Hagrid did something weird. He drew a bunch of silvery stuff from Pettigrew's head. Pettigrew collapsed. "What did you do to him?" both Hermiones asked at once. "Nothin' jus' took away his memories, on'y, you ain't nothin' withou' yer memories," Hagrid replied. "He'll still be alive, he jus' won' do nothin'," he added.
"Where did his memories go? asked Harry. Hagrid held up a big potion bottle full of the stuff. "Now we can look at em' any time we want, see what he's seen, with Dumbledore's pensieve," said Hagrid. "Well, glad he's trapped, but what do we do now?" Harry asked.
Mini cliff hanger. If I have time I'll post the Epilogue in a few minutes. Hope you enjoyed!