Summery: this is my first story so go easy on me. It's about a ninja that comes to the hidden leaf village and now Naruto and Sasuke have a challenge in the way of the ninja and of dating.
The message
Chapter 1
A stranger comes
This story starts in the hidden leaf village in the fire country a leaf ninja has travelled from a far country and is making his way to Hokaga tower but his journey is interrupted by two anbu ninjas they stop him at the door "halt what is your purpose here"
"I need to speak to the Hokaga" said the travelling ninja
"Well you just can't walk in off the street and see the Hokaga"
"I have a massage for the Hokaga and if I have to I will go through you" the ninja said drawing his sword from the sheath on his back
"Listen kid before you make a big mistake tell us your name"
"I'm-"
He is cut off by an orange blur flying by
"Naruto you get back here" one of the Anbu shout as they started to chase him leaving the traveller alone.
Well that was stupid of them both, racing off to get him and leaving the entrance unprotected the traveller though while walking into the tower. He begins to clime the stares that seem to go on for ever, he moves slowly making his way up the steep stairs keeping an eye open for the still absent anbu officers he couldn't help but wonder what was that thing that got in here anyway his line of thought was abruptly cut off when he bumped into a woman carrying a pile of paper work
"I'm sorry about that" the woman said while bending down to pick up the paper work that was now scattered everywhere.
"No it was my fault let me help you"
"Thank you what's your name? Are you new to the village?" the woman asked
"My name is Sean Bronnor what's yours"
"I'm Sakura and I better be off with this paper work for the Hokaga"
Sean passes over the paper work that he had picked up and continued on his way up the stares to until he reached two big doors and knocked on one of them.
"Who's there"
Sean enters the room and bows
"I am Sean Bronnor and I have a massage from your sister village"
He stands up and heads to the desk he places two scrolls in front of the woman sitting there
Wow the Hokaga is amazing she is the most beautiful and the sexist women I've ever encountered he thinks to him self as the Hokaga reads the scrolls and looks at the man standing before her
"Do you know what you have been carrying all this time?"
"No but I know it's important"
"What makes you say that?"
"I've been attacked so many times I've lost count"
"well then I will tell you, when our village was attack by the sound and sand ninjas your village was as well and when the battle was over this village sent a letter to your Hokaga asking for ninjas and this scroll says "the ninja that stands before you is all we can spare" so we will have to find you some place to live"
"WHAT, I AM TO STAY IN THIS VILLAGE"
This guy reminds me of Naruto thought the Hokaga with a smile
"Hi granny Hokaga you better get some new guards because I got in here easier that any time before" called a new arrival as he burst in through the doors
"Yes and you interrupted a meeting" the Hokaga replied sternly
"Sorry about that who is he anyway?"
"He is Sean Bronnor from another leaf village"
"Theirs more than one village"
"Yes and he will be staying with us for awhile"
Just then the two Anbu guards appeared
"Naruto come here" one of the Anbu's yelled
"Hay thats the kid from the door better get him as well" the other said as he began charging towards Sean.
Oh great thought Sean as he quickly made a few hand signs
"Fire stile burning fist jutsu" Sean shouted.
I've never seen that jutsu before Naruto thought to himself as the anbu continue to charge at both of the boys.
The first through a kunine at Sean but he easily doges it.
Sean then struck him in the face a hand that now seemed to be made of burning red flame making his mask break and burn
"That's enough, you two return to your posts and guard the door now" the Hokaga commanded in an angry and firm voice
"Yes lady Hokaga" the two guards said humbly all but trembling as they left
"Now lets find you so where to stay" she said kindly turning to Sean with a smile.
Ok that's my first chapter up so I want lots of reviews to help me decide what happens next and what you think of this chapter please, please, please R and R.
Lander over and out