The Official 2nd Rewrite of Out Of The Blue: Be prepared for sudden meetings…
A new beginning
A new chapter of my life
Started the day
When I thought
It could be my last
My eyes were wide shut but I hadn't given up
Just thought I'd be walking the world alone
~Delta Goodrem – Out Of The Blue
One Piece © Oda
Mikari © Myself
Chapter 1:
Prologue: Coincidental meetings much? (Sorry I couldn't help it. XD)
Mikari POV
So, there I was, being sucked into a raging whirlpool with only one way to go – IN.
The small rowboat I was occupying being knocked around with the strong currents, helpless to escape. I knew it wasn't long before I met my doom. Me and my rowboat, Steve. Yes, I just named my rowboat Steve. 'Why not call it Bob?' you say. Haha, I have no clue as to why.
But yes, my death was nearing by the second. Usually any normal female would be frozen stiff, saying their prayers, having their life flash before their eyes or just outright screaming. You'd probably go with thinking of everything you've ever regretted in life. Most normal people do. Me? Who said I was normal?
"I'M FREEEEE FALLLLINGGGG!" I had the biggest grin on my face, my arms waving around over my head. Yes, I was having the time of my life. I'm not afraid of death. HA! What's he gonna do, kill me? And could someone please define 'normal' for me. I don't understand the meaning of the word.
Truth be told, it was my own fault that I was being sucked into the ocean's pit. If only I had said 'No'.
Flashback
"Hey, girl. Come here."
I paused in staring at the ships sail. Marines. Why did I choose a marine ship? Not that there's anything wrong with them. It's just that I feel very wary around them, like they'll pounce on you for one mistake.
Okay, maybe it's because they tend to give people a hard time. Not that I'm complaining. I am working on this ship to pay for the ride.
"Oi, I'm talking to you."
I broke from my thoughts and looked at the Marine. He wasn't highly ranked, but he sure acted like he was. Two other marine's stood by his side looking smug. But it doesn't matter what rank they are, I still have to obey orders from anyone above me. Technically speaking, this meant everyone on the ship – including the cook and cleaner.
"Yes sir?" I answered so he wouldn't become more irritated. He smirked down at me, seeing as he was a foot taller.
"I want you to take a single lifeboat and start rowing east. Captain's orders." He said smirking even wider.
I peered around him in search for the captain. She was nowhere in sight. Weird. She seemed the type to do things herself not ask the lowers to do it for her. The captain never told me who she was, just said to show respect and be a good 'Lil pipsqueak'. Her voice was pretty boom-y too.
I glanced around once more, taking note of the snickers in my direction. Ignoring them, I complied with the supposed order. "Of course, sir."
Calming, I walked over to one of the lifeboats, hopped in and lowered myself into the ocean. It was after I started rowing did I hear laughter roaring from the marine ship's deck.
I sighed. Marines are confusing.
Present
Never, ever again will I do that - Ever.
You know, I wasn't the only one on the deathbed – Not including my katana, bag and Steve – There was a ship on the other side of the whirlpool. It looked like they had been through enough with all those repairs. They were pretty obvious to spot out. The sides, front, head piece and mast were all patched up. It had these big white wings on both sides too.
But something tells me that they planned entering this whirlpool. Nah, who would do that? I didn't plan my extreme dead either. My heart went out to the crew, wishing they would survive no matter what.
No one deserves to die, you know. Not even those with the blackest of hearts. Plus a murderer's death doesn't make up for those he killed. Not that that crew are murderers. Well I hope they aren't.
It's a shame they hadn't noticed me. I would've waved otherwise or given them a thumb's up. Is it a crime to think positive? Not that I've been told~
The whirlpool then decided to take its leave, now bored with killing its latest victims. And just when I was starting to enjoy myself! Oh well, there's always next time Mikari, always next time. But where did Whirly go? Yes, I just named the whirlpool Whirly. It suits him.
I looked around me. Calm green sea, clear blue skies, ship with wings, ship made of logs- Wait, I didn't name the first ship. He can be Bob. The other random ship doesn't deserve one, it hasn't said hello yet. Bob doesn't count because he was busy.
At that moment, Whirly rudely sneezed. Talk about perfect timing. After one giant explosion-like sound, gallons of water went shooting into the sky with enough momentum that it sent Steve and Bob flying up with it. It was like a one way ticket to heaven, the water acting as its own runway to the sky above.
The other ship had disappeared in the blast, but maybe this falling driftwood has something to do with it. A few pieces decided to slap me in the face as revenge. They failed in their murder attempt, leaving not a scratch.
You see, I've eaten what you would call a Devil's Fruit. In fact, it's called the Strength-Strength Fruit. From what I've found out over the years, it boosts the user's stamina, endurance, physical strength and even mental strength! It's pretty neat, if I say so myself, but it can be dangerous.
You gotta be real careful how you use it. A tad bit too much strength into a high five can lead to a broken hand. Lots of hands end up broken, I tell ya. And you're forever breaking things like doors, walls and even cups! It takes a lot of work to keep my strength in line. I just never seem to get it right. One day Mikari, one day.
So during my thought rant I noticed Steve wasn't going to hold up for much longer. Sooner than I thought (Just as I mentioned 'wasn't') Steve chickened out.
I (being inside Steve) went down with him. Doesn't a captain go down with his ship? Not this one, cause I'm rebel! But once I'd hit the water, I'd drown. I'm still a hammer, surviving the fall or not.
I closed my eyes, loving how the wind ran through my hair. I was flying- No, falling with style! I smirked as I did summersaults, content with meeting my second doom.
What I didn't expect was the sea to be so close, or for it to be dry and solid.
THUNK! I opened my eyes to find myself face to face with a…. Ram-Chicken? What a turn of events.
Yes, I rethought what I was doing. Yes Mikari isn't as crazy…. So far. And YES I killed off Noddy. But this time I think (doubt it) that I'll get this story right.
Fact: I have a very limited vocabulary.
Most Important: How was this chapter in your opinion? I'm not very educated in writing and I'm very lazy. So if I made it too dull OR I made any mistakes – Please say so, in a nice way if possible.
Thank you very much for reading. I'll post another chapter one day. XD
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I'll post a full picture link on my profile too..
Take a guess on who the other chick is. (If you've read both the original and first rewrite you should get it) ;)
Take care! :D